• Published 31st Jul 2014
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A Mourning Heart - Professor Tacitus



A new pony comes to Ponyville and everypony is excited to meet him. The problem is, he's not interested in making friends. Why is such a nice pony so against having friends? The answer: he's in pain. Will the girl's help take the pain

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Epilogue

The day couldn’t have been more perfect. Clouds of all different shapes decorated the sky and the sun shone warmly. It was the perfect day for picnic with friends.

On a hill overlooking Sweet Apple Acres, Tacitus sat on a large red blanket with his new friends. Friends. That word meant much more to him now than it did just hours ago.

Rainbow Dash was lying on her back with sunglasses on, Pinkie was scarfing down various different pastries, and Rarity was sipping from a cup of tea while Spike provided her with shade using a large tree leaf. The Cutie Mark Crusaders were running around playing with Discord, who had transformed himself into a ball and was bouncing all over the place. Applejack, Fluttershy, and Twilight were all lying on their stomachs on the blanket along with Tacitus.

“So you went to Celestia’s School for Gifted Unicorns? Why didn’t I ever see you?” Twilight asked looking at Tacitus.

“If I recall, neither of us were very interested in meeting new ponies at the time,” Tacitus responded. “We might have run into each other and not even noticed.”

Rainbow spoke without looking at them. “You two eggheads probably had your noses buried in a textbook and walked right past each other.”

Twilight shot her a glare, but Tacitus just chuckled. He found himself being able to laugh and smile more than he had in months since coming here. The experience he’d had the previous night with these wonderful ponies had been, to him, a blessing. Now, they were spending the day with him, just so they could all get to know each other better.

Tacitus had spent almost an hour listening to all of them speak. They told of their adventures, their likes and dislikes, their childhoods, and just who they were as ponies, or dragons in Spike’s case. They had insisted that he speak first, but he wanted to hear them. He enjoyed listening to them.

Apple Bloom and her friends ran up to Tacitus, Discord having transformed back to his normal self, although he was green from so much bouncing.

“Hey Mr. Tacitus, can ya tell us how ya got yer cutie mark?”

The rest of the gathered friends all expressed their interest in hearing this story and looked to Tacitus to begin.

Tacitus cleared his throat before speaking. “I was a little colt when my parents and I went on vacation to Las Pegasus. We did this kind of stuff all the time, take family trips to get away from the city and see new things.

Unfortunately, my dad was never very good with directions. We got lost and ended up in the San Palomino Desert. As my parents were arguing over the map, my horn started to glow. I had no idea what was happening, but I felt the need to start walking.

As I walked, my horn glowed brighter and brighter. I turned around to see what would happen, and my horn got dimmer. It seemed my horn was acting like a compass.

I don’t know how long or how far I walked, but eventually I found a small rock sticking out of the ground. My horn was so bright it was almost blinding when I got to it. I had no idea why my horn was leading me to a rock, but I tried to pick it up. It wouldn’t budge; it was like it was buried. So, I began to try to dig the rock out.

As I kept digging, the rock seemed to go on forever. But it soon began to take shape into something much more than just a rock. When I finally finished digging, I saw that I had just dug up a life-sized statue of a pony wearing a strange headdress, which I knew marked it as an artifact from the Equyption civilization.

I was ecstatic. I heard my parents calling my name and I called back to tell them where I was and told them to come see what I had found. They saw the statue and they were dumbfounded. I was bouncing around like an idiot telling them about what it was and my theories on who built it and how it ended up here.

My parents were smiling and laughing at me, and I asked what was so funny. My mom just pointed at me and said ‘Look at your flank.’ I looked and I saw the Eye of Horsus on my flank. I was excited before, now I was practically hysterical. It turns out my magic was able to detect the presence of historical artifacts if they are close enough. My parents were so proud, and we were even able to get some ponies from the Canterlot History Museum to come and look at it.

It was my first discovery that led to me getting my cutie mark, and I knew I wanted to dedicate my life to learning and discovering history.”

Everypony listened intently as he told his story and were genuinely interested as he told it. Tacitus smiled at the fond memory, especially the memory of his parents.

While once Tacitus had tried desperately to not think of his parents, and when he did he was reduced to tears, he now thought of them gladly and with a smile on his face. Before, he had only remembered them as they were at the end, suffering in the hospital where the only sounds they made were groans of pain. His friends made him realize that he should be remembering how they lived, not how they died.

