After billions of years, the Four Riders of the Apocalypse have arrived in Equestria to Bring the world to it's end. Whilst Celestia realizes that fighting against them is futile, she cannot give up hope against the ponies she rules over. It's a battle royal of Twilight Sparkle, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Applejack, Fluttershy, and Rainbow Dash, Versus War, Famine, Pestilence, And Death.
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This has a lot of potential, but I feel the chapters are way too short. Get descriptive, make the battle flow, and don't drag out. Giving it a thumbs up for creativity though.
4486938 Thanks for the tips bro. The only chapters that are gonna be short are introducing the four Riders to be honest.
4486989 ah okay. Hope this all goes well for you. I'll add it to my read later.
Jeez! That went dark quickley!
lol, thanks. it's gonna get worse, don't worry XD
This is great
Thank you so much. it looks like this story's doing much better than my last story!
I still don't know this might end well for Equestia.....and still don't know about this story.......
4497935 I dont understand. Please explain what you're trying to say.
4501013 Well.
1. I don't know this might end well for Equestria.
And 2. I don't know what this story is about.
people? don't you mean ponies?
4501055 Ah, gotchya. Well bsically in the Book of Revelation, (Which is a real thing), it was said that four horsemen of the apocalypse would come to us during the end of times. This is pretty much what is going on for Equestria.
4527214 Well, considering the fact that they are anthros, and not really PONIES ponies, i went with people. To be honest i debated with myself over wether i should have said "Ponies" or "People".
4560010 Oh
so when is a new chapter going to be.
5734862 Holy crap, people are still reading it!? i'll get to work on it ASAP
5734862 Next chapter is up!
5752908 Well, about time for an update.
Luna be praised! Its alive
5753882 It's so nice to know people are STILL reading this. X3
....................
Woooo
what a rush
5757693 No thoughts? I mean i know this isn't my BEST chapter...
5806442 Eh, sorry. Seeing Celestia's death kinda shut me down.
5806565 ah. My bad. When people post "......." i think "oh shit did i mess up?"
They will fail and they will fail hard nobody beats fate (except kratos
)
5819243 Dante
5831379 they had to be based off each other in some way there just too similer and i havent played it but saw it played
5831495 ah. K.... Just to be clear we're talking about Dante from Dante's Inferno right?
5832703 and here i thought you knew what u were talking about i only know 2 dante's devil may cry and dantes inferno
5833064 i dont never played it but im saving up to try it out i only seen the cutscenes from the games and im reading that dmc crossover with applejack in it and i was talking dantes inferno is similer to god of war
5833100 so then what was all that about "and here i thought you knew what you were talking about"?
5833111 just me being mad that my game froze,me being bored because of it, and me messing with ya hence the trollestia
5833143 oh you S.O.B~
5833150 my bad if i made you mad im using an xbox 1 so dont worry about any u mad bro pics
5833159 nah, its cool. I can tell the difference between real trolling and friendly dicking around. BTW, Xbox? You're dead to me.
5833170 aint got the space or money right now for a ps3 i do however have a ps2 which was the greatest console ever
5833186 YUCHNITZ! You're alive!
5833188 that i am! its a miricle luna does exist PRAISE LUNA
5833221 oh just you wait for the movie quote in the next chapter~
5833227 cant wait to see them try and fail to beat the horsemen
5833238 i assume you mean the Riders
5833246 couldnt remember if it was just the mounts or if they did have riders im watching so many darksider crossovers but urs is the only one doing anything now
5833264 well, TECHNICALLY this isn't a Darksiders crossover, I'm just using that picture to depict what i thought War would look like. For example, Darksiders has Fury and Strife, while I'm using Famine and Pestilence. You know, the REAL biblical Horsemen/Riders. And they ride Motorcycles, JSYK
5833289 close enough for me to relate the 2 but see now im mixing up stories
5833313 so, before i hit the hay, just a quick question: you say you're reading other mlp crossovers with the Horsemen. What would THIS story rank on your list?