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They never are are they? It feels like there's always something more to religious orders then them just being religious groups
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Well, I mean they are a religious order based around Jaeger, and nothing's ever normal around him. So that's to be expected.
Don't worry, though, not every religious person in this story is going to be a complete zealot.
I don't know why this doesn't have more views, it's a pretty good story. I'm not gonna sit here and say it's the greatest thing since sliced bread but it's a solid piece.
Dante is a pretty likeable guy bit OP but it's a more believable power level compared to some other stories.
The Imperium is a interesting nation to be sure and I'm looking forward to learning more about it.
The writing is solid, no misspelled words and the grammar is good. Conversations flow great and the pacing is reasonable.
Not much else to say besides this is a pretty good story, the time in-between updates makes it seem like it might not be completed for awhile, but it's a good enough story to be worth the wait for the next chapter.
Will this story be continued or is it dead?
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I'm still working on it.
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Well, nothing you can do about earlier works I guess
Well, except learn from them and to improve yourself