Part 1: My Little Falls~ A GF and MLP Crossover

by Clover Skies

Mystery Twins

As Mabel re-appeared in the bedroom she and Dipper HAD shared, she was glad to have legs and arms and fingers, not hoofs, long ears and a tail. But she saw Dipper behind her, in human form, and the portal closed.
“Wha-? NO!”
Mabel tried to grab the portal, but it disappeared in thin air.
“NO!” She punched the wall.
“Mabel,...I didnt mean all those things I said--”
“WELL IT SOUNDED LIKE YOU DID!!”
“Mabel just let me finish, I really truly didn't mean to say that. I guess I let stupid things come before important things.”
“What is stupid and important?!”
“My love life is stupid and my twin is important.” She looked at him
, “You sure you're not lying?!”
“would I lie to important people?”
“DIPPER!!”
“W-what?!”
She hugged him and sobbed, “I WANT MY TWIN BACK!” She hugged him tighter.
“Don't worry Mabel, Ill always be here for you.”

Comments

[Clover Skies]

pinecest235's new USERNAME IS pinecest11!!!!!! JSYK

[pinecest--yea]

YAY! OMG THX LINDA PONY! PS GREAT STORY (WE) MADE

[EnderW0lfCraft3r]

Dipper and Twily shipping = spot on! Great JOB!

[Clover Skies]

4086753 pinecest11 is posting Part 2 soon!

[Texus]

i have to say good story but i don´t really understand why the only thing they could do is to go back to thiere world. Well i have to say i find it always kind of sad if friends go differend ways in animes ect. like this.

I hope there would be maybe a second storie and more Twilight and Dipper lovestory :)

ps: if you make another story please don´t let it and so soon.

[Clover Skies]

4086926 They could go back whenever they wanted, cuz they have the spell. But they probably need a few days/months/however long to get back to normal again before going back, u no? but parts 1, 2, and 3 are already written, so idk if i can make them longer.... Sorry! And thanks

[Texus]

4087325 i hope it don´t sound mean or something, but im not sure that my english is that perfekt.
I think i was only excited about the storie, it was really fun to read and it´s always more fun for me to read other stuff than think about a storie myself.

i think it´s because i don´t spoiler myself^^ I start maybe an own story but i try not to use other ideas deliberate :)

[Texus]

i want to ask again is there a second story with him and Twilight? I don´t know where to look is there anything ready yet?

[Clover Skies]

4238812 Sorry, I told my friend she could post the next part, but I guess she's been really busy. I'll continue to nag her until she does

i hope it don´t sound mean or something, but im not sure that my english is that perfekt.

IT SOUNDS SO MEAN. HOW CAN YOU BE SO MEAN!?

...JUST KIDDING!

I don't care if your English isn't that good (your words, not mine )! It's not mean at all, at least not to me. And if you do write your own story, I can't wait to read it!

[Texus]

4238943 well ok thx. I try to make my own story already more or less is just write something and try do decide wich kind of story i want to try first.

Let´s say i have a few ideas and try to decide wich is mature at most. I know yet a bit better who hard it can be to make progress in a good story. I think i just have to find my style.

[Clover Skies]

4241214 Yea. One of the hardest things (in my opinion) about being an author is about finding what style works best for yourself. Romance? Adventure? Tragedy? I'm still trying to figure it out for myself. But yea. Just write different types and see what works best for you! I'm excited to see what your style/stories turn out to be

[Blaze Evergreen Sparkle]

.....that's how I feel. PLEASE LET IT BE ANOTHER CHAPPIE! OTHER STORY

[mlpsuperfan]

I'm sorry, but this story is kinda rushed. The chapters are extremely short and it feels a little bland. This is kinda sad, since I love Gravity Falls, and Mabel and Dipper in Equestria is a fun concept. If you had fleshed this story out a bit more, it would have been much better. Keep writing, and sorry if you find this offensive.

[TwilightShipper]

Cute ending but...THE DIPLIGHT SHIPPING!!!!