Two years ago Luna returned from the Wasteland to find that her home had shifted dramatically from what she remembered. Even now she attempts to find a way to transport her lost love, Sarah, to her side, but a chitinous foe seeks to tear them apart.
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Sarah's gone and lost a part of her brain, hasn't she?
Oh well, it was surely nothing too important.
Awesome chapter, but Luna saying "Christ" strikes me as odd. Guess she picked it up in the wasteland though?
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Yes, though she lacks any understanding of what it really means.
He's smart
E'ery day, NEW UPDATE! I r soo happy, granted it's only been two days but still...
I stand corrected, it seems the dlcs were done off screen.
There had better be a reference to Dunwich after this.
Looks like you hit a jackpot. Exactly 9999 words
Insta fave and like just because you're awesome ed.
Now to reading, yeah!!
Unless I missed it at some point during a previous chapter, am I right in assuming during this timeskip that Nim granted Sarah her dragon-like eyes to see better at night with?
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Yep
Though they 'come and go' depending on whether or not they're needed.
I kinda hope that 'stan' wasn't an actual incedent. Or at least one that didn't result one in rape
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It happened, though Sarah managed to avoid being raped. Still, it's the kind of thing that would cause nightmares.
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I wonder what other gifts/abilities may have been given to Sarah during this time. If that nightmare is any indication it hasn't been a very easy time for them.
As another thought, the more of those gifts/abilities she receives from Nim, doesn't that in itself make Sarah more "from Equestria" since such abilities did not originate on Earth or in the wasteland?
So after I complete my current McBadass Mercenary/Bounty Hunter playthrough of New Vegas I plan to revisit fallout 3 and fill it up with game enhancing mods, and quest mods. I was thinking of playing as Sarah, care to give me an absolute list of gear she wears? I recall only a few things. Hellfire Armor, scopped 44, jingwei's shocksword, what else?
4555719 at least she wasn't raped. That's good. But yeah that shit would be nightmare inducing
Would it be weird if Ethan happened to be in Equestria at the same time?
Hope we can see Duncwich and Nim reaction to it.
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They're completely separate 'verses' so yes, yes it would, also it won't happen.
So out of curiosoty are you planing on having a 'Other wandering' story set in 'this' world?
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Na, this is standalone
Alright so, this chapter was very good, with the exception of the nightmare. When it comes to writing nightmares, they can be very hard to write them well. The reader has to be able to relate, and really, you didn't do that. I found it hilarious until you explicitly said it was a nightmare. You didn't really set the tone for Point Lookout, and Nim's hick accent killed any mood there was. There wasn't any thing particularly scary about it, either. You got off to a good start, but kind of petered out. There is always room for improvement, though.
The rest of the chapter was great. You do a fantastic job with the chemistry between Jackdaw and Luna. I had a good laugh about the dream peeking. Luna and Celestia's conversation felt a bit dry; I think it stems from the emphasis you're putting on Luna's efforts. It is a big point of the story, I get that, but at this point it's just "Why can't I do it?" Anyways, the best part of this chapter was definitely the conversation between Jackdaw and Tornado. I was looking forward to interaction between them, and you delivered. You really opened up Jack past his comedic outside. He really cares about Luna, which makes him relate really well to Tornado. I saw the Cloud Kicker jokes from a mile away, but it was still really funny. Either way, it was awesome to put the focus on those sworn to protect the princesses. Nice job. All in all, this chapter gets a Dickless Stan/10.
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Eh, they are hard to write... personally I'd say it's more of a nightmare for Sarah then the audience because let's face it, we're hopefully never going to be dragged into a cave and almost rapped to death by a giant mutated hillbilly.
What were your thoughts on the Nim/Sarah bit?
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By itself, it's a cookie cutter reassurance scene. There really is no other way to write them, but you wrote it well for it's parameters. Since the nightmare resulted in aforementioned Sarah/Nim bit, Sarah and Nim's conversation's significance was reduced, but other than that, you wrote it how you should've.
So CLEARLY, the way Chrysalis is gonna summon her is by asking a boon of Ug-Qualtoth.
Anyone wanna take a gander at where his altar is, and what his holy book is?
Or you know, she goes with the original plan of tracking the love down.
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Huh, alright.
4555931 ..Now i kinda wanna see a non-canon of what would happen if they met...
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Ethan: Hia younger female version of me!
Sarah: ... the fuck are you talking about?
Ethan: Well you're me from a different reality and-
Sarah: I stopped caring, go away.
4556710 We all know he wouldn't leave.
He NEVER leaves.
Can we be expecting an "Other Wanderings" style side story, possibly featuring Sarah and Nim's adventures in the DLC's?
I really want to see what happened on Mothership Zeta and any other DLC that Sarah and Nim have gone through. PLEASE????
I feel like Nim is purposefully preventing their summoning to Equis...
I wonder if Sarah will get to meet Luna's father...
4556935 Or even give Nim a chance to get her own body via a changeling
Couldn't quite break ten thousand works in three chapters, huh? (you're at 9999 words as of this message)
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In the words of Jean-Luc Picard:
"Make it So!"
Maybe it's just me, but something Nim said last chapter, combined with a certain scene in the first story has me drawing parallels with a certain somepony. Is anyone else getting the same feeling?
I just wanna see Sarah and Nim reunited with Lu already. But alas one it's not my story and two, we must have a build up to it.
Only thing that I can say about Chrysalis' plan is 'Good luck with that plan bitch!'
Nim is going to mind-rape Chrysalis...
Theory: Luna can't use Nim as a focus for summoning Sarah because Nim is too closely linked to Sarah
4558482 depends, what scene in the first one?
Nim is actually keeping Luna from contacting her!!!
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8O
Mother of god...
Why did I not get any alerts?!
I'm mad now...
But awesome work on this chapter and nice work well done ^^
What happened to Fawkes.
4639969 CELESTA'S FLAMMING ORGASMS!! HOLY SHIT!!
4865042 You can't take companions to Point Lookout or The Pitt or Mothership Zeta.
Mothership Zeta going to be fun