A recording of Vinyl's life story, from music school to how she became a world famous DJ. Along with everything in between, including a romance with Octavia, and how that relationship affects Lyra. How she goes from being a nerd to an outspoken and confident mare. And finally, why she first gets into DJ'ing. Along with lots of other good stuff of course.
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One or two cases of missed punctuation (and I'm not sure if the "ya"s you've got in there quite work) but otherwise, it's a slick start to what sounds like an awesome story.
Only problem I have is maybe a small pacing issue early on, when they're making friends and such.
Keep going, dude.
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Thanks for the amazing feedback.
More please! I really enjoy this story!
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Already working on it, I love this story as well.
I loved this story, moar plz.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Good job- although some parts went a bit fast in my opinion.
nah jaa where's the rest?
I like what you did with them giving each other their instruments, it's a new twist to the normal Octavia Scratch story, and it's nice.
This was very nice and very well written, i even liked the idea of them trading instruments!
10/10 for you
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Thanks so mch!
OH SHIT!
that's not good
good story anyways bro/sis/whatever it is that you call yourself
My reactions:
Oh...my...
At first I was like
, then I was like 
, and then I was like 
I enjoyed it, cant wait to see more
This chapter is soo great, i'm gonna read a second time.
My dad had said and with a snap of his fingers two big butlers approached me.
Wait what, fingers?
Anyway, it took a giganic change from new and clean to gritty and weird
But you did good 4.5/5
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Lol, I can't believe I didn't catch that!
As for the sudden change, life can change like that, thanks for the feedback.
Ok, this sory needs a sad, or possibly dark, label on it.
Lyra... what a bitch :(
Y U make Lyra a bitch? Bon-bon and her are one of my fav ships >_<
Decent story line but this chapter felt very, very rushed. The part with Lyra and Octavia seemed way out of context, like it was just thrown in to keep the story going without depth or reason. Also you might want to get a pre-reader or at least proof read, many spelling mistakes and grammar errors.
It did feel rather rushed, but it was still good. I read it 'till the end.
<- MFW I got to the end.
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Ya I know it felt kind of rushed, and thanks you all for the amazing feedback.
You see, I'm currently trying to work on 7 different fictions at one time, Reviewing multiple stories, and proofreading a few.
But no more excuses, the next one will be better.
Well, I imagine doing 7 fics would be a bit..hectic. Just take your time with each. Your readers will definitely appreciate the work you put into it. I anxiously await the next chapter.
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Thank you, I do it for the fans, I do it for people like you, but most importantly; I do it for me. I write because it's fun.
Great ending for Chapter 5
Now the suspense is killing me, but I can wait
"It's simple my dear friend, we have to explain our story,a dn why I was late to school, than you have to heal."
i think you might want to fix the dn on there
Lyra was knocked on hher
also might want to fix the hher
druggies who ahd trouble
.......
Bonbon didn't want much to do with the principal so she just said no to him. At least he ahd the common
yeah the ahd....
or what would ahppen to anypony else
Yeah........ uh..
aside from the those few mistakes the story was great, but it felt.........weird when pony's violence..... sorry,
anyway this was great, depression, then happiness and some closure, then darkness again, i also liked how you keep adding a lot of detail to everything, not that many brony's do that here, anyway i thank you for that,
anyway this is a 5/5 for this chapter
uhm... I'm a little confused about the end of chapter 3, how the heck did she know that the one grabbing her from behind was the same as the one that burned down Octa's house?
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Same cloak.
453489 yeah, but how did she see the cloak in the first place when she hadn't seen her (the house was lit on fire before she came there...)?
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Good point.
at the end there
I thought shattering and this came to mind
glass
I knew it!
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Right... I totally believe you!
Anyways, how was that chapter?
It was interesting! I was kind of hoping it'd be her parents or somethin, only cuz I don't want big evil gangster pimps to want my Vinyl dead.
Overall, it was good, got nothin bad to say 'bout it. Can't wait fer more.
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Ya, I figured that it wouldn't make any kind of sense to make some pimp gangster after her for only working for a single week. At least not put a hit on her, but you'll find out more next chapters.
The anticipation is palpable.
WHAT THE FUCK I MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!!!!
LISTEN TO THIS RIGHT
NOW!!!!!img.instructables.com/files/deriv/FLG/HVFE/FBHXD0M5/FLGHVFEFBHXD0M5.SMALL.gif
good story btw
Do you know how much i laughed at the line
( truth to be told sometimes it would be a good idea
)
please remember that food may not be taken from the cafeteria
Because where I'm from the cafeteria is just a shop separated from the dinning room with the tables, so my first tough was that the school forbid to eat at the cafeteria
Wow I can't wait for the next chapter now.
There must be a chapter 5!
will there be more?
I implore you to write more.