• Member Since 13th Jun, 2014
  • offline last seen Oct 1st, 2016

RavenFire2908


Changed my name cus, I found out that I love ravens. And I got a new main OC

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Applejack's family was out of town, when something turned Applejack into a foal. Luckly for her, Fluttershy was around and wanted to help. So while she is a foal, she is under Fluttershy's control.

Ps: Fluttercord marriage.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 18 )

5965526 Its a gif reference. Cute story sir and or madam

Looks interesting. A bit rushed but I will give a final judge after the next chapter(-s)

this is adorable!!!!!!! Can't wait for more!!

Fluttershy! please let me down!

Me: Poor choice of words! *drops Applejack*

As said already, the story's a bit rushed but I'll keep an eye on it.

As long as this doesn't go the route of Pattycakes with Applejack in place of Rainbow Dash, I'm okay with this.

Yay! Adorable! With discord, this is sure to be more interesting!

Discord! This is going to be amazing :pinkiehappy:

Don't worry, It's not that bad. I have seen (and written) worse.

Fluttershy is a bit creepy here

It's not terrible you just need to get a proofreader

it's a good start my advice would be to finish the story, take a break, then rewrite a new and improved/longer chapter version (if needed)

6311911 don't worry, I'm losing inspiration to this story...

Interesting little start to the story, I'll say

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