Applejack's family was out of town, when something turned Applejack into a foal. Luckly for her, Fluttershy was around and wanted to help. So while she is a foal, she is under Fluttershy's control.
Ps: Fluttercord marriage.
Changed my name cus, I found out that I love ravens. And I got a new main OC
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Dis Gon B Gud
5965523 what?
5965526 Its a gif reference. Cute story sir and or madam
Looks interesting. A bit rushed but I will give a final judge after the next chapter(-s)
this is adorable!!!!!!! Can't wait for more!!
Me: Poor choice of words! *drops Applejack*
As said already, the story's a bit rushed but I'll keep an eye on it.
As long as this doesn't go the route of Pattycakes with Applejack in place of Rainbow Dash, I'm okay with this.
Yay! Adorable! With discord, this is sure to be more interesting!
Discord! This is going to be amazing
6100625 not anytime soon I guess...
Don't worry, It's not that bad. I have seen (and written) worse.
Fluttershy is a bit creepy here
It's not terrible you just need to get a proofreader
it's a good start my advice would be to finish the story, take a break, then rewrite a new and improved/longer chapter version (if needed)
6311911 don't worry, I'm losing inspiration to this story...
Plz continue this story is good
Interesting little start to the story, I'll say
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