Two years ago Luna returned from the Wasteland to find that her home had shifted dramatically from what she remembered. Even now she attempts to find a way to transport her lost love, Sarah, to her side, but a chitinous foe seeks to tear them apart.
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And this is why Jack harkness is my second favorite character in the DR.who series.
Story Fix achieved for the day!
Now I can work on my Exo-suit.
Poor Aurora. I still feel bad for Chrysalis too of course, but sad as it is, her troubles are over. I almost want to be mad at your Celestia for being such a hard bitch that the situation went down how it did, but I know she didn't instigate the conflict or the scheme for Sarah. But she did exterminate an entire hive and all but force Aurora to put Chrysalis down. I don't know. how to feel!
4735051 it helps that Barrowman is fuckin awesome.
This chapter was so sweet!
This chapter really drives Aurora's point home.
Only one error, Ed.
More than. There's a quantity here, which is than, not a series of events, which is then.
4736046 People always mix those ones up.
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Yeah, my brain doesn't think about it when it uses those two...
Which is why you can find it in almost everything I write
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No worries. Figured I'd point it out.
How I learned it was 'You always have more of this than that, but I always do it in three steps: first, second then finally last.'
A little convoluted, but its how I learned the difference.
Short chapter is short
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Short chapter does what it needs to and comes out less then a week after the last one.
Jackdaw just has to be Captain Jack Harkness yeah.
The only question is though...
How did he wind up ponified and what is he doing in Equestria?
And.....
When will the pony with the blue box show up there?
Nice, short, and to the point. Something big was revealed here.
If Jackdaw was expecting a destroyed room, was it all disguised? Hmmm....
Keep going! ;)
4737499 nopenopenopenopenopenopenopenopenop.....
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Why? Why must you do this? Just leave it as is. Don't try to push any more.
Ed, please for the love of god can you tell me that you wont do anything ridiculous like putting in doctor 'whooves'. If you do, I'm sad to say that there will be one less reader.
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Don't worry, I only make references or the occasional joke. For example, Jackdaw is NOT Jack Harkness, he's just loosely based off of him. Besides, I already have a Doctor Whooves story, albeit a short one
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Thank you. It just frustrates me to see people add him into their stories for near to no reason aside from 'just because'.
I hope that nim gets a real body
4779425 No my problem with it, and I have seen another comment sharing my sentiment, is that this is a fallout crossover in name only, the only thing that is making this a fallout crossover now is that Sarah came from there. Did not mean to give off a vibe that I am hating this story, I am loving it! it is just that Sarah kind of is now just a love object for Luna. I loved the first Wandering Moon, but I am reading this because it is a fallout crossover, would just wish to see more Fallout in it..
PS I don't think the video was really necessary man..It is a little harsh.
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Your first comment came across as "My thinking is superior, anyone who argues with me can choke on dicks."
If you said all that stuff about it not feeling like a crossover, then my reaction would not have been anywhere near as harsh. That was your own doing.
Jacks non judging nature is most likely the best tool for peace.
4736640 Short chapter works in mysterious ways.
Another good chapter well done! :D
Flipping story feelz~