Two years ago Luna returned from the Wasteland to find that her home had shifted dramatically from what she remembered. Even now she attempts to find a way to transport her lost love, Sarah, to her side, but a chitinous foe seeks to tear them apart.
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Moar.
Yay! Nim is in the real world!
Very nice, though it should be breathe instead of breath in a couple of places.
ARE YOU PAID TO WRITE THESE!?!?
You are pumping them out like you are, And do you Even Sleep?
5017620 "pumping them out" is not this. The chase if over 540k words and puts up 7-10k a day
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Well with this, Absolution 2, And a couple chapters of A New World, A new Ranger all in the last few days I'm gonna consider him pumping them out...
(I'm VERY impressed Ed)
Also the first clause of the second sentence is a little unclear to me.
Mind clarifying?
5017620 He's just a monkey on a typewriter. He gets his ideas with tiny, crematic horse figurines and making their noses touch at random.
I'm still a bit... "BLAH" on Nightmare turning out to be a Draconequus, but it was a good chapter. Hope to see more soon!
Discord is going to be soo pissed.
omg..... a threesome
Well there goes CorruptedNightmare. .......
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Dam you breathing, y u so hard!11!1!!!1!!
Sex, the breakfast of champions!!
That sounds interesting.
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Yes I know I'm weird.
and I like Futanari stuff
a Alicorn a Draqonequus and a human. this sounds like the beginning of a bad joke
sounds like there is fun to be had
Yay transphobia
Okay, so human, a pony princess and a draconequus walk into a wedding parlour...
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It wasn't transephobia, Sarah just doesn't like dicks, it's why she doesn't like sleeping with men.
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Yay! Nim!
Nice chapter, especially the bit of humor with Nim forgetting about Gravity and having to breath. But I suggest she turns her chaos talents into useful pursuits, ie making giant crops so no pony ever goes hungry again, creating small chocolate milk rain clouds so everyone can enjoy it without getting soaked, and terrorizing any idiots dumb enough to rebel against Celestia.
Way to go Nim. Finally having a real body and her first breath of air was deliver by Sarah's fist. D'aww
Well, it is in fact traditional to slap a newborn baby if they don't start breathing on their own, gets them to cry, see?
We do agree with Celestia, that would have been much nicer to have a more dramatic setting, but it's done now.
Speaking of drama, what's the status of the changing treaty?
Keep going! ;)
Milk and cereal, Milk and cereal, cereal cereal
(I have no idea what I just said right now)
5021765 I don't know either but....
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Kudos for foiling the antagonist's initial plans. No one ever does that.
6721320 Ya.......
Gods. The threesome
I still like the story, and I love that there were hints to Nim’s true origin throughout the two stories...but there’s a plothole. This whole story takes place because the Elements couldn’t purify NMM from Luna. The reason given was that NMM was Luna, not an outside force. But if that were true then she wouldn’t be a Draconequus. But since she is, shouldn’t the Elements have worked on her?