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I feel honored
previous chapter "It had also a minimum charge for three hours in place." this chapter "he had scheduled the Cathedral for four hours, as it was the minimum he could reserve it for." i cal hax
NICE!!
Loving the rakes! XD Applebloom is the new troll master!!!
Also, I laugh everytime from the part of Applejack asking midnight to turn into her!
"Do me then."
"I thought I already did!"
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PRANKS BY CHANGING INTO PRINCESS CELESTIA INCOMING
797350
D'OH! we shall see, yeeeeeesssss we shall see
797468
Looking forward to it! And I can tell that due to me re-reading the whole story from chapter 1, all the way up to here again! XD
the rake bit was ridiculous!!!
Rarity....check. Multiple times.
RD.....check.
AJ......check.
Next.....Pinke
Then....Twilight
No Fluttershy though.
And that's my session on this one done for the day. I bid you good night, my fellow bronies.
Meh not much more conflict
Some allusion to some pranks
I understand your heading towards the whole music thing I just think he is playing a bit much
But the story is already written so it doesn't matter
All that's left is tooooooooo
READ MOOOOAAAAASRRRRRRR
The sinister rake, a truly evil opponent.
I have been really enjoying this story so far but one thing is really annoying me cause it kinda puts me off when i run into it, and i will give an example or two below:
"HAHAHAHAAAAAAA* *Deep breath* BWAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAAAAHAAAAHAAAAA"
I think it reads better like this:
"HAHAHAHAAAAAAA* Midnight took a deep breath before he burst out laughing again "BWAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAAAAHAAAAHAAAAA"
or another example
*snort*
"Fine we're even."
into this:
she snorted,
"Fine we're even."
I dunno whether it is just me but just thought i would put it out there.
i want a sex sean with AJ
797277 Your profile pic is perfect for when Sweetie sees the kissing!
AJ make up for in dexterity? I think you mean stamina...or vitality even. O.o
Side note: reading up through this story again to get midnights attitude and ways for my multiverse chapter, that I should be getting to soon. I think it'll be good, so be ready for it.
You will be seeing it before I publish it to make sure it's green lighted by you, want you to like it and all since its YOUR work involved.