He now embraced the memories of the good lives his parents lived. The joyous times they shared and the caring love they gave him overshadowing the sadness of their passing. He still missed them, and he was still sad that they were gone, but he had friends now. Friends who cared for him and comforted him, who loved him like his parents did. And he knew his parents were still there, watching over him.

A thought struck him, he’d almost forgotten. “Pinkie, I have something for you.”

He reached into the basket he had with him and pulled out a beautifully decorated cupcake with yellow icing and an orange wedge on top.

“I made this to apologize for my behavior the other day. I hope you can forgive me.” He handed her the cupcake.

As she took it, Pinkie looked at him with that goofy smile that he loved to see her with.

“You don’t need apologize. I already forgave you silly.”

Tacitus smiled back at her. “Even still, I feel bad and I want to make amends. I hope you like it.”

Pinkie ate the cupcake in one bite and a blank look took over her face. Her entire body rumbled like there was an earthquake going on, and then she shot into the air and exploded like a firecracker. She then floated back down slowly like a feather.

“Wowee! That was the most delicious, delightful, delectable, delovely cupcake I’ve ever had!”

Tacitus laughed louder than he had on a while. “It’s my mother’s recipe. I made one for everypony.”

Tacitus passed out the cupcakes so that eveypony had one, and gave Pinkie an extra one. As Tacitus watched them enjoying the gift he baked them, he thought about how lucky he was to have found ponies like them. The nagging thought was still in the back of his mind though. What if something happens to them? What if you lose them?

He ignored these thoughts. He wouldn’t let that fear rule over him. Not anymore. He would love his friends and be happy with the time he had with them, however long or short it may be.

After a long day of talking, eating, and playing (another thing Tacitus had not done in a while but loved every moment of), Tacitus and the others packed up to head back home. It was by far one of the best days Tacitus had ever had.

His friends walked with him all the way back to his home before they left to go back to their own homes. They waved and said goodbye to him as they left.

No, they didn’t say goodbye. They said, until tomorrow. He would see them tomorrow; they would be with him again. The thought of seeing them again caused his heart to swell with a happiness he didn’t think he was capable of feeling anymore.

Because of them he could say, for the first time in a long time, that he was happy. No nightmares came that night, or ever again.

Author's Note:

Well, that's the end of my first story. I hope you all enjoyed it! I have at least one more story for Tacitus that I am working on, so expect that fairly soon. It's going to be epic!

Comments ( 32 )

This is Tacitus right now.

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Joking aside, this was a good read. Interested to see where the sequel goes.

4849994 :rainbowlaugh: I'm laughing at this harder than I think I should. Thank you for your comments and I'm glad that I was able to bring some enjoyment to you and to others with this story. I hope you enjoy the other stories I have planned.:moustache:

4850008 You're welcome. :twilightsmile:

Just a small little note, make sure to reclassify your story as Complete, just so people know that it's over.

4850020 :derpytongue2:Totally slipped my mind. I fixed it.

'sniff' Such a lovely ending. Great work
and I can't wait for the sequel!

4875697 The sequel will be an adventure. I don't want to give away too much, but it will involve traveling to what was the Roamen Empire and dealing with something that came from there. More than that, I really can't say. You'll just have to wait to find out.:raritywink:

Your writing is really good, and I love your historic pony place names!

Comment posted by DrWhooves007 deleted Sep 21st, 2014

5068823 Hoofshepsut was not the name of the palace, it was the name of the pharaoh that lived in that palace. It's the same as saying the castle of King Arthur or something like that. I changed it from Rome to Roam so it fits in better with the MLP world.

5068912 :rainbowderp: I honestly don't know how to respond to that. Is there a point to this or are you just trolling?

