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Shit's about to go down
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If I were him I'd ask Celestia to test all the food she brings me first to see if she'd prove she hasn't added more poison to it.
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She did eat a piece remember.
Although that's not to say it wasn't placed in other food
How are you doing this to me?
Celestia poisoned him, took him against his will and manipulated events to have him solely in her care. Basically she's a bitch in this story, right?
Then why oh why do I want her to WIN?! I should hate her in this fic, I should be routing for Tobias to escape somehow and never be found. But the way she fawns over him and how I can literally FEEL the love she obviously has in abundance for him.
God damn it, I don't even know why I want her to win Tobias's heart back. Is it just me, or does anyone else feel the same way?
5030384 I blame the original. It was written so well that I really want it to work out happily because these two are great together (under most circumstances)
I just hope that in the end the human wins and Celestia pays. Also my mom had the same issue last year after they found and operated on her brain tumor. Had to do everything for her and I had to see her cry at not being able to help herself, was the first time i saw my mom cry like that. I think thats why i want Celestia to suffer for doing this to him.
Welp! Five more "wonderful" days to come
5030318 Only with a royal flush.
Well that was uncomfortable, but it could have been much worse. After that experience, did Celestia finally break Toby? To know there are still 5 days left, I really do feel sorry for him. At this point I don't see anything that shows him being able to fight back at all.(At least Chris was able to from time to time.)
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Not broken, just shaken, unsure. Five day's to go yet...
He's slowly breaking...
Christ, feeling useless or like a burden is one of my greater fears... holy fuck I feel for Toby this chapter.
im going to throw out two words "stalk-home syndrome"
I would already be broke at this point so I don't want to know what the next 5 days will be like O_O
5030384 *slowly raises hand* Though I tend to root for the villains in this type of story. I must just be really into human x royalty relationships.
I see Celestia's game now she is treating Tobias as a new-born foal to weaken his mind so he will go back to her. That is some serious mind bucking. I hope Tobias has a strong mind and spirit. If he gives into the mind bucking I am going to cry I want him to be able to resist and be able to come out of this ordeal unscathed as possible. If he goes back to Celestia I want it to be his choice not because she mind bucked him into depending on her.
I have a stupid question. Why haven't Luna or Chrissy try to find him and figure out what's going on? I mean they must of heard of him getting poison and being taken care of by Celestia. Surely they would probably try and get answers sooner or later.
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Celestia's convincing...
5031085 Oh yeah, forgot she that she's a master in bullshitting to other people, especially in politics.
And that last bit hit to close to home for a lot of us I think. Hated that feeling.
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Feeling useless? Yeah, I know that feel.
When I came out of surgery I couldn't sit down at all, let alone use the blasted toilet. I had to be helped all the time, and the rest I was forced to spend trapped in my bed.
I kinda used that personal experience in regards to this chapter in particular, and probably the rest until Tobias starts to move again.
Tell me, what did you like about this chapter the most?
5031261 the way you portred celly. You some how manipulated me into supporting her. How I don't know, but you did it. She seems so caring... As if she truly believes her own lies. It's kinda scary. I was hoping my Queen would come to the rescue but as you mentioned she convinced Luna and Chrissy not to meddle. The fact that she convinced Chrissy who can littley see emotions not to meddle is incredible. However careful zam you're about to hit 5 chapters.
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What's wrong with hitting five chappy's? I've got five more to go yet...and maybe an epilogue
5031331 10 chapters.. Possibly 11. That'll be ya longest yet I believe, well be for the Chrissy chronicle was redone. It's a bit crazy from you zam. Lucky I like crazy.
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Geeez Celestia enough is enough! you have enough issues that Sigmund Freud could write five books about!!
I would kill myself if I was Tobias.............. I really would.
5031388 You are probably not gonna give a fuck, but is it bad that I haven't updated my story in seven months?
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Meh, I didn't update To Run From The Sun from Jan to July
I feel violated just reading this chapter.
Aw, damn. Just reminded me of my old friend, Tyson. He was paralyzed from the neck down, and i'd go over to visit him whenever his mom wanted to go out on her lonesome. Basically meant i'd have to take of him, and that included the bathroom.
Managed to live longer than what doctors had predicted, but he couldn't escape death forever.
RIP Tyson. You were a chill dude.
Heh I like how the four stories about the two sisters are complete opposites. In the normal version luna gives chase and celestia lets it be. In the what if version celestia is the chaser and luna let's it be
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Why do I imagine Celestia's bathtub having a waterfall like in the MLP comics like this:
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I hope celestia gets what she deserves the swine must pay dearly good story though keep it up i want more
Ah Celestia he is scared of you! You crazy bi...
-Door explodes-
Pissed off Celestia: No one calls me a bitch!
Me:Ahhhhhhhh!
Start thinking heavy metal at her! I'm sure she'd appreciate that
For some reason this story reminds me of this song, cause celestia is faking that she's being an asshole, while telling him that he still loves her.
All in all, quite entertaining.
Isn't other peoples pain something to enjoy? Though my popcorn is stale...
damn this was actually a sad chapter. it is something very sad to not be able to do simple things you used to so easily.
welp dam i feel sorry for him oh hey zamairica hows it goin remember me no im on your xbox 360 friend list story good in a creepy way
Man, if something like this happens to me, or end up in like Tobias's situation, I would probably end up being nothing more than a shell. No words, no emotions...just nothing.
Of course at the same time, I'd stick by her side like a puppet willingly, but ignore everything else around.
I'm sure you understand where I am going with this.
Ouch.........just....ouch.
Someone get Bronzer! We need him to finish to free our fellow human.
Talk about a mind fook.
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Bronzer?
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I will have her soul
Nothing to be ashamed of man, i would cry like a bitch if someone had to have me use the bathroom.