King Sombra has a daughter, nopony knew. All but Princess Celestia were clueless, she knows who it is and she keeps an eye on her, to make sure she doesn't make the same mistake as her father did. Unknown to the daughter she have powers no pony should ever have, she is an earth pony and her name is Applejack. And it's time to take the place of her father.
Yes!!! Yay!!! I've been waiting for this since the cover art came out!!!!!!
well this was a bit too fast paced felt weird they would just say yeah you had a nightmare and you aren't kin
still awesome story idea and well written give thumb up
5965756 I will make it better in the next chapters. I will slow the pase, promise!
Must... nitpick... summary...
Edit: Interesting idea, I might give it a read but please Edit this... It wounds me.
This is gonna be good
Are you still writing this story cause its one heck of an awesome tale if you ask me. I like your creativity
6295690 yes I am, I'm just not home right now...
So, I just randomly saw this story and read the description, and I thought, "Applejack, I am your father."
6344176 hehehehe.... Hmmm.... Didn't think of that the first time...
okay, i'm confused. in the last chapter celestia knew everything, yet in this one she seems to have had no idea about what happened last chapter?
When are you going to continue this because I love the story and I want to read the end of it.
Is it dead?
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Applejack: Noooooooo! It can't be! It's impossible!