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I think you did a great job with Shinning armor's character. This is awesome. Thanks for the update. I can't wait for the brawl next chapter.
Next time, Ghost Pony Rider and Shinning Armor vs Sombra.
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6640426 I am going off the Marvel Knight version of Ghost Rider, and adding a bit of my own flair to it. I am sorry you don't like it.
6640446 I personally like this version above all.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=Emg14MOMDgU#t=2
just a little something for right after Shining Armor makes this comment. . “Now let's send these bastards straight to hell where they belong!”
sorry thought I got rid of that add
Not sure if that was more awesome or if Shining was more awesome. I guess the tiebreaker is the next chapter.
IT'S BACK AND ALONG WITH A CLIFFHANGER!!!!!
So the Ghost Rider vs Sombra aw yeah.
oh god
6641231 Oh I remember the cliffhangers you make in a wolf among ponies.
But great chapter! loved it and I think Shining was well written... Though I hate cliffhangers since I just want to read everything now, but I think it was a good placed one.
6641231 Sombra will become Tirek's bitch in Tartarus
Well it's good that Shining did end up struggling near the end or I would've accused him of going to the Call of Duty school of being a one man army. I know he had a squad, but I didn't know what they were doing. For all I know they were cleaning their ears out with their spears!
But overall this was awesome! But I'm a sucker for fictional destruction! Now time for the Ghost Rider to have his light snack before moving on to Blackheart! (Or was it Darkheart?)
Keep on writin' Cap!
Woop, anoter good chapter bruh .. despite already having read it heh heh
6641862 It is Blackheart heh
6641967 he just destroys those who dont have soul. Trust me im huge Ghost Rider fan. He's my all time favorite Marvel character
6642284 Then you should know this is a combination of the Marvel Knights, MC2, and the original 3 part mini series of Ghost Rider
6642299 But those are all different versions of him, you cant just go mixing them together. Now true i cant make you change it, but you really should choose just one version and stick with it. Cause to me, this isnt Ghost Rider, its a cheap, and poorly done imitation
6642314 Have you read the entire story?
6642344 after the first chapter i was so disgusted at how you portrayed him i stopped
6642350 Lol. You are a fun one. Well until you read the entire story, I shall simply assume you understand Marvel as much as Fox does.
Also, before you judge others works so harshly write some stories here first. Simply, I can't take your word seriously till then.
Have a great day! Also, did you hear the Ghost Rider is back under Marvel's control?
6642356 i know a lot about Marvel. And im not a writer, never will be and yes i did know that. There are also rumors that they're going to make a netflix show for each of the characters they got back. Daredevil is already on, and the rumors are about shows for Blade, Punisher, and Ghost Rider
Whelp. Nice knowing you Sombra.
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It's fine that you're defending your work (and I agree that using bits of lore from multiple versions can be a fine way to write another version/spinoff of a character, even though one has to be careful to keep them in such a way to make the character interesting and compelling), but... don't go saying "I can't take your criticism as valid unless you're a creator yourself." Criticism is still valid if it doesn't come from a creator, after all.
I'm hyped as shit right now
6642356 KO awesome chapter can't wait to see Ghosts Rider and Shining Armor vs Sombra it's gonna be AWESOME.
Wow. Okay, that was pretty brutal all around.
I can't say how accurate your portrayal of Shining is, but I always like to see the good guys' militaries/police actually put up a decent fight before the local super powers show up to finish things, and I got an awful lot of that here.
On a different note: Geez Sombra, even for a "classical" villain like yourself, that gloating monologue was a bit much. I realize that you've literally become a comic book bad guy at this point, but did you really have to outline the pointlessly cruel fates of Shining's entire family when you were just going to kill him anyway? I would understand if you were going to cripple and torture the guy, but you were just asking for a heroic intervention.
6647944 Because your just as messed up as I
6647963 ... That explains so much in my life. hahahaha
Good seeing you again sombra. Hope they saved your spot in hell.
On a off note. I'M SO DAMN GLAD THIS STORY IS BACK BABY!
6649594 I don't know if I would use the word dumb, but I am glad you kept going! A lot of people get hung up there, and don't go any further. There is a purpose for her being there.
6647578 He should just be happy he can talk. Besides, after being quite for so long wouldn't you want to monologue like Sento Kaiba?
6772123 I just wanted to. That is as far as my logic goes.
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Because he wanted to establish that part of his character. And if I had a dime for every gay guy I've met who used to have crushes on girls, I'd be able to retire early. Or maybe even it's just Spike trying to prove he's not gay by trying to get with the most beautiful girl in town? Trying to throw off suspicion?
And of all the stories to complain about homosexuals, why pick this one? How many damn stories are on this site where every ember of the Mane Six is gay?
6777358 Idk. Answers will be given in time. As for why I did chapter 9 the way I dod, it's because I wanted to. It's the same way I would have done any other couple. Hell, I've done far worse
Damn the badassness is almost overbearing......lol nice job!! Keep up the awesome work Cap!
Also plz update soon this is one of the best stories on this site!!!!
6839215 Because a gay couple in real life I know does the same thing. Both are frat and jock as can be, and they none jokingly call each other babe
Not only did I cringe when Flash saluted Shining during a battle, but I also facepalmed.
In the Military, we call this "sniper check" because the enemy would love to destroy the chain-of-command by taking out its leader.
Moral of this, do not salute your superior while out in the field. (Unless you hate them lol)
7152836 haha yep, don't want the enemy to know who your CO is.
Sombra vs THE GHOST RIDER!