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Please let it be like some kind of magical plague from a long lingering dark spell ... Next two victims yes
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Shut your whorse mouth.
Great work leading up to the reveal, and the set up is nice.... Just wish more happened.
The plot thickens...
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And bad idea number three; go down the dark spooky passage without telling anyone.
Ahhhhhhh, a glorious chapter well done, well done.
IDIOTS! WHY U NO TELL NO ONE
Good work.
Only in fiction does going to the bathroom mean plot advancement instead of just being an inconvenience
Flash Sentry you get back here and wash those hooves!
Just got through the first few paragraphs, so bear with me, I ask. Now that I think about it, it most definitely does make sense that the princesses would dismiss Shining Armor's relevant information that is entirely reasonable to lend an ear to that could potentially end these shenanigii (Yes, I said shenanagii, fight me) much quicker and with less risk to Ares and Cadance in the long run all for the simple reason that they believe him to be "tired". Oh wait, no that doesn't make sense.
I think Celestia and Luna at this point were only in power for so long because they live the lives of the ageless, not because of their ability to rule or their profound wisdom. Celestia fought the nightmare a few times and is generally intelligent, yet is unwilling to consider Sombra keeping records of it a possibility? Luna was consumed by darkness, yet calls Shining's information "nonsense"!? Nominal, is how they got their power, I'm led to believe at this point; no person, pony, or whatever else in this story with the ability to rub two brain cells together to produce anything resembling a coherent thought would be stupid enough to disregard such vital details! Arrogant, holier-than-thou imbeciles...
Edit: Also...
Ouch, right in the arachnophobia. Visualizing that makes the hair on my neck stand on end.
The bathroom truly is the most magical place in the house.
On a side note,
Tony: Pleasebeasecretdoorpleasebeasecretdoorpleasebeasecretdoor...
Yay!
I was really hoping when there were searching for a secret lab, this would happen...
An update within hours of reading the last chapter?
You are the best!
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At least Flash or Shining didn't get murdered or attacked in the bathroom.
It is said that the only times you see a character in the bathroom (especially with bathing) the character is about to get attacked, murdered, or have sex.
Shining is verifiably straight (banging Cadence for years with mutual enjoyment) and there is strong evidence of Flash being straight (romantic relationship with Twilight), so they weren't going to bang.
Also, they are both dead tired and Shining has been busy furiously rerolling his search checks.
Hiding the entrance in the crapper? Well that was a.......wait for it........crappy idea!!!
.......................Yeah that was bad, i'm sorry.
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Also just shameless fanservice
GM must be hella generous to give him that many...
Oh man! Can't wait for the next installment.
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The three that I listed are the old classics, butt() we can't forget the shots of the character's bare back and ass. So many nice asses...
It's been a while since I've played, but I think you can easily justify to most GM/DM's a search check reroll if you can say that your character is certain that something of value or relevance is in the room.
Kinda like your certain that your sunglasses are in your bedroom, but the third time you search it, is when you find it.
Chain-ex-machina
Brony on!
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Oooooh I wonder if shining is infected with the stuff or if the voice is somehow connected to the room.
Man Shining is being a class A idiot.
Improvement.
I see a drastic improvement from the first story to this story and in just this story I see improvement.
the spelling has always bean good. (I know I can not spell for shit so don't waste your or my time bitching)
the strange thing I see is extra words or words switched around.
ok now the story it is really good and I am intrigued as to ware this will all go.
I have a few ideas but I am keeping them to my self.
I will be watching and weighting for the next instalment of this grate story.
When are you next gonna update this? I've been reeally enjoying this so far, I need a conclusion or at least a continuation. Amazing job so far tho. I r8 8/8. One of the best fics I've ever read along with the prequel to this.
I feel like I'm in a d/d game. I LOVE IT !!!!