Two years ago Luna returned from the Wasteland to find that her home had shifted dramatically from what she remembered. Even now she attempts to find a way to transport her lost love, Sarah, to her side, but a chitinous foe seeks to tear them apart.
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Damn Chrysalis! I still feel a bit bad for her though, because I know before the fic is over someone or somepony is going to reduce her to a fine paste. Great chapter!
..............Really? You would think the mother fucking Wanderer would be able to resist this right? Even from what I can tell, this version of equestria in comparison to the wasteland is freaking nothing, right?
Interetinfg development
careful Chrysalis your poking on hell of a bear with a stick right now XD can't wait for Luna to find them..if/when they find a way out that is
I cannot say I am pleased with the apparent ease that Chrysalis seems to be having with her plans. That is quite irritating to me indeed. c'est la vie.
If I were Sarah, I would say I have some type of infectious disease to screw with Chrysalis
I got Liberty Prime! Now all I need is some troops to help obliterate the hive!
4624369 yea no kidding full of herself bitch
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I wonder if FEV can be transmitted through bodily fluids? (Note: Most people born in the wasteland have been in some capacity exposed to airborne FEV. It's what made them turn into bad Super Mutants on the West Coast.)
And if so, just what the hell would it do to a changeling?
WELL THEN. That's certainly an odd reaction to poison.
Oh look, seems Queen Squished won't be getting into Sarah's mind any time soon! !
4624376 lol "hey Chrysalis I hope you like syphilis!"
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Hey Chrysalis, ever heard of AIDS? No? Well, let me tell you a thing.
Huh, you would have thought the Lone Wanderer would be able to resist. I guess Sara never took a Chem Resistance perk.
Things just got interesting.
Keep it up.
Someone should have put points into Unarmed, Sure you deal shit damage till power fists, But you always have a weapon.
ohh did I mention rads I hope you like being sick you should be nice and vulnerable to them, especially my body chemistry is messed from moyra's jobs for the wasteland survival guide.
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Seeing what radiation did to insects and arachnids in the capital wasteland, this could result in a giant changeling.
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Wasteland didn't have magic. She's literally dealing with creatures she knows nothing about, with abilities that she knows nothing about, that have lived for centuries before the US was even founded, and she hasn't even got armor or a gun.
She's good, but that doesn't mean that she's without limits...
4624943 True, but the problem is that if the Alien DLC was finished then Sarah should have had the perk that makes her COMPLETELY RESISTANT TO ANY KIND OF NEGATIVE DRUG/CHEM EFFECT as it's unlocked there if I recall something to do with getting your spine back... can't recall exactly.
Or was that in New Vegas? Nevermind, though my point still stands, the drug works far to well for no excusable reason and the it's magic line doesn't work here because if that's the case then Sarah's body should be shutting down due to how Luna's magic affected her before remember?
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getting your spine back was newvegas, the aliens just sorta probed you and who knows what off camera
sadly and I cant find a list of added optional perks for this add-on only the perk you get for completing a side optional on the ship... no info on level gained perks unlocked by this add on sadly.
Xenotech Expert - completion of the raider firing range where you obtain the Destabilizer 1 +20% damage with alien weapons xx00abb0
Gloat as much as you can Chrissy, rub it in, and be as big of a bitch as possible. Because the moment, the second that your guard is down; watching Sarah, Luna, and Nim reign vegance on your ass is going to be sooooooo satisfiying.
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"First it gets into your system, then it gets into your lymph nodes and makes them completely useless. Then any speck of dirt can and will make you deathly sick. There is no cure, and no relief. And thanks to your little "love" bites, you now have one of the most deadly diseases in history, enjoy!" That's how I would explain it.
4625230 Right it was in New Vegas, i forget what the perk's called exactly but, I know you either get it from a DLC or a Quest Reward in the later plot, as it makes you even more of a badass by making all chems become completely non-addictive and removing their negative.... OH RIGHT IT WAS A COMPANION'S PERK!
Hmm having Sarah converted to Equestrian certainly isn't helping things at the moment. We're hoping she just develops a resistance/tolerance to the venom, it can't last forever after all.
I wonder what Chrysalis did with Daybreaker? If she took it outside the chamber it might get enough magic to trace back to Luna. If it's still inside, well that's just another opportunity I think,
Keep going! ;)
4624461 I've got several reasons
1) Changelings are interesting and the fics I've read where they get integrated into Equestrian society are generally fun to read.
2) I don't like condemning a whole race for the actions of one individual... if the first aliens that come to Earth use that standard they'll wipe us out for Hitler alone.
3) given they feed on love, I want to see Changelings become the protectors of the Crystal Empire
4) I've read enough X is a Changeling! and 'Changeling breaks free of the swarm' fics to be neutral over the race and not just condemn them.
So Aurora was around back before Luna became Nightmare Moon Dang... just with all that time to grow she might be an even match for one of the Princesses. I can just see Luna, Nim, and Sarah talking mentally while Luna idly subdues Sarah's body before carrying Sarah off to deprogram her. Oh, and if Luna or Celestia gets to finish off Chryssie, make sure the last thing the bitch hears is them thanking her for bringing Sarah to Equestria.
