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I saw this coming for some reason.
Whelp, that escalated quickly.
. . . and "Ghost Rider: Spirit of Vengeance", meets "Drive Angry"
HUZZAH!!!
I see the Blue Flames from the Spirit of Vengence has made an appearance...I don't know why I watched the sequeal to the Ghost Rider, twas pretty silly.
Ah well, secret revealed! The MacDash finally happened and...well she took the Big Mac being the Ghost Rider pretty well...REALLY well, if ya know what I mean
Great chapter, keep it up!
And yet he threatens them anyways.
Also, is it just me, or is Rainbow Dash an absolute idiot in this? She chases down an evil spirit known for mass murders and expects him not to kill her. I mean, from Rainbow's point of view, he could very well catch her, murder her, then fly away to another town.
And I just realize that this story completely glosses over Discord. You can't just ignore someone with that much power. Sure, it'd mess up the story if he's involved, so you make an excuse for why he doesn't meet up with the new evil spirit in town. If you can write away Princess Celestia and Luna personally tracking down Discord, you can write away Discord. But you shouldn't ignore him completely. Or maybe you did mention him ten chapters ago and I forgot because it's hard to remember a single sentence over the course of several months.
5092876 Only problem.... will she keep the secret?
5092982 ...Knowing Dash, probably not...Or maybe her loyalty to Mac will get her to keep the secret...Or her loyalty to AJ will get her to tell AJ...I guess only time will tell.
5093072 Or a large conflict of loyalty
5093098 Indeed...That would be very interesting.
5092979 I just haven't found a place for Discord yet. Why would he have any reason to even go after the Ghost Rider? I will try to come up with something later on, but I don't know where to put him. I have already mapped out the entire story, so its hard to go back and add in new things.
Then again I have not shown my hand yet, so many things are still unknown.
Great chapter. Things are unfolding quite nicely. I imagine we will soon find out the story about what happened to Big Mac and the reason why he carries the Spirit of Vengeance inside him.
Ghost rider you are just like sunny butt and discord in more ways then one.
5093329 Huh?
5093334 the ghost rider is just like miss sunny butt (princess celestia) and discord. in other words a string puller and a tricky bastard. like discord
5092979 Rainbow's the Element of Loyalty, not Common Sense. Or Good Judgment.
5094030 I know that Rainbow doesn't have the best judgement, but this is tracking down the Ghost Rider, not the author of the Daring Do series. This idiocy is on level on trying to fly into the sun to prove that you're a great flier. Considering she hasn't flown to the sun yet, I feel that Rainbow's OOC with how extreme she is with proving she's cooler than Wild Blaze to Little Mac. Also, she for some reason thinks that being able to transform into a flaming skulled, flying motorcycle riding, bad guy beating up unicorn will make him seem less cool to him. Even if she's blinded to how suicidal it is to track down the Ghost Rider, she has to understand that the Ghost Rider is extremely cool, awesome, and radical.
Why didn't Big Mac ask Agent Bentgrass for help in finding the demon? I think Bentgrass would be very interested in the fact that a demon is hanging around Ponyville probably plotting something, and the Ghost Rider doesn't seem to be getting anywhere on his own. Bentgrass has got the resources and intelligence to provide aid.
well that just happened.
FUCKIN CALLED IT! Knew that she loved Mac! (MacDash is Best Ship)
5094852 You know it!
Yes
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She attacked a dragon head on. Whom are known to quite possibly eat ponies. Also she's fought crazy shit like Discord, Tirek (maybe?), Nightmare Moon... why would another demon be a problem? If anything, she wanted to prove his existence, then sic the Elements of Harmony on him.
Also... I think she's gonna warm up to Ghost Rider now, but she's very confrontational when she believes that someone is cool but stealing her place with coolness. RE: Mare-Do-Well. I guess she also has a bad history with vigilantes too.
5095464 Thank you!
FREAKING AWESOME!!! I wasn't expecting them to argue then make love. Wow. This is awesome. I wonder what it is going to be like now. Also I am a big fan of MacDash. Awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter. You did not disappoint me here, at all. Great chapter. Just Great.
5094167 5095464 I'm in agreement with RadicalDisharmony on this one. Rainbow Dash is a character with a history of high competitiveness and impulsiveness. When you add to this feelings of having one of her most important relationships threatened (and women tend to be much more relationship oriented then men), this can go a long way towards explaining any OOC activities in this story.
Well, that escalated quickly!
I saw this coming, but not so fast... or not in that place... re-reading the chapter, to get all the detail!!
5092979 Of course he threaten them. Just because he would wish not to, he will do it if he has to.
5094722 It sure did.
NEED MOAR DAMMIT!!!! ...please?
This is just my opinion but I think that was just a little bit to fast
5216127 Nothing is too fast for Rainbow Dash
5248203 Not when he is always on the move and is only the Rider at night.
That... it... but... the... how...
5248801 But Bentgrass could put him in content anytime he wanted to and test his theory. That would out Wild Blaze as the Rider.
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Bentgrass could try to escalate things, sure. Although testing his theory would involve jailing a pony for no reason that would make any sense to anypony else, and he was already on very thin ice with Twilight and Applejack as it was. Bentgrass may have been bluffing, since his only piece of evidence was Wild Blaze's arrival at roughly the same time as the new pattern of murders. Or perhaps Mac could have convinced GR to stay dormant for a night just to break Bent's case and get him off their back.
I'm just saying, the case on him was paper-thin, and admitting to being the murdering demon (without explaining how little control he had over it) seemed a lot more likely to escalate matters dangerously than keeping up the charade.
But I guess it all worked out in the end.
5252188 Well remember, Bentgrass has a lot of power from Celestia herself. He has the ability to detain anypony that he believes to have conceptions to the Ghost Rider. It goes with how police can contain a suspect for 72 hours without having a reason.
I will explain soon why surprising the Rider is a bad idea.
5252243
I don't really think that needs to be explained, but it's good to see you're still working on this. It's pretty good!
Well... Damn! I was wondering when this was gonna happen!
I did NOT see that coming.
The rider likes watching ponies riding other ponies. Might explain why he was so insistent on mac getting it on.
Well that came out of fuckin nowhere.
...What the fuck was that ending.
"Fuck all character development up to this point, sexytimes yaaaay!"
Why did you make this into a ship fic? WHY?! It was going so well and then you said "FUCK character development, tiem 4 secks!"
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What, you didn't see it coming? How Rainbow was so worked up about Blaze, because he reminded her of Mac? I called it when they first got in conflict. And besides, a romance can easily be played into a good storyline. The way it was done shows it was probably meant as a side line, with random little snippets and reminders in the future. That said, I'm totally guessing here, so if I'm wrong, please don't kill me.
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6651987 Ghost rider blush confirmed
why can i image the ride clopping to them in the mirror
7478906 I SEE IT TOO!!!!!!!!!! WTF!?!?!?!?!?
7478906
*riders head catches on fire*
"Hawt."