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Wow. I was wondering when Blackheart would emerge in this story. I guess now Mac has to save the princesses. The question is now, will he sign the contract or not? Great job with this chapter.
Featured as of 2/18/15.
DON'T TRUST HIM! huff...hufff! sorry outta breathe. If I'm reading this right the gates of hell are gonna open either way. If mac and Rider put Blackheart down the devil will simply use the seal that the Rider just so happened to draw to open the gates. If the Mac and the Rider fail Blackheart will open the gates himself. Either way Ponyville is gonna feel the fires of hell.
Is it just me or did Brae's shoulder hiss at the Devil? May haps it had something to do with the fire the Rider used to heal him? Making it an evil detecting wound?
If Mac does sign the contract once the gates open there will be nopony to stand up and fight...
Can't wait for more!!!
He will accept the contract but i believe that will have the same ending like the movie
Okay, yeah, but they were DRAGON children. I mean, come on, the majority of dragons are total jerks. Karma-wise, that's gotta be a wash.
Really, he gets ponies like Mac to sign his contracts by offering him amazing deals and then forcing them to "sign" before they can read the terms.
I'm POSITIVE that if Mac had seen any notes about demons in the original agreement, he would have asked to have a lawyer present.
Man, I dunno. I'm kind of seeing this from the Devil's angle, here. Made some mistakes, learned from them, had kids, kids entered that rebellious phase where they try to destroy the world... We all know how teenagers get.
He specifically wants Big Mac to STOP a huge massacre and upending of the natural order. And though I wouldn't touch that contract with a ten-foot pole supported by a bomb-disarming drone controlled via magical telekinesis, kicking the kid's flank without the contract seems totally win-win. I feel like Mac isn't giving the Devil a fair shake just because he's the physical embodiment of all earthly evil. That's prejudice!
I mean, when he started flashing images of Rainbow Dash, Mac immediately assumed he was making a threat, when all he was trying to do was tempt Big Mac with glimpses of a happier future. TOTALLY threw off his pitch. Love and tolerate a little, Mac! Give Satan a chance!
Awesome Chapter but if Celestia and Luna die you die along with them got it.
HOLY SHIT BRUH WE GOT FEATURED!???
5644306 For a hour lol
5643797 But I'm already dead
Interesting developments. Good job.
Ya-know, when Mac/Wild Blaze/Ghost Rider, finally break free of Bleeding Heart, I DON'T feel the least bit sorry for the devil.
lol I'd more expect Mac to toss the contract, and make it a simple deal sealed with a hoofshake.
5646643 Too bad the Devil does not work that way
5646719 Yeah... I get the feelin that shit is gonna go down, and someone important to Mac is gonna get hurt
5647234 Muhahahaha!
5649170 you evil Son-of-a -diamond dog... lol
5649170 5647234 He knows....
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I find this so funny, that I like kinda already know the story, defiantly the ending and people are nowhere near close MWA HA HA
P.S You want me to colour the rider pics that I messaged you, as in actually drawing him under the other stuff?
5655911 If you got time, yes please!
5656171 I wouldn't offer if I didn't have the time Bruh, i'm on the 2nd one so should be done soon, I'll upload it to my stash and PM you on Da
5656204 Your the real MVP
5656215 Heh, message sent.
5656311 You didn't attach the link
Daaaaamn, shit's gonna go down. Great update, Cap.
5663306 Thank you for the fave!
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This is in four of my bookshelves now... Just had to add it to the M/F one because you finally added the Romance tag.
5663428 A fave is a fave!
5663876 Your profile picture is perfect for that comment lol
I really wish that I have internet at home, now I can only read it once a week, and Well I can't say anything that has not being said already by the others. So I will wait for the next update and.
I want to see the pictures too!!! XD
Until next time!
5667101 What pictures?
5667111 Karma had been sending you fan arts of this story!! XD Besides, don't take me too seriously XD
Stupid internet conection, I hate you so much!
5688573 Pun intended?
You know what? I like this fic, I really do but there is one thing I want to bring up. Its not something unique to the fic, and so far its not something that is ruining the fic for me yet. Basically, in alot of crossover fics the MLP setting gets "gimped" in order for the problems and issues of the second setting to work. In this fic the Mane 6 are no longer have the Elements, which is a big deal considering they lost them in the show too. However it doesn't seem like there is anything standing in the way of the things the Rider fights. Yet we know this isn't exactly true, both the Crystal Heart and the Fire of Friendship could possibly be used in a pinch to fight off one or more of the demonic and monstrous enemies he fought. Then again due to the nature of the MLP setting the Mane 6 isn't exactly proactive in their efforts to harmonize everything, well not until S5 with the map and whatnot.
