• Published 7th Sep 2014
  • 1,925 Views, 5 Comments

After the Dizitron - Sparky Brony



Rainbow Dash and Lightning Dust unwind after a long first day at the Wonderbolt Academy

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Comments ( 5 )

You did great work, my friend.

When I saw the title I misread it and thought this was going to be about a giant Derpy-bot terrorizing Ponyville. I like clop and will read this later, but I'm still disappointed. :derpytongue2:

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I love it. That may have to become a real a story now. Muwahaha!

Great work! We need more LightningDash stories often.

It wasn't bad honestly, could use a brush up with editing though but both mares seem just....so out of character which is really not a good thing but it's your first clop so I shall let it slide my friend.

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