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Oh Charles, you better be careful or the princesses might want to make a few more alicorns. I don't think it's every day they have the opportunity. Fursteak, I expect much hilarity to ensue, and maybe put something in to make that mature tag really stand out I know I'm terrible. But really I've seen worse fics then this with teen tags. I'm curious why you have a mature tag on this story. Are you planning something?
On a spelling note, you have a lot of I's that are not capitalized. The words I'm and I'd and I'll should all be capitalized. You also have a lot of contractions that are missing apostrophes. There were some spelling errors too but I'm to lazy at the moment to go through and list them, I already did twice today with other stories.
FIRST!!!!!! HAHAHA. AMAZING STORY BY THE WAY! KEEP IT COMING!!
thanks for the input guys. i will edit as time permits. then re-read it to double check, cant guarantee it'll e 100% but oh well lol
FUS RO DAH!
561435 i cant wait for the next update, this one was just so damn amazing
oooooh my~
YAYMORE
this story made me laugh me ass off
that luckey bastard gets all the girls
i want more Aloe and Lotus. by the way amazing story i want to read more
damn dis gon be gud keep going
Charlie the... Alicorn?
Ever considered getting a editor...if you don't have gotten one already...but then again there'll be a lot of work going through all of the chapters but then again it may be worth it good luck.
PS; still so many chapter to read
"ARGH I'M ON FIRE"
>raaaaaapetastic!! so now that my worst fears have been realized (ALICORN OC!!!) and Molestia and Lu-....Luna-....Lunacy(I dunno whatever if you have a rapetactic luna name then congratulations you're more creative than me) I now hate this story!<......JUST KIDDING! loving this so far, liking the whole "every mare is sexually hunting him" for whatever reason, I'd say its because of the lack of males but meh you're story.
also 180 chapters to go WHAT!!! I sincerely hope the quality doesn't start deteriorating cause I came for the rating and stayed for the quality of the story
Rarity to Celestia and Luna...
Shit just got real. Charles, on one hand your stalked by every female pony in ponyville, on the other your royally fucked, literally. I can't wait to see how this turns out. I will most likely beat my record and stay up past 2 reading this.
It's authors like you that really make my day.
Hint hint, been thinking about copying and past ring your story into word document so it'll be printable.
Don't worry, it's not like I'm going to publish it. I'm a book addictee and this would make A marvelous addition to my already overflowing book case.
Onto the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Celly! Celly! Celly! Celly!
Celly x charles
True, Twilight. Humans are not used to having an easy life. Earth isn't exactly kind to us, even without fighting each other, it still tries its hardest to kill us or, failing that, make us as miserable as possible every chance it gets. Now, he has suddenly been thrown into a world where everything from food to work literally falls right into anyone's lap. It's like playing the game of life with all the cheats enabled when your brain and instincts are hardwired to play it on insanity difficulty with hardcore mode active.
BOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
Either blank or a question mark. The ability to be good at whatever we set our minds to is the only reason humans manage to survive on our world.
I sense a disturbance in the force... it feels as if "sh*t is gonna go down" so to speak...
3883198 FUS-RO-DAH!!!!!!
hooo shit just got real
Molestia
Excrement made physical contact with a hydro-electric powered oscillating air current distribution device.
XD love this story so far. I laughed so hard when he said "Fire?....... AAAAAHHHH IM ON FIRE!?" :P
3024201 charles x 1969 oldsmobile.
561435 Ya know... normally I don't like Gary Stu type characters. But you've actually made this one rather interesting and amusing. I'm getting a harem vibe from this now. Also I don't usually like the whole Human turned into a Pony bit, so I hope it doesn't become a perm thing and more like he can do it at will and does it often. If it does become perm... well i've read a few like that, that have managed to keep my interest through a good story so as long as this one does I won't complain.
So, this is what the sport called "shark jumping" looks like? I don't see the problem...
Seriously? Too OP. Please nerf.
i dont like where this is going
God Damn it Spike! YOU KNEW!! AND DIDNT GIVE A WARNING!!!!
Wait....I don't get what Twi meant by saying "it's an Alicorn thing" or whatev it was. If she meant the whole living mane and tail then why doesn't Cadence have one? Or Twilight when she becomes an Alicorn?
Delete paragraph.
I thought Twilight put all the books away?
Exactly! WTF Dude, Twins!!!!!