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At first she was
Then she was
And now shes all
well that sounds fun.
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HA
And I wonder how.....
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Tybut I thought rarities present was jems...
Big Mac is going to be peeved
And for the 10th time, rarity makes love with midnight
And for my present!!! Another chapter!!!!!! Onwards !!!!
2250750 the gems are for spike's gift and as supplies for rarity's outfits that she is making
That last indirect author's note/comment... THAT is a quality ending. NEXT CHAPTER!!!
657481 lol
SO THATS HOW PINKIE DOES IT
The writing is getting better, but the character of Charlie-horse here is still too much at times. Plus the conflicts feel forced and fleeting.
Is it just me or they both forgot two crucial details? As in, Shy is literally shy and Canterlot is a large city, and Big Mac is an Apple. For him fancy food in tiny portions would be a torture. Shy's shy nature may work out for them both considering he'll be the only familiar face around, so she likely cling to him. But beside that, this have a potential to be a miserable experience for both.
And how the hell Rarity get to know all that?! Is she spying on him or something?