Two years ago Luna returned from the Wasteland to find that her home had shifted dramatically from what she remembered. Even now she attempts to find a way to transport her lost love, Sarah, to her side, but a chitinous foe seeks to tear them apart.
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o hell no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you better not chrysalis win or so help me god i will hunt you down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kill chrysalis sarah kill her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4611400 Please If that was enough to bring down the Lone Wanderer, then Ill eat my Power armor.
4611407 but with chrysalis and with you magic and venom she can control sarah very easy please let sarah win please chrysalis must die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4611408 And The wanderer has Nim and (Hypothetical) Balls of Steel. Plus the Lone wanderer Is basically Batman so Chrysalis will slip soon and Sarah will take full advantage of the situation.
4611434 i guess you are right been reading too many stories with chrysalis in them so
And the good queen just put aside a boot with her name on it.
Im curious is to how Chrysalis is going to go about controlling Sarah..what with Nim in her mind and all..i can't see Nim exactly rolling out the mental welcome rug so to speak.. let us also hope Nim can't reach Luna in some way once and if they escape Chrysalis's magically sealed room other wise it'll be Changling for dinner.. thou i hear Changling soup is quit nice after you've smashed them to goo under the moon a few times
.........Murder her.
MURDER HER.
FUCKING KILL CHRYSALIS IN THE MOST BRUTAL FUCKING FASHION.
I dont get it. Why she need to steal human to kill princesses? Cant she just poison them? Or enthrall servants to do so?
Well I really hope some changeling venom BS won't be a problem here she is the lone wander, she could stare down a deathclaw naked for luna so please in the next chapter give the changelings a true wasteland greeting (preferably with a shotgun) and get Luna here guns a blazing. By the way nice chapter great work as always. Also if there is changing venom BS I'll go fuck a deathclaw and call it Gary.
Ooooh I so dearly hope that Sarah gets a chance to splatter Buggy's brains against the wall.
What I don't get is how did Chrysalis know of Sarah's weapons and armor?
Also erasing non magic weapons wile letting magic weapons through? Being a being from a world where magic is weaponized you would think Chrysalis would view the magic weapons as the bigger threat and underestimate the non-magic ones.
Also its a bit odd that she knew to have a magic notification field ready even if she stole Luna's journal or something (which is the only way I can come up with that she knew of Sarah's "weapons that spit fire") Sarah never demonstrated any magic ability wile with Luna so why would she be making all these preparations (magic insulation room and such).
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The insulation is more to keep Luna from dreamwalking in/hearing Sarah's nightmares. As for the rest of her information, she's got spies in Canterlot.
Yet another Fic that makes this running joke, or more like running error that humanity is powerless against magic, now i do understand that it depends on the author but common logic dictates that if a let’s simplify this object has no knowledge, no ability to affect, resonate or even sense an, energy field or another object, it also should be unaffected by said energy, object or property, otherwise Newton’s second law(at least I think it was the second one I may be wrong and I’m too tired to check) is not working.
Now let’s assume it is working correctly, Nim should be the only one who might be affected by magic, we can of course assume Sarah is affected by Nim in response and that would actually be interesting, otherwise we have to assume the second option that Newton’s second law is not applicable in Equestria.
If it’s not applicable in Equestria, Sarah is dead… no seriously dead… not mind controlled… not even normal type of dead, but seriously Dead with no chance of survival, the moment some of the most complicated parts of her body will start relying on a law that is not working in Equestria her body will literally die, horribly, and painfully, the only way for her to survive in such a environment would be enchanting or changing her body by magic.
I would like to see Chrysalis the over arrogant and with no knowledge of anatomy of a completely alien, support the life of a creature that has not a single organ, or even cell that can survive in Equestrian universe, of course you can always go with it and let it happen because “a wizard did it”, although in this case it would be an entirely different trope and not a positive one, or should I say much more negative one?
I also hope this won’t go with the overly used and unfortunately entirely wrong assumption that human and pony brains are the same, and that human brain is basically powerless and can be broken in a matter of second by any changeling especially a queen, because at that point this would hit a number of very… very bad tropes that would force me personally to un-favorite it and down vote it.
