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amazing chapter once again zamairiac
And i wonder why a good bit of your stories end up in my fav.
Wait, is she going to...
Well shit.
Mr Stockholm seems to be settling in rather nicely, and good ol' Celestia seems to almost have Tobias wrapped around her hoof.
Though in all seriousness it isn't hard to see why. It's the simple act of all she is doing, caring for him and showing how much she loves him. Knocking his pride down and then picking it up again is very clever of her. And that 'choice' she gave him before was sheer genius. To let him believe he had a choice so as to show she trusts him, cares for him, knowing all the while that he'd have little choice but to pick her in the end.
I really like the way you're writing Celestia in this fic. She's perfectly manipulative and dark, so much so that I could easily believe this is what she could be like behind closed doors.
Killing his pride, whittling down his trust issues and doing it all with a smile.
Your best serious fic so far in my opinion. Keep it up, and I do hope you write that interlude you were talking about yesterday
tobias and spagetthi have a very close relationship
Prepare yourself Tobias, 'cause shit's about to go down. (In more ways than one)
Also...
If you're hinting at what I think you are then Tobias might like his cereal the next morning. Freshly squeezed Celly Moo-Moo.
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I was thinking more along the lines of drinking straight from the bottle, but that works too
5054864 Hmmm... kinky. I love it!
Do continue with this story.
*puts on a monocle* This is quite the story.
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What do you think my fellow readers?
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I wouldn't mind being wrapped around Celestia's hoof
Oh no, please don't
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And at this point I'd be looking for the first opportunity to kill myself in the fastest way possible... Both for my own sake, and so she'd have less of a chance of reviving me.
...Also, I kinda blame Luna for this. She should know Celestia better than anyone, and about alicorn mating instincts. Plus, she and Chrysalis helped get him the house he had before this, but really if anything she should have told him to get the heck outta dodge, or at the very least warned him that Celestia might go psycho on him.
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Luna's been gone for a long time remember, she has no idea what Celestia is like now.
And there aren't really any alicorn mating instincts, just a really clingy female.
It happens on occasion
Milk straight form the source? That's vary...
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"I'd rather be fucking Luna."
Damn, wouldn't that smart Celestia?
I fear that he may slowly have Stockholm syndrome.
5055093 in three days ?
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From what I've read it can happen in even less than a week, a number of days give or take one or two.
It differs from person to person.
5055244 I said slowly, not completely. There's a big difference, beside there is hope that he might be free.
plane
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Cheers
this was an intense chapter I fear Tobias is starting to break down and Celestia is well aware of this I hope he regains himself in the next chapter
Go on...?
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For fuck's sake, I really hope that milk comment wasn't referring to what I think it was.
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Time to think once more on another great story concept by Mr. Zamariac.
The story sets off with a great concept from the drugging to the "taking in" of the main character Toby.
It then shows many signs of a crazy mare obsessing and showing her undying love for her "mate".
Love the concept.. now its time to get real.
The character seems to be being forced into loving this mare when he shows a wall of defense but 3 days ago. In your other stories when being turned into apart of Luna it was years for him.. You need to show how far celestia will go, how far she will go into her dark side to "reclaim him" or I fear we won't make day 5 before he is back to loving celestia let alone 6 or 7.
Your welcome for "constructive criticism".
Sincerely- Think Real.
I what to hate him but I can't it like your paralysis but you just had Celestia being to a god orgasm so it like am sorry but fuck you and yes godgasm is a thing it would you orgasm is hard you the face of god and he's like
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Hmmm Milk you say... Im guessing straight from the source given your aptitude for interesting clop
Thats what I like to see Zam.
Shouldn't the we's be I's?
Looks like another crack in Tobias's wall of his mind is slowing breaking down.
I can figure out the whole milk part....but are implying that Celestia was or is?
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Was or is what?
You know what I'm talking about.(unless I don't know what you mean and my head went somewhere else.) Although if I'm right about this, then this would explain everything about Celestia's behavior.
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Msg me with what you think it is and I'll...answer
Well, as humiliating it is to be fed, he should be happy that Celestia so far haven't gotten the idea to give him some milk from her own tap.
I would say more fucked up? How could this get more fucked up? Then I remember who's typing this story.
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For the love of God, don't give him anymore ideas!
I hope he starts counting down from one thousand in intervals of seven.
I can feel the humiliation... It huurrrtttssss
he getting some serious Stockholm syndrome (i think i spelled it right) if once i got the use of my arms back i would of looked for something sharp and once she left me i would start pokin my self so once she got back and saw all the blood she would see what she brought me to do (and yes i'm insane)
5200210 Blast Had enough. That will make her sit up and take notice.
6195162 i'd do the same.
Tobias should just think about the following songs:
Just replace the word God with Celestia, and everyone with Celestia.
but just the intro maybe?
Just replace the word islands with castle!
Just replace the Holocaust references with references to what he's going through!
Just replace the word Angels with Celestia!
Or, if he wanted to go with something completely unexpected, but much more likely to get the response that he's looking for, he could always think of these songs:
This one is a guaranteed tear jerker.
Just replace the name Batman with Batmare!