4624320 Obviously she is suicidal. The question is whether it is Celestia, Luna, Nim, Sarah, Twilight, Shining Armor, or Cadence who deals the final blow.
4624350 More like Ursa Minor, with Luna being Ursa Major
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4625239 I bet Sarah starts making a mental list of various ways to off Chryssie.
4625311 In Fallout 3 you can get the Chem Resistant Perk, which makes the player half as likely to become addicted to chems. Though the perk you're thinking about is the Heartless Perk in New Vegas, which gives the player a +25% resistance to chem addiction.
4624320 YES turn the bug into paste. That would be a blue-green color? I think the venom/ magical AID's works on Sarah because of the different origins, so she has no inbuilt immunity to it like with a wasteland disease.
I'd like to start off with praise for the clever chapter title. There are love bites, and love does indeed bite. Anyways, this chapter was good, if a little predictable. You went with the cocoon trope, but since there really isn't much else to work with, it can be forgiven. You set the scene well enough, so as a reader, I understood exactly where Sarah is. Your best work in this chapter had to do with Sarah and Nim's planning. It felt like they've done this hundreds of times before (they have) so they know what does and doesn't work (they do). But you managed to make them both out of their element, even with Nim's knowledge of the species. Great dialogue in general. Chrysalis was written diabolically; it kind of spooked me. I wasn't expecting Chrysalis to essentially molest Sarah, but you did a good job writing it. However, Sarah's reactions didn't really seem candid. All she really said was that it was worse than the aliens. You didn't really transition from determined to scared that well. Also, when you explained how every action has a motive, you placed Arefu as an example. That breaks the flow entirely, and it would've been better to just leave it out. Or, if you insist, show it, not tell it. Other than that, this was a fairly good chapter. There were some mistakes, but I enjoyed it. All in all, this chapter gets a Changeling Bondage/10.
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As amusing as that would be, this is Sarah guys. I don't think that even with Nim in her mind she'd think of something like that.
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(this is not just to you)
In my opinion only addicts develop the Chem Resistant perk, so Sarah would be cut out from it anyways because she's clean.
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I don't know, Shining Armor (who is about as tough as the above average person/pony comes) is still suffering six months afterwards.
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Hmm, when did the Lone Wanderer stop being human and have the ability to resist anything? Was it when Tobar drugged him/her and cut out his brain? Or was it when he/she got knocked out by a bunch of pitt thugs? Maybe it was when the aliens probed her and she woke up the morning after in immense pain? At any rate, Sarah is still human for the most part and as such suffers things that humans would. Yes she has a HIGH pain tolerance but she's not freaking invincible, if you want to read that, go back and read Dark Wanderings again.
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Actually, the west coast mutants were converted by being dipped in big vats of FEV at Mariposa military base by the Master. The East coast super mutants were caused by a modified form of FEV that, unlike Mariposa FEV, was spread in a gaseous form. However, all people living in the Wasteland have been exposed to extremely low levels of FEV, put their when the West-Tek facility was nuked, breaking the holding tanks and vaporizing the FEV. Theses low levels of FEV aren't enough to cause Super Mutants, but it has caused increased strength and radiation resistance for most people in the Wasteland.
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so what would say walking through a fev live area and opening testing chambers for a certain vault which sarah entered do? especially after the 'experiments for the wasteland survival guide and the ant dna?' seriously there has got to be something in her body by now that will mess with changling biology somehow.
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I was just speculating if it could be spread through bodily fluids. Everything in the parentheses was there to explain a few things to those who aren't heavily invested in Fallout lore.
That, and changelings have very different biology to anything seen in Fallout. Who knows how the insectoid shape-shifting emotion-eaters would react?
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If you want a 3edgy5u god-modding mary sue, you won't find her here.
4626614 Even if they could there would not be enough to cause any damage to Chrysalis, however Sarah were to tell her and get her paranoid enough to run some tests they would come out positive, assuming the changelings had a way to target and identify the FEV in her blood.
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Sorry, but you're giving Sarah WAY too much credit. She wouldn't think of something like that, it's a neat thought though.
The only thing I'm still miffed about is Sarah apparently losing all of her equipment.
She worked hard for all that, damnit!
I'm especially sad about the Pip-Boy, for some reason.
Unless she finds all her stuff in a crate somewhere in the hive once she escapes.
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I keep forgetting this is the girl that can't count to sixty. I wouldn't put it past Nim though.
I can't tell if Chrysalis is an idiot who has had a few good ideas or an intelligent ruler who ruins her own plans by reaching too far
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Logan's Loophole. It was a perk you can select at the start of the game if you had Lonesome Road installed, but at 30, say goodbye to leveling up anymore. You were immune to drug/alcohol addiction and they lasted twice as long.
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She's a politician, it's both.
Boom! Sarah's gunna kick some butt once she gets out, I bet.
Lots of it!
Good show!
I have a feeling that Nim and Luna are going to fight it out over Sarah
Can't believe you'd delete the character's gear just to play with bdsm... in a Fallout crossover.
try injecting that venom to xenomorph then.
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in cannon timeline, she and stormking are only rulers that knows how to led their army
chysalis's acting is good enough to trick applejack, the element of honesty.
and according from comics, she's as old as the tree of harmony itself