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FlashKenshin77


Hay guys! Glad you stopped by! Just another writer trying to get better... and I love writing them pony fics... Also, Fluttershy is best pony. Just saying...

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With the defeat of Nightmare Moon, Princess Luna has returned. As she recovers from her ordeal, Princess Celestia takes steps to reintroduce her as co-ruler of Equestria. Many ponies, however, are not pleased with this and ignore her, just like they did all those years ago.

Cover art by SymbianL

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 6 )

I like it.

No that's too blunt...I really enjoyed it. Much better.

4570991
Thanks :pinkiehappy: Glad you do... :yay:

Ugh, that Shakespearean translator... :facehoof: your story would probably be better if you just wrote Luna's dialogue the same way you wrote Celestia's.

That aside, the story is okay. It feels very vanilla to me, which is not necessarily bad, just not great.

4571234
I know... I just wanted to see how it looks. I might just release another chapter but with normal dialogue...:derpyderp2:

It's not really difficult to read. You just have to know how to read it. Such as:

Doth = Do/Does
Any (') replaces a vowel
Not sure what yea replaces, but Nay is obviously No
I also do not know what Wot replaces either.

4572005
Yea is an affirmative, though not a direct equivalent for "yes." There are also some other issues with the translator as well. But for the most part, it is fair meet. :twilightsmile:

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