You seem to have javascript disabled, or your browser is failing to execute it properly. Much of Fimfiction's functionality requires javascript so we suggest you turn it on!

The miniventures of Flame n Bud

Source

Silver Flame never asked for the power of the Sun and Moon but blessing or curse it is hers.

At least our favorite princess is helping Silver harness the power of flames.

Getting a roommate isn't easy; now try to get a new roommate and new powers.

A few catchy type cliche things to make you interestested.

Chapters (2)

1: Silver Flame · 4th Apr 2014 · 1,338 words
1,338
Download .txt
Download .html
2: Friendship is Bliss · 15th Apr 2014 · 949 words
949
Download .txt
Download .html

Comments ( 4 )

Viewing 1 - 50 of 4
- Newest First
- Oldest First

Dash The Stampede

Dash The Stampede #1 · Apr 4th, 2014 · 1 · · 1: Silver Flame ·

I came expecting weed and fun times, and I did not get either..
A slight error to include the weed pony and not write him/her in...

Dropped the ball here, mate..

~Dash The Stampede

Dementia Ravenmane

Dementia Ravenmane #2 · Apr 4th, 2014 · 1 · · 1: Silver Flame ·

Um, I gotta be honest...

You need to work on creating your OCs. Like, you need to work a lot.

I mean, this "Silver Flame" just fails to be interesting. If you ask me, she's a Mary Sue.

Look, designing OCs is difficult. You need to balance palette, power and personality. Unfortunately, you seem to give this one WAAAAAAAAAAY too much power.

Like, powers does not equal interesting. People are way more interested in reading about balanced and relatable characters.

dzv13