This does bring me to one major point that seems to be either written off and I missed it, or ignored altogether. Where is Discord? He, of all the foes that MLP has produced, seems to be something the Rider would love to get his hooves on. A massive, seemingly all powerful tyrant, who has successfully conquered the world twice over. Who warps reality as easily as one would cross the street, and drives ponies insane for laughs. The only reason he ever loses is because of his ego. This does take place after the S4 Premier if nothing else, so he should still be around. Why isn't he playing some role in all of this? Has the Rider already taken care of him? Would the Penance Stare even work considering Discord was able to no-sell Fluttershy's stare, which is sort of a low leveled version.
Also what about the Tree of Harmony? What role does it play in the battle between angel's and deamons and the like? What would happen if Mac got near it? Considering Its holding back the Everfree, and has done so for thousands of years, even without its Elements, means its got alot of purification power. Heck, Discord was more willing to play a long game to drain its magic than risk confronting it directly after he had already turned the whole world into his personal playground, something eventhe Devil doesn't seem to have been able to do. Would it kill Mac? Would it simply purge the Rider from him?
All these question pop up in my head from time to time when I read a fic. Especially when its a fic that I enjoy. Most crossover fics tend to do this too. Ignoring all these other magical artifacts and super beings, and replacing them purely with the second settings magical artifacts and super beings. It hasn't ruined this fic for me yet, but I am immensely curious about it. If you have a plan already in place for these things than that would be awesome! I will happily keep reading to see how this all plays out.
5688664 Tis been a month. You gonna get back on the story anytime?
5778049 Eh
5778888 thats a nope.
5781178 It's in progress. I just hate when people ask me for updates.
5781187 It's been four months! No way people won't ask!
5781200 Uh... it's been like three weeks...
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Blasphemer! The devil brings nothing but oatmeal raisins to the Dark side meetings! Do you know how hard it is to convince people to the Dark side, with OATMEAL COOKIES!
Guy's a dick end of story. Last time I invite him to the feast of evil Intent. Gracious my flank.
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Okay, I'll give you that his taste in cookies is sub-par, but at least he's contributing! That jerkass Asmodeus hardly even shows up.
I'm just saying, we're not giving credit where credit is due.
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And what is wrong with Oatmeal Cookies?! They are quite frankly my favorite cookie! Maybe we should start inviting the Devil to the super, duper, ultra evil, top secret, one of a kind, evil, dark, twisted, evil, darkness ensured, evil, soul eating terror, burning alive, worse than any prison, evil club. For the most evil. We only got five members.
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Screw his subpar taste in cookies, if he don't man up and bring some, Celestia-damned nutter butters next time Imma shame him on EvilTube.net! Let's see how he likes that video of him drunk-seducing Zeus last weekend when we had the Good/Evil God bachelor party! Bet he'll think twice about messing with the cookie LAW!
And hell no we aint letti' Satan into the S.D.U.E.T.S.P.E.D.T.E.D.E.E.S.E.T.B.A.W.T.A.P. Evil club. And besides we're at 6 now, I let Hades in last week, you need to keep up on the memos. Also Fenrir and Loki are at the gate. Not to sure about those guys but Loki brought
Reese's peanut butter cookies. The bastard...He knows my weakness, that's the kind of conniving asshole I want on the council. Man knows how to play the game and play it well. Unlike someone's oatmeal bringing ass.,
5783536 Obviously we are not talking about the same club. Hades is not evil, he just got tricked into running the underworld, and I am not letting in a guy who was impregnated by a horse. I am talking about the most evil people ever. Who have killed hundreds of thousands in their names... they are so evil... no one thinks they are evil.
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*rereads last part*
Wait....what? There is no such thing as a overcharged killing value! Dammit, this is why we had this on the agenda for workshops next month! Daammit all! Jason, get your ass over here! We got some reorganizing to do in the cellar. Bring the subjects in one piece this time, I'm not cleaning up like last time with the pool incident!
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Y'know, i almost bought the devil's bullshit. Until i remembered - y'know - he's the devil.
5807916 Amen to that. Braeburn's dad seems smart because those are words to live by. Especially if the Devil is involved.
You planing on put making a sequel with Rainbow Dash being the Ghost Raider Arent you? >W>
( Like Big Machintosh= Ghost rider( Nicolas Cage ) and Rainbow Dash= Ghost rider ( Robbie Reyes or even his Older form Phantom Rider (Sam Elliott) )