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Man this is intense. And somehow I think this evil soul is the bad guy in this story. And I forgot what universe Ghostt Rider is from. His own, DC or Marvel. I feel like an idiot for not remembering.
4102526 Marvel.
You asked for a review in your blog. Well, I'm horrible at reviewing, so I'm just going to say this story's great. Advice for the future: feature a cameo from another character in the marvel universe, who it doesn't matter, or even have another character do something important and really help the Ghost Rider. Or really help Mac and not even realize s/he is in the presence of another superhero/antihero. And possibly do an extra run through for errors like the ones I spotted to make it flow better, although since every story including many professional published ones have mistakes so it's forgivable. I could even proof read for you if you want.
4116006 The cameo is not another Marvel character, but they do have a important role.
4119685 What is it with people and cursing when they read this story? Because I fucking love it!
That... was... so awesome!! i would enjoy it more if my head didn't hurt like a migrane! have to read again!
I think you intended to say "Naughty, naughty," which refers to negative behavior, as opposed to Naught which means literally "nothing" as in: We are innocent and have naught to fear from this evil Spirit. (Stallion of the Cimmeron?) LOL couldn't resist allowing my stream of consciousness to overflow its banks.
I shamelessly loved this violent and brutally bloody chapter!
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Wow, man. You're very observant. I wouldn't have noticed that.
Thought about being a proof reader?
This is really good so far.
Two chapters in and I give it a so-so the grammar isn't sparkling, but the ideas redeem that well enough.
The last time I've seen this much swearing was when I walked into an R rated movie