While recovering from a nasty apple tree related incidedent, a pegasus from out of town is grounded in Ponyville. Apologies, I'm terrible at writing descriptions.
Also, this is now much more of a AU now that I've seen season 4.
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Edited to clear up a few mistakes I missed the first time through.
I'm so happy you posted twice in one day!
The fourth letter took less time to hammer out than I expected.
(Insert smiling Luna emoticon here) WHY IS THERE NO LUNA EMOTICON!?!?!
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This story is still rough in some spots ( missing question marks, some misspelled words ) and could make do with a good editor. Oh, and the different colors for the speakers in the initial chapters is a nice idea, but Star's dialogue is hard to read.
All that being said, this is a fine story that needs more views. I'm going to feature it next week in Rated 'E' for Everyone and as such you've earned a favorite.
Thanks, some of the mistakes are in there on purpose (since Star is a less than practiced writer). The rest are just my being a less than practiced writer. I may do a little rewrite since I've got an idea for a sequel to this story.
I made some changes to chapter 6 to make things more fitting with the way things should be.
I finally worked out how to make the letter parts of the chapters look more like a letter.