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The Cake Devil


I've been told I always have a comment on everything. I take that as a compliment to my quick wits.I'm an editor on FF, if you need any help, give a shout. Sincerely Yours The Cake Devil

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((Warning, this story takes place after the events of the Christmas party from Friendship and Mysteries.))

Princess Celestia. Co-Ruler of Equestria, former bearer of the Elements of Harmony, and raiser of the sun.

Stan Pines. Ruler of the Mystery Shack, former bearer of a legal drivers license, and raiser of prices.

Put them in a romantic setting in a pricey restaurant, and only magic can happen.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 22 )

I skipped passed the story to get to the comments to say *in a cartman from south park voice* OH Heellll no

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Well alrighty then :derpyderp2:
Can't please everyone.

4136692 no just the topic makes me sick. Imagine this "gruncle stan, WHY is there a giant white winged unicorn in the mystery shack?"


Mabelle
"Can we keep her?" PLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *five hours later*eeeeeeeeesee????"

4136706 that might not seem bad but after awile... I have To GO PUKE NOW so gdbye

This is hilarious. Would be even better as a full story of romamce and cheap-scating.

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Dear Alpha.

Why thank you dahling. I'm actually planning on this being a three parter. Just a little treat for the people waiting on my other Fan fic.

Glad I could entertain.

Yours Truly, The Cake Devil.

lol that was a cool story can't wait till Mabel and Dipper come to play not that I am telling you what to do this story is awesome.
also

Princess Celestia. Co-Ruler of Equestria, former bearer of the Elements of Harmony, and raiser of the sun.
Stan Pines. Ruler of the Mystery Shack, former bearer of a legal drivers license, and raiser of prices.

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Sorry I didn't get those edits to you before you published :facehoof: Do you still want me to go through?

You did a really good job with the chapter. It always impresses me how well you can capture the tone of the two shows. I also got a lot of second hand embarrassment when Stan got found out for stealing the silver wear.

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Dear Insula,

Oh no reason to beat yourself about it, no harm done. I understand your a busy man with your own fic on your hands. But if you'd like to take a look and let me know what error I may have missed, that would be very much appreciated. If you have the spare time that is.

Yours Truly, The Cake Devil.

P.S. The one I have posted is the one I have doen the most editing on.

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Oi, no need for the gloom, just cause I don't keep you gents updated doesn't mean I've given up on it. In fact, if I were you, I'd be expecting a chapter any day now.:raritywink:.

Sincerely Yours, The Cake Devil.

dear mr.cake devil
this has made me feel better and I can't wait for more :scootangel:
from Twilight 517828

I guess Celestia knows how I feels to loose your sibling for a very long time... I'm listening to lullaby for a princess and if it was made more manly it could work for Stan and Ford! Idk I'm just spit balling ;) good story by the way!

I only read this for the sheer "what the heck" factor of the idea of Celestia and Stan on a date.

Looking at the last update, I guess its unlikely you're going to update this. Bummer, I was curious to see what you where going to do with this ridiculous idea.

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Dear Mr. Knight.

As of late, I've been rather absent from my projects on this site. College has sapped away most of my energy, but seeing as to how my most recent school semester is over, I'll be jumping back on the fic train, for a while at least. I can't promise, but I'll try to show a little love to my most neglected brain child within the coming weeks.

Glad I could entertain, sincerely Yours, The Cake Devil.

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*Ms. :derpytongue2:

Understandable, life comes first. I just recently finished my first fanfic in ages, so I can sympathize. (A Gravity Falls crossover of my own. I was checking out what sort of crossovers others have written which was how I found yours.) Anyways, no need to rush, but if you do end up updating, I got this on my watch list. :twilightsmile:

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