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You did it!
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I did!
6446799 Can't wait to see what else you got in store.
I can't wait till the big finale!
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You magnificent bastard.
I LOVE YOU
Ugh the suspense is killing me! I hope it'll last...
The suspense!!!!!!
Time to smack some b*tches. *cracks knuckles*
Brony on!
She was brilliant, and I trusted her. But she lied to me, she twisted and tortured me. Manipulated me for her own purposes, and for what? For this? *Lifts up an old photo of Tobias and Celestia together* This... shadow?
This story is fenominal you had me reading it slow as I could because i didn't want to miss a thing and I never wanted the chapter to end
Derpy will save the day!
Tis not fare. While I sympathize with Tia I must support Chrissy. Do what you gotta do Chrissy.
Dangit! From bad to worse! Chrysalis knows who wronged her dear friend....ooooh things are gonna get messy.
yeeessss....Its happening
Ok so Chrysalis gets one last Zamairiac hurrah! I don't mind if it's Richard or Tobias, but I want Chrysalis to kick the living shit out of Celestia! In both stories she either lost or never had her human to enjoy, and it's finally time to kick Celestia's royal flank! I've been waiting for this chapter since the end of Don't Judge a Bug by Her Cover, so it's been a long time coming.
Story ending?
Well, here's to one final chapter, Zamairiac!
Whoa hold up a sec...
Final story !? What is this madness !?
i wonder what will happen next does it turn out that luna knew what celestia did a set a special plan to fix things which would result any mind altering that was done tobais be undone and luna set some dreams on celestia which it slowly makes her regrets the actions she caused which then when she couldn't take it any more she goes to fix her mistake only learn that tobais knew the full truth and was angry at celestia again which then she admit's that it was all her fault and that she will allow tobais to have everything it was before she did all this even if possible find a way to send him back to his world and let him choose on staying in equestria or go back to the human world which you'll make a two way type ends like one where tobais returns to the human world and celestia moves on and the other type ending involves him staying in equestria and he would only set celestia as a friend which she would accept it and make sure to regain all his trust which then slowly they get to be a couple again or he gets to be dating someone else which result of him being married and celestia gets to be the godmother of the child they will get
"Oh, and sorry for the wait. Please enjoy my final story"
Is this really your final story?
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Yes
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So you're not trolling us this is your last story and that's it you are going to stop writing stories forever
I love your stories you are the only anther that I've actually read all of your stories!!!!!
I know I took that quote from Red vs Blue but I just figured that it was something He would say in front of Chrysalis.
Here, I have a project for you. It would be cool if these stories had a massive crossover. just some thing to think over. Also WORK FASTER!!!! I NEED MY FIX!!!!
6450057 It would be more torturous to keep her alive, but limit her use of magic to never find Tobias again, in my opinion.
I'm thinking something along the lines of "Killing you would be going too easy on you. Banishing you to somewhere in Equestria has a possibility of you returning and hurting Tobias more. Ah, I know! TO THE MOON!"
This would also fall to the responsibility of the elements of Harmony, which would publicly defame her "good name" and her "children" (the citizens of Equestria) would then hate her as well (Could you imagine what either option (killing v. imprisonment by Twilight's doing) would do to Twilight though?). Plus, while she is imprisoned on the moon, Twilight could find a way to undo ritual thing that was done to him previously in the story.
I fucking hate this
Well this has been a wild ride so far. I hope that you finish this story.
This whole thing reminds me of an abusive relationship, at least of sorts. On one hand you have the immense amount of love that Celestia has for Tobias, and that he still has for her. Yet on the other hand she let her fear get the better of her, and ended up causing him great harm both physical and mental, and him feeling humiliated. The best outcome really seems to be if he could somehow just have his memories wiped from reading her diary entry onwards, and try to continue on as normal. However, I'm not seeing much in the ways of a happy ending here so far; but all things considered I am hoping for Celestia to win. Perhaps she would eventually recover from her mind apparently snapping, and things could go back to normal. Perhaps there can be true understanding, and even forgiveness...on both sides.
I must say that the characterization...the agonizing characterization...has been so spot on for what you have been trying to do. It really pulls me in and shows me this torment of emotion going on that I find to be such a joy to read. I just don't know what else to say frankly; I picked this story up and haven't put it down since. Until I finished what there was at least.
I also noticed that you said that this is going to be your final story, and some old comments on this page confirming it. That saddens me because you have cornered the market on these human x pony princess stories with the twist of showcasing the darker side to love. The possessiveness, the manipulation, the obsessiveness, and the sheer power that these demigods have...it makes them really quite the tales to read, and all the better that you write really well too. It helps to add some spice to the pairings that I love so much.
Ah...I always seem to be late to the party on these things...finding such great stories that have fantastic authors, only to discover that their interest seems to be waning I guess. I swear this has happened over a dozen times, and not just on this website. Well still, I am thankful that you have written what you had, and I look forward to reading and commenting on many of your other works that I haven't gotten to yet as well.