5069125 Ouch. What's with the hate?

5215751 lol Man, Link is just hating on me it seems.:rainbowlaugh:

5215761 just know that red here is different. And If you read the four swords manga that would make sense

5215871 I know what you mean, I just find it funny that both of you are Link.

5217594 well that Link isn't allowed to talk

5310730 There are very few spoilers. I didn't reveal anything that happened aside from what the villain did in the last episode of the season.
As far as the town hall/mayor visit goes, I really didn't know of any real estate agencies in Ponyville, so I wanted to go to buildings that were already confirmed in the show. Plus, I wanted to give the Mayor some responsibility, out of a feeling that the new princess in town had taken most of it (season 4)
Without revealing later chapters, Tacitus was desperate to just get away, so he really didn't think ahead of whether or not there would actually be a house for sale.
I won't lie, the fully furnished house may have been lazy on my part.
The phenomenon of them noticing his behavior is touched on later, but my justification was that his face and his eyes just seem so miserable that its hard not to notice.
Your mention of Cranky Doodle will be mentioned and hopefully explained to your satisfaction in the following chapter, which I hope will justify why they won't give up on him.
I will say that at this point, Tacitus is definitely not unique in the world of OCs. I hope that reading more of this story will change your mind on that, but if not, I understand. The sequel, at least in my opinion, does a much better job of making Tacitus a more unique and likable character.
Thank you for your honesty and thank you again for taking the time to review this. You have made excellent points and criticisms, and don't hesitate to call me out on the mistakes I've made. Once this story has been completely reviewed, will it be on your blog? Just curious. Anyway, keep it up! :twilightsmile:

Finished reading the first chapter. On account of what I've seen, I'm not recommending this story for the Olympus Library.

Don't lose hope: the others may still want you in.

I wrote a review here: I had a long day today, so I was probably a lot more snarky than usual when I wrote it. I apologize in advance.

If you ever rework the story in the directions I've hinted at there, be sure to let me know and I'll give it another look, though. I feel that there's a fair bit of potential lost here.

5583994 Oh! You wound me deeply! My pride! Tis destroyed!

Nah, I'm just pulling your leg. :rainbowlaugh: I know this story is full of flaws and you made very legitimate points on what I did wrong and what could be improved, but also gave me credit on what I did right. I hate to use this excuse, but it was my first story and as a novice I made quite a few mistakes. Criticism such as your has helped become a better writer, and I think my work in my second/current story reflects that (although I fear I still tend to give a bit too much detail). From a combination of both not wanting to change an established story and general laziness, I won't be reworking the story. I'll just keep pushing forward with more stories and keep the mistakes so that I can learn from them. I hope you'll give the rest of the story a read and that it will change your opinion somewhat. but if not I understand. Thank you for your honesty. I hope I can put it to good use. :twilightsmile:

5584075 I'm glad. I have a bit of a soft spot for stories that are geared towards feels, and I got the impression that's what this story was trying to do. If it had zero potential, I wouldn't have had such a hard time finding flaws with it.

If you ever go back to this story, rework stuff, be sure to let me know. Like I said, I'm more than happy to give it a second look if stuff changes.

This deserves 9/10 I like it.

6222136 thank you. I appreciate that:twilightsmile:

Can't wait to read the sequel!

6275447 I hope you like it. It's already posted, but I need to update the latest chapter. That should be up fairly soon. But until then, I hope enjoy what I've got so far:twilightsmile:

6275544 I'll keep track of it then. Take no offense, but I just like to read all ready finished stories. :twilightsmile:

6275906 No offense taken, I understand:twilightsmile:

7623426 No worries. I'm sorry I haven't gotten to your story either. I've been preparing for a hurricane these past few days so it's been a bit hectic for me.

You make good points. This was my first story so I feel like I've learned a lot and improved since.

7623584 :twilightoops: Good luck with the hurricane. Hope you're able to withstand it. Also, regarding first stories, I just wanna agree that we've all improved since our first, and that looking back at them and seeing how we've grown is a wonderful feeling, in my opinion. :twilightblush:

7625145 Well, the worst has passed and I'm still standing:pinkiehappy:
And I completely agree. I'll get tired reading your story ASAP:rainbowdetermined2:

7625210

I'll get tired reading your story ASAP

:twilightoops: Whelp, guess that means my story is boring. Also, really glad to hear that you're doing well. Hope that it continues that way. :twilightsmile:

7625215 Crap! I meant *to* not *tired* :rainbowlaugh:
My bad.:twilightblush:

7625244 Figured as much, but I didn't wanna miss a joke opportunity. :raritywink: I'll try and take a look at the next chapter later tonight. My parents have Cabaret, which means that our normally 'big family activity night' is no longer a go, so I'll have plenty of time to see what happens next.. :pinkiesmile:

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