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Awesome! Can't wait for more!
Well. Good to know there's NO POSSIBLE OTHER SPIRITS OF VENGEANCE.
*Tries to hide Kale and Vengeance*
NONE WHATSOEVER.
Good chapter
That is an EVIL cliffhanger. I want to know his answer SO BADLY NOW!
Has anyone ever made the comparison between Bentgrass and Constantine?
'cuase that just hit me full in the face.
KO awesome chapter, well the cat is out of the bag now as Big Mac is reunited with his sister as she wants nothing but to have her brother home again.
Very emotional chapter. Great job sir!
Frankly, Mac has suffered so much already. Just hope Princesses could heal his blind eye - like counter devil magic with light magic?
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Please do
Haven't read the story yet, but plan to. Just wanted to point out that's you seem to have trouble with the difference between "its" and "it's". You used it's when its was supposed to be used twice. And then used its when it's was necessary. Its a common mistake to mix it up so I'm not upset, I just wanted to give you a pointer on how to correct and remember how it works.
"It's" is the only one you have to remember. It is the contraction of it is. Therefore always say the sentence with it is to see if it fits, if not use its. For examples:
"A Spirit of Vengeance so old and ancient that not even the Princesses know of it's true power." What you wrote.
"A Spirit of Vengeance so old and ancient that not even the Princesses know of it is true power." What it is with is.
"A Spirit of Vengeance so old and ancient that not even the Princesses know of its true power." What it should be.
"The only problem is its in Ponyville, and Mac has not been home in five years, because everypony knows, Big Mac is Dead." What you wrote.
"The only problem is it is in Ponyville, and Mac has not been home in five years, because everypony knows, Big Mac is Dead." What it is with is.
"The only problem is it's in Ponyville, and Mac has not been home in five years, because everypony knows, Big Mac is Dead." What it should be.
I hope this helps you to remember the difference between it's and its. I know what it's like to struggle with grammatical problems like that myself, I justness find ways to teach myself around them.
PS: I did see a couple more slight issues that could be easily improved upon but felt I've given enough in this comment. Ifyou want me to give you any more tips, feel free to ask.
this chapter was just.... too perfect for me NOT to post this.
Rather fitting, if you ask me.
Just so you know, I now hate Applejack. I hate most characters who lash-out like that because they're too emotional, fucking bitch. She has the fucking gall to beat the shit out of her older brother then practically beg him to return home.
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I appreciate that, I suggest in the future you private message the writer about errors instead of comments
This is gonna be an awkward reunion with Applebloom, what with the flirting and all.
I'm imagining that the reunion with Apple Bloom will be interesting, as well as heart wrenching.
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I will remember that next time I see an error in a story. This is the first time I've been called up on that. Thank you.
What a Hell of an adventure it's been! I'm hoping for a sequel, but at the same time, it'd probably be best for Mac to get some respite after all this. What are your plans after you finish, Cap?
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There will be a sequel of sorts. Going to be a series of shorts from when Pendragon was still alive, the give years Mac was gone, and other things. Kind of like my drunken ramblings on Jake the Army Guy's page
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This is what I'm waiting for.
New reader, binged it, can't wait for the last two chapters.
Don't keep us waiting for too long~
So last Read this was when chapter 10 was the most recent chapter. And I just re-read the entire thing, amazing story btw. Any who I can believe I let myself sit on chapter 10's cliffhanger for 3 years.
And then Blackheart found out about Equestrias New Jersey and felt his own attempts at a Hell on earth scenario would have been redundant
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What would Equestria's version of New Jersey be? If Appleloosa is Texas and Manehattan is obvious Manehattan, what would New Jersey Equestria be?