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Bubblegum


Just a regular, everyday, average guy whose shy nature and swirling emotions lead to somewhat interesting books. I hope you like them!

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Everyone knows that Octavia is Equestria's premier music mare, but where and how did she get her start? Finally obtaining an interview with her, Scoop Daily will learn every juicy detail with the help of his magical gifts...

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Glad to see this on fimfiction, will read! :twilightsmile:

potentially mane6/oc shipping makes me potentially annoyed :(


aw well, great story none the less. Thanks for the ride, its been great

Who's shipped with who in this fic? Just a pre-read question (secretly hoping for Octavia/Vinyl).

413612 Octavia x Vinyl and sorta OC x Luna. Don't really know where I went with that...

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Now going to read immediately.

This fic was sorta, WTB for me. The writing is excellent, as is the grammar, and you never once said hand (thank goodness). I can't help but feel that I needed to read a different fic to get more context for this one, but in the end I understood everything just fine. I also laughed when Vinyl tackled Octavia, and for that you get a thumbs up and a moustache :moustache:

Hmmm, I liked the fic alot though there are still some blank spaces that need to be filled in 'though its probobly just my curiousity', definitely "Thumbs Up" worthy.

Very good over all, & sequel? Hmmm... *Adds Bubblegum to Watch list*

This was an awesome story, and i loved the reference to the VST!

WHOOOOOHOOOOO
I love this story! Thanks for uploading it here!

Hmmmm... Where did you get that Earth Pony thing?

Wouldn't "horseshoes" make more sense?

... I feel like half of the story has been cut out, or that this is a sequel to a story that has not been mentioned yet I have not read.
What is the darkness that Scoop faced? How does he know Vinyl?
I also don't like how you said 'A young Bass Wind' and expected people to know about him...
One thing that is purely a question though, Octavia stressed private when talking about Bass Wind being Celestia's private chamber musician... is that supposed to imply that he could be more then simply a musician?

... I'm sorry. But I can't read one anymore.
This story... There is just TOO many variables left unexplained. Too many things which are simply mentioned yet not completely discussed... too many questions, too much confusion for me to simply continue reading.
Unless there is something else to read that answers these questions... I can't continue reading anymore.

636340 Read My Little Love Story and, when it eventually gets accepted by EQD, read Elyon's Fable. All will be revealed...

I had fun reading this fic, I'd say one of the best fics I've ever read :pinkiehappy: I was surprised that it ended though. But still, I hope you get to write more :twilightsheepish: Will read My Little Love Story soon dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Scootaloo_lolface.png

Had high hopes for this story but immediately became disinterested after it became another tired old VinylxOctavia esspecially when in the beginning it look to be a OctaviaxScoop at first glance. Might be a bit picky on my part since I prefer hetero couples but the Vin and Oct thing is old and all over the place plus never once enjoy the pair to begin with.

Despite my feelings on the shipping it is not the only thing which tore me away from the story though. It was also the confusing story twists and odd event which followed afterward that seem to derailed the story from how it began which just made me gave up on it all together. Basically, (to me anyways) this was a fanfic that had a good start then fell apart soon after.

Also yes I know the twist and odd event has something to do with your other story but can't say I have any interest in it and from the looks of how it was put in here seem quite shoe horned in, as it sticks out like a sore thumb.

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I actually agree with you on your second point; I diverged quite a bit from my original intent on this story, and it IS getting a re-write eventually. This was my very first fanfic, after all, and I had so many other great ideas for fanfics WHILE I was writing this one that they started to seep in from all directions. My humblest apologies. The primary reason for this was that Scoop Daily was MY OC, and I began to realize that I didn't just want to write a fic shipping myself with Madame Octavia.

Nevertheless, I'm afraid you'll just have to deal with the shipping pair. I think Vinyl and Octavia are ADORABLE together, even though I am not good at writing lesbian relationships. Perhaps I will write a second story, more closely depicting my original intent for this story, but that will not be for some time. If you want to see me at my best, wait a couple of days: the story "Under the Moon: All Fired Up" is some of my best yet.

Thank you for your criticism and have an excellent evening.

Love and Candy Kisses,
Bubblegum

wait, pinkie is octavia's sister?!? v:pinkiegasp:

I didn't know Pinkie and Inkie where Octavia's sisters..but makes sense cause Pinkie had two sisters :rainbowderp:

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