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YAY HE DIDNT DIE
577389
lol to many peeps didnt like the idea of him dieing, especially the way he died. So the story CONTINUES!!!!!!
WOOT
577392ya you still have stuff you can expand on plus poison joke doesn't mean harm on it's victims and plants don't work that way.............................in order for your character to have it in his lungs he would have had to smoked the plant or forced it in there.
577392 I was one of them but didnt know if you would change it so just stayed like Fluttershy quiet
577436 Its his magical Equestria so pj can do anythin it could come alive like the weed from Scary Movie then try to smoke Midnight or it could turn you into a box of rainbow farting cats
Woo a continuation
alternate ending? I like this ending better, I see a cliffhanger? is there going to be a next chapter? so many questions!
577436 Inhaling Pollen cause the stronger effects. When inhaled it goes directly into the bloodstream. While in the bloodstream it attached to the brain causing Midnights most intense thoughts/actions to become reversed. So instead of being calm, kind, and caring. He became evil, callous, and cruel. It essentially reversed his normal traits that were his strongest.
577448
I actually just finished the next chapter. I will be adding onto this story as time goes on. Currently I have no plans to end the story but you never know.
577598
since my inbox is full asking me to post the next chapter I am going to post it early. I had intended to post it Saturday but since you guys are so hungry for more ill let you have it. Know this though. Tuesdays update will be on tuesday since your getting and early Saturday addition.
love story so far keep it up good sir
The story is ok, but it feels way to rushed. And the fact that its very hard to visualize anything going on, made it kind of boring. I may not write stories, but I have read enough to know when it is rushed.
Uh-oh!! It's time for a Alicon-sized
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Much better ending :)
Definately? Dont you mean Definitely
Soooo.......will the foal still be named Midnight Star? What bout the contrasting wings?