Two years ago Luna returned from the Wasteland to find that her home had shifted dramatically from what she remembered. Even now she attempts to find a way to transport her lost love, Sarah, to her side, but a chitinous foe seeks to tear them apart.
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..I sense that the threat is not QUUIIITE over..But, i would not be surprised if it was.
In all honesty, i see this taking a more slice-of-life thing from now.
This sounds like it should have a Queen Chrysalis or at least an Other tag.
Chrysalis is like a roach or snake. No matter how many times you put hem down, you can't get rid of them.
4658336 Unless your rip out it's soul and disperse it into the Void.
Nice show of overwhelming power, though I do wish we knew how Luna and Sarah were doing in Canterlot.
4658336 Yeah, I wouldn't be surprised if she had a spare body stashed far away from the hive and is waking up now that everyone thinks her dead for good.
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I'm actually going to nip this one in the bud now. She's dead. Permanently.
Well, you did accomplish exactly what you wanted to. For a short chapter, this packed an incredible amount of feels. Murdering your own kin is a concept not a lot of authors can write well. You wrote it solidly, fulfilling all of the requisites. To start, you wrote Aurora especially well in this chapter. As a reader, I could see the pain she felt, while Celestia was unaware. You showed, not told, which is always important. Chrysalis's emotions were raw and unadulterated; I got vibes of a youngest child inferiority complex, which was an incredibly deep concept for you to tie into the changeling queen sorority.
Case in point. And all Chrysalis wanted was some attention. It was incredibly sad, to be honest. Your greatest achievement in this chapter, I think, was how disappointed Aurora sounded. You explicitly stated that she was absolutely livid, but the tone of her words, as well as the final show of affection really drove the feeling of anguish home. Having Aurora resume her facade for Celestia was a nice touch, as well. This was one hell of a good read. Nice work. All in all, this chapter gets some Tough Love/10.
And now that Chrysallis is dead, Sarah and Luna are reunited and going toward happiness, and all is well with the land... cue the aliens arriving in their spaceship and blowing holes in Equestria too.
4658336 dem radroaches, always respawning and getting in the way
I feel bad for Chrysy. Hope to see more soon though!
whoai love it
4658437 awwwww, but she makes such a good villain to see get humiliated over and over
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But.....
But does Sarah somehow get her gear back?
The world can come under the reign of Discord again and I would still ask...
Does she get her gear back?!
4658627 you got that right
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4658653 Her gear got destroyed when she was pulled through the portal.
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Buh...but....
All dat gear.....
Why bring over someone from the Fallout-verse if she doesn't have anything from Fallout?
Really, I just want to see Sarah pop a fool with one of her guns.
When going for the kill, settle for no less than overkill i always say.
WELL THAT HAPPENED. Competent Celestia is best Celestia, and therefore your Tia is best.
4658775 As do I, but I really don't think that's going to happen. Seeing as how most of the loose ends have just been wrapped up, it doesn't seem like this story can go anywhere else. Seems like this was more so an extended epilogue than a full-fledged sequel. I could be wrong, but I'm not counting on it.
4658775 She's the only human ever to set foot in Equestria and Luna missed her. How will things turn out for her now. I'm just sad that her pip-boy got destroyed too.
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Yeah, oddly enough I felt a pang of sadness when it was apparently destroyed.
I still hold hope.
4658837 We can only hope.
Time to burn
4658754 Her gear wasn't destroyed it was just left behind, like Luna's sword when Luna went home her sword was left behind there y'know.
4658437 Called it!
Anyway the kiss of death and the final decapitation is actually one of the most powerful maneuvers to use on a creature that uses a hive mind, since it kills any presence within that isn't on level or at least of strong enough individual will to survive the destruction of their conscious mind.
You know what Celestia should of done if she was to kill Chrysalis, turn her into a rose and eat it.
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From Chapter 6: Arrival
Does anyone else feel slightly sad the she had to kil her sister no just me then
4658989 I feel the same way.
Well while I was not happy about what Chrysalis was doing by any stretch of the imagination, it's still rather shocking to see her dead-dead. I was not expecting that. I'm not entirely sure how to feel about that. What about Double and the like? Is she dead as well? I'm guessing yes but I wanted to make sure.
Wow, just wow. I was expecting there to be repercussions against Chrysalis's hive, but I was not expecting them to be this fast nor this final.
Edit: I feel sorry for Aurora too. No-one should EVER be forced to do that to family.
well, with the bitch dead and gone... kinda leaves me wondering whats left in store for the rest of the story ... i dont know why but i have a feeling that a super tiny bit of chrysalis livs on inside sarahs mind or body..... huh.... man im only left to speculate now........
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well never mind then...
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#savepipbuck
I feel more sadness over the loss of Sarah's gear than I do over Chrysaliss's death.
Granted, that isn't hard considering I feel nothing for the bug bitch.
4659619 Just imagine the suit of armor Luna will most likely forge for Sara now! If she ever visits the wastelands later, she will have epic level armor to go with Daybreaker.
I cannot help but think that Luna's banishment was more of a punishment for Celestia rather than Luna, she spent 1000 years without her sister, plagued with guilt over what had happened, While Luna spent a few months with someone who she would grow to love, is it possible that clover the clever actually planned it that way?
Wow, five miles.... Didn't know the hive was the size of a small city.
Keep going! ;)
Isn't there neck vertebrae or a spinal cord in the way of some pony punching you through the middle of your throat? Or is Aurora the Changling version of Albert Wesker?
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Arthropods have nothing resembling a skeletal structure like you'd find in a mammal.
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So chitin is the answer?
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Pretty much. The exoskeleton keeps all the soft fleshy bits contained, like a shell. It's why bugs go crunch when you step on them.
"The Wasteland"? "The Lone Wanderer"? IS THIS A FALLOUT GAME-INSPIRED FIC?!?!?!?!
4656148 Makes sense I guess. Didn't think about it that way. Which leaves me stumped. How the hell did they even survive those vaults?! They didn't have replicators and couldn't store food and they didn't have the Sirea Madre chips so how did it work? Probably a recycling thing like in Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons.
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sequel to 'Wandering Moon', so yeah.
4660230 I think she blasted the hive and the area around it as well, turning the entire landscape into molten glass, not just the hive.
4671695 exactly. Super Mega Ultra Overkill means that it is now that much harder to terraform the badlands....
4672540 Ah, that brings back fond memories of my time as a Sangheili ship captain... No, we don't invade and take your worlds. We just turn the surface into glass.
i think that chrysalis should have gotten a face full of the orbital friendship cannon. that would hopefully teach her the ways of the friendship
4666387 I might just go and read that first one.