Lyra has always been obsessed with humans, but only three ponies know why. When she mysteriously disappears, the guards question her closest friends. Redheart thinks she knows what killed Lyra, but is she willing to pay the price of the truth? Redheart relives her experiences with her closest friend, and goes on a journey through the past that reveals more than she had ever known.
Looking for some cover art! The one I have now is temporary....
Small changes in Chapter 1!
This looks interesting enough to keep an eye on.
I hope to god the humans that are on the other side of this mirror are infinitely more bad ass than those other ones...
4303492 Oh, they'll be better! Just one question; How do you propose I make them MUCH MUCH better?
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More capable of defending themselves, for one...
4304729 If they do end up needing to defend themselves, it'll be MUCH better than in the movie!
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Good. The one thing that torqued me off more than anything else in the movie was the whole 'Humanz can't defend themselves, u must save them Twilight!!!1!' aspect.
4519169 Thanks!
4519293 Thanks for catching that! I'll change it now!
4519293 BTW, I plan on making the humans VERY capable of taking care of themselves, as I've hinted at!
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This pleases me.
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4519348 Good. I live to please.
This is what tagged blog posts are for.
i realy like this story I wish it wasn't cancelled