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My name is Rick Natalie
Age 19 and clock owner store
this story has few of my human life for a few chapter and the rest is ....... pony life and oooh.......... sorry sound like pinkie break fourth wall.This is the work of my crazy journey but not want you to know about spoiler future.Just read my life stories of human pony before this pinkie pie persona get to me so much and it not fusion.
(It between end of the season 1 and before the begin of season 2 of My Little pony:Friendship Is Magic)
(Art made by me and a few art application I using to make picture)(Will add more character of My little Pony in the stories that going to be use in this stories)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 22 )

I'm actually in awe of this. Excuse me while I have multiple aneurysms from this story, for my mind is simply too feeble to comprehend its secrets.

This is art. Pure and simply art. This is the human condition written in the form of MLP fanfiction. The horrors within speak to the basest of all human instinct and tell us the truths that we know lie deep within our consciousness. I came in expecting what rightly is poorly written, horribly made MLP fanfiction, but I came out enlightened to that which I perceived as humanity is naught but a speck in the dimly-lit void of the universe.

tl;dr - it's the best worst fanfic ever and I gotta give it an ironic thumbs up

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clock owner store

Obviously a shop where you go to buy a proud owner of a clock, they willingly sell themselves by agreeing to own clocks so it's not slavery :twilightsmile:

So is English your first language or are you just really really lazy when it comes to writing it? Part of this comes off as if it had been translated mechanically by babelfish or using a dictionary.

Props to you for trying to pull it off but you really need to speak to an editor that can speak English before submitting something like this.

"So this it and please my find wrong grammar and correct it."

Pretty much everything between "I wake up as usual i do" and "I go to my bed and lay on the bed and sleep to get a dream even i thought I hate loss memory but the good new i can't wait for my birthday." has pretty lousy grammar.

Comment posted by NeutralJS deleted Jun 7th, 2014

The cause of this story is my first language is melayu and islam and I am very weak on english and
Warren Peace thank you for your tip.I will use it many time

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The cause of this story is my first language is melayu and islam

my first language is melayu and islam

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Not sure if joking or not. I suppose you mean Arabic language since that is considered de-facto language of muslims, members of islam, around the world.

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Yeah I am a agama islam and a melayu and it not a joke to you but I am not mad at all.Maybe I suppose to make another story not about this guy who from another universe but my avatar story who is real in another universe.

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I love this. Unfortunately, in my current state I can't read it thoroughly for fear that it may cause another stroke. Or bring back my cancer... or give me AIDS.

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Well i gonna make another story in next week and it not gonna be the same like this story and craren will let me off this time.

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Ok but don't expect another story coming for a few day because I fasting(puasa).I have to cancelled Reid Neutral because it was the worst grammar for me.

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