Two years ago Luna returned from the Wasteland to find that her home had shifted dramatically from what she remembered. Even now she attempts to find a way to transport her lost love, Sarah, to her side, but a chitinous foe seeks to tear them apart.
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Okay, never mind, he just got his assed kicked, still doesn't deter from him coming out of no where with no build up what so ever as some sort of curve ball
Hopefully you don't throw another one.
Well I move back to my favorites after finishing off another fic, and I get to read this gem of a chapter from you Ed!
Apparently my timing and insomnia is impeccable...
short. but I did enjoy it XD
Hah! Well I can safely say I wasn't expecting that. Quite amusing. And I do hope the true Luna (and not some decoy created by Discord) is called and notified of everything, so that they can appropriately re-seal his malformed arse.
I wonder how the Elements of Harmony would effect Nim? She means no harm to Luna or Sara on her own, and I do think they have some sense of awareness to them in that regard. Would they purify Nim into a non-chaotic being, giving her more conventional magics than chaos magic?
This chapter was FREAKING AWESOME!!!! I loved Sarah ripping Discord a new one, well done. As soon as Discord revealed Nim was inadvertently using Chaos magic against him I happened to think, "What if Sarah was in there fighting him instead???" Lo and behold.
And this sums up the chapter nicely, just substitute a girl in power armor for the Hulk.
Well, Luna will probably not be happy to see what she'll assume is Discord, but if Sarah can explain things, I can totally see Luna accepting Nim's new look. Plus, having a good Draconeus around would be interesting. could Nim replicate Sarah's Power armor and weapons with chaos magic????
4964336 Same
Discord, don't fuck with love. Just don't.
Sarah, Nim, and Luna will kick your ass from here to Earth and back again.
Awesome! Go girl go!
I love it. Hope the next chapter doesn't take as long though. I missed the sheer joy of finding a new chapter and my updates are starting to dry up
LOL discord thinks he can drive her completely insane? If years of surviving in the capital wasteland didn't do her sanity in then discord has his work cut out for him.
Aww I wanted Sarah to shove Dawn Breaker up Discords ass (literally).
Holy shit... Ouch. Just, ouch.
Why do I get the feeling that Discord didn't even bother to look into her past to see what she went through? He would have realized that he's an ameture when it comes to chaos as humans can do horrible things even without god-level magic.
4964424 Then he'll have to deal with US
Few things are more terrifying than pissed off fans.
I keep pushing the like button but the number dose not want to change
4964557 If you couldn't already see my fingerprints there, i wrote the scene originally, then Ed made some changes, then I ran through it again. It was quite satisfying to write, I must say.
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4964478 Here's what I will think would happen
Discord: Screw you (tap of doom)
Sarah: RAHHHHH (beat down comences)
A few minutes later
Sarah: Damn it who slipped me psycho.
4964385 omg my sides stop it XD:
Oh this is going to be good, I can tell. *sits against the turret of his Patton Tank with popcorn* Kill that ugly son of a bitch! SLICE HIS FUCKING HEAD OFF!
I want to see sarah's dad show up in her mind and fight discord. I dont know why I just do.
Please sir... can i have some more? (NO!)
But ah wannit naow!
And that is what my Old Man called 'Fucking Fools Up!'
Anyone who gets that reference has excellent taste.
I would loved to see Sarah make Discord go through the same thing crysalis did when she entered her mind
Hehehehhe
Man, that was satisfying.
4966310 OOOOHHHHH... I hadn't even thought of that... it would be awesome!
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Hell yeah man, couple of tools and we're set.
KILL DISCORD MAKE HIM SUFFER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4964815 do you want him to get any ideas?
I generally despise stories that make Discord the ultimate "Big Bad" but I can appreciate this still, considering how much I've loved it up until the reveal. Also because Draconequus Nimmy is adorable
4964310 It wasn't completely out of nowhere, there have been clues throughout both the first Wandering Moon and then this one.
The last chapter left me with a sinking felling in my stomach cuz of the direction I though it was going, I'm so freaking glad that Sara kicked Discords ass to the curb
That went far better than I expected. I was honestly awaiting something akin to what chrysalis did, just more.....chaotic. But it's good to see that Sarah can kick a pseudo-god out of her mind with nothing but the power of pure, unadulterated rage. Very refreshing.
Whatever Sarah lacks in formal training in dream magic, she makes up for in talent and determination. She whooped his ass good and thoroughly. You picked your enemy poorly, Discord. The Wasteland breeds heroes that are tough, resourceful, and crazy.
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Exactly, if you reread everything knowing what you know now, you can see this coming from MILES away. It's not rocket science, just Ed learning how to foreshadow properly.
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As do I, Wherner is untrustworthy, or, more untrustworthy in my opinion
4968150 Y U CLOSE
Y'know, I like the way you took this chapter. Rather than just having Luna get possessed and free Discord, like a LOT of other fics would've, you gave Sarah a chance. Kudos.
KICK HIS ASS!KICK HIS MOTHERFUCKING ASS!YES! Krantos, nvm, power armor in your mind OP
I was lisaning to the saboton song in the name of god wille reading this
Oh CELESTIA that was satisfying! Sarah just going no-holds-barred beat-down on Discord? Is it CHRISTMAS? Is it my BIRTHDAY?