Please make a note that this isn’t a “My favorite character is getting killed/mindwiped/mindr***d/otherwise_tortured_in_any_way” it’s more a comment on how this story is slowly making an incredible and completely unexpected descent into a deep hole of bad quality Fics, especially since the first one was literally not only great but also nearly perfectly avoided all of the more annoying and plainly bad tropes.
Well Otherwise than all of that above good chapter write more.
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I haven't seen your comment before i have written mine so allow me to add another bad trope to the list of bad tropes you added.
The villain knows about everything and anything that may hinder their plan in advance and even changes his/hers plans with perfectly no reason whatsoever just after the audience points out his/her mistakes, he/she also takes precautions which he/she should never have even thought so to begin with, because of their lack of knowledge about something, or because said knowledge is simply inaccessible to them, and yet said precautions strike directly against the protagonist/hero/his_rival/his_enemy/obstacle main weaknesses and/or destroys the protagonist/hero/his_rival/his_enemy/obstacle main strengths or makes them obsolete or unimportant, all of above is explained by either extensive spy network,“a_wizard_did_it”, or simply because.
I havn't read this yet, but when I saw this updated i let out a squeal of delight... like the vid below.
I love this story series soo much! now to read!
4611552 I'm inclined to agree with you. It just seems like the only reason that Sarah (an otherwise strong capable character) is now weak is because the story needs her to be so that she can be rescued. I don't want to lose faith in this story, but I really hope the author knows what they're doing.
On another note, I'm really gonna miss seeing Fawkes and Spencer in this story since we're probably not gonna see the Wasteland again.
I really hope Sarah doesn't crack, cave in to Chrysalis
Oh shit, here we go. So, because of the title of the chapter, I assume that the entire first scene was filler. It was well-written filler, though, as you described the stupidity of raiders perfectly. Chrysalis's scene was written well; you did a good job making it so that Chrysalis has no clue as to what she's up against. Aside from that, it was a relatively short chapter. Not much to say until the next installment. All in all, this chapter gets a
ChangelingCannon Fodder/10.Welp... That didn't go well.. and the fucking pip-boy... it's missing... but the cover art shows her with it... gyaahh... how will she get it back!?
well shit.....no more guns?
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That is not even a problem, as i said if this spell would kill her then as much as it would sadden me because the story would end, at least it would make sense, but right now no offence this last chapter compared to prequel and the first few chapters, its... just plainly bad… or just short of being bad, I don’t know I guess we will see but still…
It’s as if for no apparent reason the author started to follow on an incredibly stupid and overused in gaming industry, way of making sequels, you have an lvl 40 character in prequel that takes down dragons and shit, but in the sequel the same guy/girl is level 1 and every goblin one hits her.
It’s that kind of bad.
The example purposely has nothing to do with the story to avoid smartasses who will try to discredit it by saying “There are no dragons in fallout”.
Wait. How can Sarah understand Chrysalis? Considering she JUST got there, Chrysalis shouldn't have been able to translate anything yet. I dun get
I love this thing. It is literally the best assault rifle in the game.
I get what you're meaning by this, but they're still two entirely different things.
You know, I never understood that. Even with Wheately Armoury, where the hell are they getting military grade AT launchers? I mean, a squad – Eight soldiers – usually only has one on them, and only if it's required for the mission. Not to mention any damage from age...
Oh my God someone actually figured it out. I've heard being shot under combat armour be described as getting hit with a sledgehammer. Not a good feeling.
Kudos to you for actually knowing that.
Fifteen minutes to kill fifteen raiders in Hellfire Armour with the Perforator? Sarah, you're slipping!
After all Sarah's been through, I hope Chrysalis has a very hard time doing this.
No! Not the Perforator!
...Jingwei's Shocksword can go screw itself, the Shishkebab is better.
One big mistake.
A serious mistake.
Removing a pipboy from the person it's attached to will kill them, it's regulating lifestats.
I really don't see how Chrysalis' mental magic will work with Nim in Sarah's mind. Really hoping that Sarah escapes from/kills Chrysalis early next chapter. Not looking forward to a mind-control plot.
4611737 Well she has Nim in her head. Maybe she gave Sarah the ability to understand Equestrian or taught her how to speak it. That's just my theory.
