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bielart


too lazy to capitalize bio. what can you see?

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Despite being the elder sibling, Shadowlotus has been always under his sister's wings. Whenever someone annoys the boy, she'd be there for him. She always saved him. He always wanted to pay his 'debt' with her, although she always denied it and told him he owed her nothing. Shadow didn't feel the same way, until this day; when he finally get to pay his 'debt'.

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Comments ( 15 )

SHITTY STORY >:p :trollestia::trollestia:

Well, it is a cute story, I love reading sibilings stories,

You should write more of their adventures.

I liked the little sister :rainbowkiss:

4896759 *huge gasp* THANKS :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Brony Pacific 4023 deleted Aug 24th, 2014

4896691 I liked it a lot, not the typical sibling rivalry, but siblings loving, comforting, and looking out for each other.:twilightsmile::raritywink::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::yay::scootangel::eeyup::rainbowkiss::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: Just like Shining Armor and Twilight.:raritystarry::ajsmug:

T'was a good well written story. Though I do have to ask. What does this have to do with romance? :rainbowhuh:
Or am I just blind? :derpytongue2:

4899180 I thought like this; a romance can be something about love, and those two love each other in such a way. I almost broke my brain thinking about removing 'Romance', but I decided to keep it in there. Because they love each other.

Did I mention it's because they're siblings who love each other?

Well, I hope you understand ^^

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4899211
Oh...
OH...
OOOOOOHHH...
So they're like THAT. I was actually thinking that but I couldn't really see anything that hinted that. :P

4899218 Nope, not like: I love you, nee-san!

I love you too, Lotus-sama!

*kissu kissu*

More like only a normal sibling love :3

4899227
Oh. Then I apologize for my confusion.
But seriously though, I think you should get rid of the Romance tag. It shouldn't really be there (Cause, well, sibling love is vastly different from love love). People might (And probably will [Though an extremely small amount]) get angry over something as minuscule as this or they may just get the wrong idea.

4899254 Well, about these people I'm well aware and I don't care (look, it rhymes xD). My will says to me I shoudn't get rid of it and I won't. Because I don't care about trolls from this fandom. I'm also well aware you wanted to help, so please don't take it as an offense. plz :pinkiehappy:

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It's fine it's fine. :twilightsmile:
I just wanted to state my opinion. At least you weren't hostile about it. :pinkiehappy:
You got chutzpah.

The tags kind of worried me, but I found this enjoyable. You get a like. :twilightsmile:

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