Moonlight Prism is, on the surface, a normal pegasus. But she's the bearer of an ancient secret. One that could jeopardize her relationship with Fluttershy and change the fate of Equestria.
(Small rewrite in chapter one. Possibly more to come. Also I started this story years ago so everything is set somewhere in mid season 4.)
She is... An OC.
(Bum bum buuuum!)
Sorry, had to make the joke where I saw it.
Actually I don't mind. I laughed.
i just read the first chapter, itis a perfect story so far. keep up the good work!
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Never read someone with a writing style so ALIEN to mine, and yet so attractive to me....
The third chapter is fine. I get what you were trying to do.
I'm looking forward to more from you! If you get stuck and wanna stretch your wings, do what I did, write a few one shots.
Good luck, and keep it up!
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