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Oh shit, they've done it now.
Their dead
Damn Cadence you scary!
Party time! Oh, and someone fetching the cleaning supplies, some ponies are about to wet themselves.
Oh. Well. Fuck.
I'm pretty sure that assigning the very guards who looked the other way during his kidnapping to the search for him would have been the polar opposite of "sensible".
They done fucked up.
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oh this is gonna be good
OH SHIT!!! they in trouble now BWAhahahahahahahahah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
They're fucked in so many different ways I don't even know where to start.
That is just hilarious, Skulltaker thinks he's all that. Looks like they're gonna need fresh bedsheets now.
Hehehehe, oh I can imagine the outcomes from her 'speech'
Smelter:*under the blankets* Don't sleep, Cadance will get you. Don't sleep, Cadance will get you.
Skullbreaker:...*wet his entire bed*
Higher: I'M A BAD PONY!
Hearth:*wailing tears*
They dun goofed son
ain't no mountain high enough
ain't no valley low enough
ain't no river wide enough
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to keep cadence form kicking your ass
5774985 It would be insensitive?
This is where you have a trusty henchstallion bring some tarps, you know, for the bodies.
*see's the beautiful master piece and wetly slaps inky appendages together in joy!* We respect this universe!
there are a couple of things you should never do to a women
1. mess with her babies
2. don't call them fat just there ass 2015 because having a phat ass now is hot
3. if you are another women don't try to steal there boyfriend/girlfriend
and finally 4. if a women has some serious power you especially don't fuck with the mate
this has been a public service announcement brought to by viewers like you thank you.
Oh shit
Should my be me?
It was at this moment, the clan leaders realize... They fucked up.
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If Ares took it as a sign of how much she really cared, sure.
The clip speaks for itself.
Those clan leaders went full potato.
NEVER go full potato.
That was beautiful. Lovecraftian eldritch horror in all its glory.
I̢͙ ͓̼͉͍̜͕̼͠f̜͚̦̱̟el͜t̫̯̫̯̤͙ ͉f̘͚͈̘͍̟e̶͙͕̤͚ar̩̘͙̺͕.̫̳̗̘̹̘͠ͅ ̺͚T͟r͚̗͕̖̮̙̹u̦̞̳̳̳̘̰͘e͎͙̗͇͚̥ ̺̼f̵̪̪͓̞͕̝̰e͍͔̭̗̜̳a͇̠̱̦̤ŗ.̪͙̜̼̞̦̟͞
Well done.
Hell hath no fury, indeed.
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oh shit...THAT cadance...only if his name was Alex...
Nice chapter, and I found some things you may want to edit.
That should be "two".
That should be "me".
And Ares' name suddenly changed for this one part.
good job keep it up see you next chapter
Who the hell is Anny?
I want Luna in on that, nightmare moon back in the house haha.
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no don't you put that my head don't put on me wait now that I think about it hmm
5775585 haha, it appears that mr. Author has his stories mixed up...
Anyone else feel the dark undertone of a Zamairiac story in this chapter because I sure as well did.
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mwahaha...or is he Xander? Or alexander? LE GASP!
Ding dong, Skulltaker leaks red, 'cause Cadence found him, and now he's dead.
I'm in the mood, so let's point out some grammar
Should be simple. Also, the paragraph immediately following this has some kind of formatting error. I think it's got an extra tab or space in front of it. I don't know.
Also
There is nothing wrong with this sentence.
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And
"The old" what? Er, "The old" who? I'm guessing it's supposed to be "The old pony" or something more descriptive but I can't say for sure.
Then
Something's wrong here, I'm sure you can figure out what's right.
That's all I noticed that wasn't stated already. Otherwise good chapter.
And thus Skulltaker learned the awful experience that is to shit himself.
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Kinda yeah
Needs that, otherwise Awesome chapter. I really want to see what happens to these ponies after Cadance gets to them
-Ambassador of the Changelings,
Dopple Ganger
Oh come on! I want to see what happens to them!
Hell knows no fury like a women denied her cuddles after a long hard day or two.
Make them SUFFER cadance! Nopony puts their greasy hoofes on your man and gets away with it! Yes! That includes Luna as well!!
It is funny considering Cadance will tell Luna about what happened to Ares later on. I wonder if they survive their unending nightmares.
I don't know how to gray the box but I found one.
“Show thyself, cetin! We can clearly see thee!” The Princess of the Night commanded,
“Show thyself, cretin! We can clearly see thee!” The Princess of the Night commanded, Missed R
Shit just got real.
well they are screwed. i love it
statclassy
And the pretty pink princess is sundly vary, vary, terrifying.
Why do I get a distinct feeling of "Ninth Circle of Hell"
Just read through and a found a few spelling/grammar/syntax errors
"Show thyself, cetin!" should be "Show thyself, cretin!"
"There thee are, Niece!" should be "There thou art, Niece!" "You" would be the subject, so it's "Thou." "Thee" would be for the direct object or predicate nominative.
"that one stallion that beat the shit out of my and Flash" - Should be "Flash and me" (note both spelling and order)
I know I just seem to be pointing out errors, but... let's just say I wouldn't bother if I weren't enjoying the story immensely. I nitpick because I care.
I believe Luna would say...
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A feeling of - fear.
Good, good, let the rightful hate flow through you.