When Derpy finds a mystical muffin drop from the sky, and a certain zebra telling her it is cursed and should never be eaten, being the muffin-addict that she is, can Derpy summon the willpower to steer clear of that delectable, smooth, muffin?
....Yep. She's as good as cursed.
Muffins Ensue.
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It was cute but too abrupt.
@.@
That's one evil muffin.
Who would Hex such a food.
It will soon be a hot potato game.
With a muffin.
3/5
4346808 Yeah sorry about that, I kind of rushed because I wanted to post this story badly! Thank you for telling me what you think!
Silly Derpy being so cute.
That Costume...
Okay, I liked this story, but I noticed two things:
WOULD'VE KNOWN
And you have a few paragraphs at the beginning that are too big. They can be broken down. I believe it is customary in the English language to start a new paragraph whenever a different character speaks (IE not having Derpy and Zecora speak in the same paragraph).
4938909 Thanks! My partner in crime wrote this one, and I think she published it without editing.
Ten Derpys!
