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i wonder what applejack's present will be..... damn now I'm curious...
also Y U NO CAUSE CHAOS ???? chaos is fun
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Yes chaos is fun. But to do it properly. One must plan for the future :wink wink:
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Oh and by the way. One present in particular will be......... Very special. I'll just let you dwell on what that means heheheeeeee
643499 damn u and ur mystic hints
This is one of the better recent chapter in my opinion. Not that any of them have been bad but I feel a few of them had a quality decline compared to the norm. Keep this up and your golden
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At times I felt the need to get the story out of my head because I needed to do something but felt I would forget about what I wanted to write. It happens sometimes. However I have a seriously awesome finale chapter in mind. Don't worry it won't be soon and in order to build up to it will take some serious effort and hard core writing. I intend to make my finale chapter by far the best fimfiction will have to offer. And I'm not rushing it. I have a ton of ideas all written down and on my mp3 player (voice notes). I may have the final arch out in oh say 40 chapters? Not sure just yet
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK MY FRIEND
Stupid meatbag, you forgot to get important data on what one called Celestia desires to recieve for that event.
I suggest you get to it immidiatly and get the one called Celestia and the one called Luna presents as soon as possible, at that means now.
Unless you want to meet face to face with some IBMs, that is.
Logging off.
-Sixteen, The Binary Scourge
P.S. Otherwise the story is good and you shall continue writing or you will be vaporized.
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sir you have confused me please elaborate
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oh don't worry, they will be a part of the gift giving in a future chapter as well.
643543 i will be happy with almost any ending (that i can think of) aslong as it doesnt involve another retarded piosen joke ending.....
seriously me and my freinds went nuts at that ending . and we all fistpumped the air when u decided to continue it
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I am happy to hear that and I hereby prolong your meatbag club card by another month, I hope you will use that month of being alive well.
Shutting down.
-Sixteen, The Binary Scourge
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understandable. I should have made it more clear that only direct contact with magic would spoil the ingredients. Such as levitating the items with magic. Indirect magic that does not directly touch them such as the user casting a spell on something at a distance will not affect them. However casting a levitation spell on the bags holding the items would also affect them. no worries a bout the ghost insturments playing lol
Good chapter
While I'm not a fan of over-long details, the kind and amount of details you put in this one is the right kind and amount. In literature, you NEED to have a good balance of details and pacing. Details are to describe the environment and atmosphere of the setting(s) so that you can pull in the readers and give them the feel that they're a part of the book's world. Pacing is so that you don't get carried away in the details because if you do, then you're going to bore the readers.
Like I said, you did a good amount of balance here, so don't feel that just because you have 4000 words or so in a chapter. In fact, I like it when a chapter has a word count of 2000 - 6000, unless you're condensing multiple chapters into one.
He teleported while the stuff was with him. Hopefully that won't count as using magic on them.
Yeah, you didn't want to do that.......
We have more conflict!!!
Heh, anyone else notice that it never said that he took off the mistletoe?
Ooooo we have action between Celestia and midnight again.
Onto next chapter.
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He was told to not use magic ON them, that means direct magic. Levitation is an example of direct magic...teleportation effects the pony using it and objects in their touch is passively brought along with them. So his magic didn't influence the items themselves.
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeah I don’t think that will be enough.
Did he realize yet that he teleported with that, so used magic on all the ingredients?
Ah, yes, independent Ponyville Princessdom of Equestrian Empire. Awaiting princess to princess it.