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good chaapter, although you're kinda ripping off My Second Life.
Playa!
Much better in terms of pacing, this is the proper way to do things. If you ever have trouble with something that seems rushed in your story, refer back to this part.
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At least he isn't having threesome three months after coming there.
569251 i agree, especially at certain points, like when he's ranting at himself and rarity's listening.
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both of u just shut up and enjoy the story
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This guys is fucking Neal Patrick Harris and Chuck Norris combined!
I like how this is the way we find out about the pheonix flameboom. Gives an alternate perspective, now to continue the chapter.
Once again I say Ah hem hem
MIDNIGHT BE GETTIN ALL DA BITCHES
Twi, why did you say that?? You were there when he proposed you stupid mare!!!!
Really Midnight? You've just proposed to Rarity, and now you're sleeping on a cloud with yet another mare??
I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!
No way rainbow could withstand the desire, and flutters? Only a matter of time before he visited,
Rarity and Celestia have new competition.
This storyline is getting a little "cloudy", the next chapter should clear things up
As much as I enjoy this story, the main character is a HUGE Gary-Stu archetype.
hhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeemmmmmmmmmm
2529169 Yeah... but it would gnaw at the back of our minds if we stop reading.
he can get layed every day of the week: monday=twilight tuesday=AJ wensday= RD thursday= rarity friday= fluttershy saterday=pinkypie sunday= celiestia
PLAYA !!!!!!!!!!!!
4295266 what about Luna?
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I doubt pinkie would be in the list...so replace pinkie with Luna, then it's all fixed
I like this story not to op good reason for staying in pony form
So, he can do any magic just cause and universe figuratively bends over itself to present him in the best light to mane 6 while Tia literally did the first moment she could. And he lay down words thick every time he tells something to make sure universe's shenanigans work out.
That's borderline Gary Stu at this point. He's not obnoxious, but come on!
And that moment with Fluttershy at the end is just beyond awkward.
I have no idea why I don't dislike this story yet. Somehow it isn't bad.