Two years ago Luna returned from the Wasteland to find that her home had shifted dramatically from what she remembered. Even now she attempts to find a way to transport her lost love, Sarah, to her side, but a chitinous foe seeks to tear them apart.
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Oh Jack, who haven't you slept with?
nice chapter, can't wait for the update.
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Me
Shut up, we all know your lesbian.
4634881 You just haven't said hello to him yet.
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DID YOU NOT JUST HEAR ME!? I SAID SHE WAS A LESBIAN!!!
Gay pride bitch!
SHUT UP!
(please note that I have nothing against gay people as long as they don't try to get me in bed.)
Still good, dude!
4634903 It's ok and I was just using a joke that all the captain needs to do is say hi.
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Let
Me
Sleep
Anything that moves.
Anything.
Also, I'm hoping Sarah pulls the 'you-have-AIDS-now' card on Chrysalis mentioned by some other dudes in the previous chapter's comments.
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No.
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I have a nit pick, one that is a minuscule part of this chapter but that I feel needs to be addressed. BUGS DO NOT WORK LIKE THAT.
When insect queens produces a male, the male then leave the hive and reproduce with ANOTHER hives queen, not the same one that birthed it, or else they may as well be asexually reproducing because no new genetic material is being distributed.
Ahem, sorry I felt the need to say that.
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They are magical shape-shifting bugs with their own empire.
Screw logic.
4635050 I would not be complaining if the explanation had not basically said 'our systems is like bugs' right before saying that.
I have no problems with changelings working like that, but saying that they work like insects then the explanation of how they work is not really like insects just rubbed me the wrong way.
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Well, 'like' use have been meant as 'similar'. Ed should probably change that, though.
Stupid Chrysalis, forgetting the normal biological needs...
Specialized sword is specifically necessary for future plot point. What is that trope again? Someone's gun or the like? Meh we forget.
Keep going! ;)
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there is at lest ONE type of bug that works almost like that, just cant remember the name though.
Nice chapter, I love Luna's new sword, BFS for the win! I also love the allusion to another Captain Jack. Will Dr. Whooves be showing up and talking about Wibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey...Stuff to help explain the time difference between Equestria and the Wasteland????
Aurora's charms not phazing Luna a bit was hilarious
4635110 Checkov. Warning, the link will suck you into TvTropes, the greatest time waster on the internet.
4635274 Checkov !That's the one! We were almost going to say Pavlov,but he didn't have a gun (to my knowledge). ;)
4635139 I cant say my knowledge of the field is great enough to dispute that there may be a species with such a reproductive system, but of the three most well known species to have queens, bees, ants, and termites, only termites have the queen mate with a member of her own hive, but the male who mates with her then undergoes a physical metamorphosis growing in size, and extending its lifespan to the same as a queen, up to 45 times the life span they would other wise have had (So basically Echo wishes that changelings were like termites). although there is not just one male around at a time in the case of termites, they are produced in multitudes even when they are not needed for mateing, again throwing a wrench into the description.
I would like to remind that I said this was a nit pick, it really is. It is likely no one but me even would have noticed, I am just a HUGE NERD.
4635285 Pavlov had dogs who drooled, Schrödinger had a cat that might or might not be dead at any given moment, and Maxwell had a demon who liked fast things.
IT'S 1230 IN THE MORNING AND I GET THESE WEIRD IDEAS......
Tch. I'm honestly surprised none of you seem to have noticed Nim's little connection to a certain creature having an oddly striking amount of mentions in the prequel.
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Sorry, this is what happens when I don't do enough research...
Hope you still enjoyed the rest of the chapter
Drink milk without Chocolate?!
Jackdaw is turning out to be a very.... how do I even describe him? Carefree? Well traveled? I suppose "interesting and experienced individual" is the best I can come up with on short notice.
Not a bad chapter at all.
4636171 If picky ever became a princes her first decree would be to make drinking chocolateless milk a crime
you know, I'm kinda surprised I didn't pick up on who inspired Jackdaw sooner, given his name...
soooo....
does he have a Vortex manipulator stashed somewhere?
I'm not quite sure how to approach this chapter. It was a mishmosh of a lot of different things; some better than others. Might as well start from the top. Luna's conversation with Jonathan was wrapped up, with nothing really accomplished there except exposition about a sword that'll probably never be significant. Aurora's and Celestia's scene was exactly how I thought it would be. You did a good job of executing the conversational dance between the monarchs. It felt political and tentative, so that's nice. Celestia had a really nice save there with the whole 'weapons' deal. Then Luna and Jackdaw arrived, after which I immediately figured out who was the return customer to the changelings. The comedic portion of the scene was written very well. It wasn't overdone or out of place like some of your previous instances, which is a real improvement. However, I don't think you really needed to include Sarah and Nim in this chapter. You didn't really accomplish much except emphasize how Nim will always and forever be there for Sarah. It seems to be a common theme. All in all, this chapter gets a Promiscuous Thestral/10.
4636133 Oh I did, as I said, that was a nit pic, it was a tiny part of the chapter, and the complaints I had about it were very petty. But now that I am thinking of ant hills, I wonder how much molten aluminum it would take to wipe out a changeling hive, and what the resulting art piece would look like.
Another great chapter! You have yet to dissapoint
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Jackdaw is acting exactly as I'd expect him to as he is clearly an Expy for Jack Harkness of Doctor Who/Torchwood, possibly most famous for being the universe's greatest Omni-sexual (Species and gender are no barrier to Jack when looking to score).
With all these references im suprised you havent mentioned the grocery store near Jury street metro station :-P
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it would take about a billion tonnes for a larger hive, and it would be the greatest piece of artwork ever.
Nicely done! once more my friend, good show! :D
Man this is progressing rather well :3
Heheh, Jackdaw... I'm not surprised XD
Keep it up!
I think I just realized who jackdaw is
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ahem
4636594 XD. But why not LIQUID GOLD?!!!!
Ooooohh, someone's been naughty...