Changed my name cus, I found out that I love ravens. And I got a new main OC
All her life she has been hideing it, danger. All her life she had protected her Family and friends in Secret. even her cutie mark is a Secret. even the element of honesty has a secret. only those who know, never got back. now she is forced to show.
-!looking for an second editor!
-Edit: Roybgp - thx... So far
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Well, that's quite a bit better, grammar and spelling wise! Very well done! I shall be following this one!
I don't think that AJ's any too happy to find that Rainbow followed her and saw what happened. So I can't wait for the next chapter wait to see what happens next!
-hasn't read yet but ignoring the thumbs down because knows your stories are awesome- I LOVE APPLEDASH BUT DONT HAVE TIME TO READ IT YET! READ IT LATER AND TELL YOU THE FEED!
5018256 I alwasys ignore haters
5019455 yep I was totally right this story is awesome!!! and I have to say I LOVE!!! appledash I'm glad you chose to put that in the story
5019677 I put it there the last second...
outside of the paragraphs not being separated, and the transitions not being separated and defined, this wasn't bad.
5019720 I still like it!
...what? why is she answering a different question?
5024599 logic
lol this is so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! now I'm even more excited for the next chapter and lol rd thinks another life is hot XD
5025436 You know Rainbow
... As long as it is Applejack
RD is vona think its hot
5025443 XD LOL
This is a well written story that deserves a like and fave
5024599 As the editor, I bow my head in shame. That was my bad.
5035642 When do You think You will be dine with the next chapter?
5035655 Uhh...Tomorrow, for sure. I can't tonight because well, right now, I'm working. Sorry
yay an update! and an awesome one too!!
I liked this chapter!!! 
5121718 I'm sorry its not edited...
5121952 Yeah, I was gonna say that you need an editor or proofreader, as there's quite a few spelling mistakes.
Other than that, it's a great chapter and I really enjoyed it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
5122587 I just started to Get a little tierd of waiting... But I may look for noe more editor, and maybe Get things back early!
5122626 Yeah, I can identify with that. I think that we all get tired of waiting to post chapter here at times.
(Says the gal who hasn't posted even one chapter on the site yet.
)
And that's good to know.
Good luck!
5122717 thanks I need it
5122725 You're very welcome.
5121952 It's alright as long as it's a good story I can read through almost anything
Excellent story.
7/10 Moustaches and a pinkie!
YAY another chapter!!! lol now it's time for her friends to come and help her!! or she kicks butt by herself :P
5612692 he want's to get Aj pregnant beacause he likes her, and if he does she have to stop hunting the darkness. So Equestria is almost defendless against it. Also Aj can't give up on a baby, she can't not care for a baby.
Why it says is canceled???? Why???? Also if you are definitive cancelling can I know the end and mayor plot?????