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Goodbye, sir. We'll miss you, even if some of us will cling on to the hope that you'll be back.
I kinda thought Celestia would get exposed but apparently Karma Houdini means that she is to remain uncaught.... which disappoints me.
List of things to bot do in Equestria.
1. Go mad with UNLIMITED POWER!
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2. make sunnybuns upset
Goodbye, Zam. Stop bye and say hello sometimes.
Hey if you want to give an alt ending (or more if you feel that spark again) then I would welcome it. Either way I am glad that you have essentially finished this story, it was a nice read and it really needed a conclusion. Thanks for coming back to finish it, and good luck in your future writings. You have a talent and a developed skill, exercise it!
So this is it then. Your last story update for this website. You are moving onto greener pastures and I wish you the best of luck out there, I hoped that one day that this wouldn't happen and that you would keep on writing but I am sad to see that isn't the case. God speed Zam, god speed.
Sad to hear you are gonna stop writing. I actually liked your stuff. That said, I feel this.. ending was a cop out.
I like this ending. It's not entirely happy, but at least Tobias finally got a break.
Congrats mate you finished yet another masterpiece
Best of luck in life bub and thanks for all the stories
Thanks for your time here on the website, Zama. Sad to see you stop writing, but I suppose our brains have their limits.
And I'm sorry for not being able to repay you for some of the advice you've given me. Visit us sometimes, alright? Maybe then I'll be able to repay ya.
Well at least we get closure from one of your stories. I do wished this wasn't goodbye, though I'm confident you'll be back in the future(just don't have a clue when)
good luck with whatever the hell keeps ya busy mate, wether a girl or a job. come and see us sometime will ya? either way it's been a fun ride, tthanks for the reading pleasure and thanks for the quality.
But he is still inmortal right? That ought to catch up to him anyday now. Still, it is good to see that you took a bit out of your time to finish this story Zam, thank you.
Happy to find some closure with this story. Sorry to see you go. I wouldn't say no to an alternate ending down the line FYI.
And to reply to your post on your page; yeah the show doesn't hold my attention anymore. The characters are now relearning everything or getting dumber for the sake of the plot which pretty much kills my enjoyment of most stories.
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Alternate Chappy on the way my friend. Going to keep going while the writing spark is still alive
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The ending in my opinion felt rushed, but, thank you for the read.
I hope to see you around in another time. Godspeed my friend.
Goodbye!!!!
here's a song from an old movie
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I don't get the rushed bit, but I hope you enjoyed the story anyhow. Thank you for the comment
I'm glad to see this coming to a close, and I hope you have a good many days from here on.
Celestia had this comming, i can't however help but feel a little sorry for her, she must be beyond devestated at this point, but if you lie, poison and manipulate you special someone, well heartbreak is right around the corner.
I wonder if say a couple months later luna manage to begin asking celestia questions of why a certian human disappered resulting celestia to get a eye opener moment which she confessed and attempts to fix the damage best as possible which said human sends a letter anonymously to celestia that he is making a new life to help ease her guilt abit
Awesome final story and endings.
This just further cements my love for Chrysalis.
I'm going to view this ending as the true one for me ok I enjoyed but I simply can't read this anymore because if I do I'll probably cry or something ok I know this is a probably an alternate ending but for my sake in my mind and heart I'm viewing this a the true ending https://tenor.co/tt9Q.gif
Dang Zam. The last fic you'll write? It hurts so much. But thanks. Thanks for the stories, thanks for the fun, thanks for everything.
I hope you're happy, wherever you are.
Idk. Persoanlly I think Tobias could have anoided having to run away from Celestia.
I think he should have stayed with Celestia and over time used her love to take over Equstria and become ruler.
My heart.
This reminds me of the episode of David Tenant's run in Doctor Who with the French thief...