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Radical Larry 106


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I've made plenty of mistakes in life, some small, most big.

But my latest screw up possibly cost me a relationship with the pony I love the most other than my fans. She says we're taking a break, but in reality, I know it's over. Lying is a big no-no for her, and I've done it too many times for her to trust me anymore. I've officially hit rock bottom, and the only thing keeping me from going any further is my fans. Regardless, I'm still at the lowest point of my entire life. Hell, I've even contemplated suicide. Nothing's going to help me get through this.

And to make matters worse, I've got one of the biggest crime syndicates the world has ever known to 'recruit' me into their ranks. Screw up one order and there is a slight possibility of death. Can you imagine what that's like for me? I think the biggest mistake I've made so far in life is not killing myself sooner.

(Teen for violence and language)

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what do you do when you have a criminal organizatoin after your ass in equstria?

get to twilight and ask for help. put simply if they go after you, they would have to get through the mane six. and if they hurt any of them, they would have wrath of two demigoddesses after their asses. and even if they do get you, the said demigoddesses will seek to crush it.
what chance does those whose power comes from fear and money have against those whose power is true and ingrained in every fiber of their bodies? who not only have the influence and guile of politics and money, but of true personal might to ensure theri goals are achieved?

4129280 Well, I wouldn't have made the story if it would be that easy. Not saying anyone would be powerful enough to prevent that from happening either.:raritywink:

4129328 well it is not exactly easy but it would make even the most powerful bad guy organization pause if they risked angering the regal sisters. those two are probably capable of jsut tearing thorugh whatever base of perations a mob like guy has and just destroy everything.
celestia and luna seem the type to compeltely wreck your shit if you are that evil. and probably trollish enough that after they leaves you guys bloodied on a floor to just use your stuff while calmly talking to you. celestia raiding your fridge, luna messing with your knicknacks, as you are sitting their half way to shitting yourself in fear after seeing these two basically take all your build up, shit on it, and then toss it aside like a ragdoll.

4129392 Hmmm, I see your point, but still, I have a lot of things to cover for the story and I'd rather not spoil anything in the comments section:twilightsheepish:

Hmm, interesting idea. I'd like to see where this goes. Keep up with the good work!

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