Boo on removing the Items from Sarah.
Just Boo.
BOO ON YOU! BOO!
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Oh you are right i forgot about that, but wasn’t it the other way around where you couldn’t remove pipboy without killing someone and it woudl break if removed incorrectly, i remember something about this in new vegas and first or second fallout?
I sense fire, death and doom for the Changeling race as soon as Luna finds out what happened.
And if there is anything left standing, which I doubt, Celestia will bring the full might of the sun in to clean up.
I don't know what's better. The chapter, or seeing everyone screaming about it.
Oh shit. Moar!
YAY! Nim and Sarah are in Equestria! FUCK! They're imprisoned by Chrissy!
Too bad Sarah's gear is gone. I was hoping that Chrysalis would be all smug at the idea of turning Sarah on Luna, that she wouldn't realize she had bitten off more than she could chew. You can still go that angle with Nim and Daybreaker, but without even just a pip-boy it seems a little less likely she will escape in a plume of bada$$ery.
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Personally I have no idea what you're talking about. Sarah's gear is gone because the spell that was cast to bring here there was only able to bring herself and Daybreaker with her because it was magic. This in no way means that Sarah would die because she lacked magic, nor do I understand why you're bringing Newton into this because as far as I can see, there was nothing to do with physics in this entire chapter. That does not mean that there will be no effects on her because she has no inherent magic, but it does mean that she won't suddenly keel over and die because she doesn't have it.
As for the rest of your concerns, Sarah is no weaker then she ever has been. She cannot however fight magic head on. That much should be fairly obvious. You cannot fight someone with telekinesis when they are controlling your hands.
As for Chrysalis's attempts to control/mindwipe Sarah, just wait and see.
Before you reply, know that I'm not trying to start a comment war or anything. I realize that you're just a very concerned fan who is worried that I'm ruining something that they hold dear, and I greatly appreciate the fact that you feel that way about this story. (Also keep in mind that as author I don't take things like physics into account when I'm writing.)
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Um no, last time I checked it was that Pip-Boy's were extremely hard to remove without crippling the arm of the user. They monitor vital signs, they don't control them. Even Vault Tech (bastards they are) were not that stupid.
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Good questions, they'll be answered next time.
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Well, I wouldn't say it was total filler, you got to see Sarah duel wielding But thanks, I try to show my love of Fallout raider stupidity
Holy Soviet Shit Storm! *slams hand down on large red button*
I think Chryssie might find herself in for a harder time than she thinks, Nim will probably be able to do something like make a fake Sarah mind to take all the programming while the real Sarah stays safe with her. But I love Double, please don't kill off this strangely adorable little drone, especially if Sarah takes a liking to her and vise versa.
Oh hell no! She did not just call Sarah her pet!
4611800 xulundse(spelling?) Chinese assault rifle doesn't do more damage?
4612265 The Xuanlong does three more damage per shot, yes, but it has a 1.5 spread. The Perforator has .5, and a sniper scope. Also, Perforator is silenced automatically.
4612269 true sadly I was never able to find enough ingots to get it.
4611864 It makes sense I guess. But even so, you think we would at least see something like that in the story in some shape or form
4612272 Look on the Fallout Wiki, it should tell you where they all are. I own the Complete Guide, so I had no problem getting it.
I... I just don't know. Ed, you just removed basically every element of Fallout from this crossover by having the spell destroy everything on her minus Daybreaker. I was sort of hoping you were going to keep some of the stuff intact, but apparently you went for the total annihilation method instead. Still reading it, but Chrysalis... eh. It just seemed stupid silly with all of the preparations and the ability to basically fuck Sarah over with minimal effort. What's the lives of one or two drones, really? It all felt... anti-climatic.
This is why I hate changelings in general. Because of shit like this.
4612283 yeah my current play through has 86 ingots so far can't seem to find the last four
4612290 There's 100 ingots, with the last item being Tribal Power Armour I believe. Worth it to get for The Hole.
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The author said that we'll get the answer in the next chapter
4612372 Luna cast a translate spell on her when they first met.
please, the lone wanderer by the end can beat the Enclave bare but naked pugilist style. She doesn't need a weapon to win.