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I really can't wait to see how things turn out. I know Toby's still got some fight left in 'im.
...Right?
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Yea! Fuckin stick it in me!
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Sorry what?
You're well thought out and wonderful stories. Please continue to delicately place them inside my brain.
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Kay!
Hah! Victory for the sun!
I was routing for yeah there at the end, Tia.
I'll take my down votes with only slight dignity.
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Don't give up, Toby!
I'm hoping we get an alt chapter where he escapes or that as the final day either way I'm cool with it
if i was in his place i would have berserker raged so hard...
5988108 Just because their is fucked up shit in this fandom doesn't make it manly, or any less different from social norms. Their's a dark side to everything.
Toby needs to kick Tia's ass
NEVER GIVE UP! NEVER SURRENDER! Fight on Tobias!
5989488 Well excuse me for thinking that ponies doesn't automatically mean wuss.
Are you the reason people think of 'bronies' as the stereotype? Because i envision them as being normal human beings with the same normal capacity for violence and imagination as the rest of the bloody human race.
5989625 I never said bronys weren't normal productive members of society. But I was stating what we do is not indeed a social norm. But I don't care, isn't that why i'm here just as you? Like I said everything has a dark side. That doesn't mean what we do is normal. At least until the social norms change.
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Wellp thanks for derailing the argument i guess. If you would like to converse more about that particular topic then feel free to post on my user page, i'm usually a decent guy and will rarely insult you unless you really are being a moron, but the original topic concerning the amount of violence and what is and is not appropriate has been lost ergo i do not feel that we should clog the author's comment boxes anymore
I really want Toby to win somehow. Regardless I can't wait to see how it ends
I guess there's one chapter left. If Toby suffered that much back home it does raise the question on why he wanted to go back so badly and why he got so furious he got when he missed his chance?
5989839 man i also want a good ending for tobias
But my logic say that there will be none
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Perhaps she's so determined to be right that she only saw the bad...just maybe, you know
5990306 This is a valid point. Sure there might have been bad times but there must have been some good
to. No persons life is all good or all bad and i can clearly see that Tia only saw the bad. I hope that Toby breaks free from this nightmare otherwise this whole story will leave me feeling sad and depressed. Nice job Zam.
That mare.....wow, i honestly don't know if i should cheer her on or not, it's true that she will Always look after and protect him, no question about that, but his lfe will be in a Cage, a golden Cage yes but still a Cage.
Celestia brings me the creeps...
Someone needs to put a celestia head on this guy and then he'll be perfect for this story.
I've practically been screaming at the monitor
"Fight! fight back! do something! don't give up you son of a bitch!"
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No, no, Zam, I know what you're doin'
You're tryin' to trick me into sidin' with her...WELL, IT WON'T WORK!
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damn this chapter is awesome. nothing is better then kidnap with happy ending
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If you don't mind my asking, why exactly are you rooting for Celestia? I'm curious.
6018973 I'm not quite sure myself. In the original are human friend won. Yes him and Tia got back together but he made his point, and I enjoyed it. However with this story zam flushed It out. From the minute she poisoned him I knew what her motives where. She wanted to prove she wasn't selfish( ironically being super selfish in that edvaure), by giving up her life to help him in every way possible. Logically she's cray, but zam ponies are super emotional and proned to kidnapping. As crazy as her scheme was it was relatable. I understand and can sympathize with Tia. she loves him, and when a zam Tia loves someone she will do ANYTHING to keep it.
I'm note quite sure when I hoped over to the sun's side or why. I just want Tia to win. Tia needs to win for once!
6019023 i wouldn't say Toby won. Actually in all if not most of Zam's stories the mares win in a way. In the light hearted one he is still smothered by "love" and is unable to push away Celestia. In all of Zam's stories the protagonists are unable to keep away or actually turn to hate their lover. Of course it due to them being Alicorns but still that is a bit of a scary situation. A "utopic romance" where your every thought and action is controlled or linked to another is not what i would call a relationship.
It is why i sometimes think Cadence's "love" spell really creeps me out because fights happen in relationships and the fact she can just make creatures ignore that and just love is some sort of mind control.
6027690 Toby won by proving a point. Tia was selfish and he left her for it, shattered her world view by simply saying no in the process.
When will the next installment come out?
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Soon, I promise
Just having a busy bout of time, should be free to write, write, write very soon.
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Alright can't wait though all your stories are great.
lol 444 likes xD
6130451 don't worry, you will your two digit dislike, three digit if you are lucky
I totally understand her POV but all she had to put in her diary was the flow of time is different and his world was not the same as it was when he left, then bam could have avoided the whole thing... But then you wouldn't get this gem of a story.
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Just for you bby