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Finally, Blackheart vs the Rider. I have been waiting for this for a long time. Love the story, looking forward to more!
KICK HIS ASS ZARATHOS! SHOW THIS UPSTART WHAT A TRUE HELL LORD DOES TO MONGRELS!
KO awesome chapter, Discord had put up a good fight to Blackheart until he played his trump card and turn the table around. Blackheart seems unstoppable in his true demonic form until the arrival of the Ghost Ridder, let see how this battle will turn out.
why is this not popping up in my library. I could have sworn I was tracking.
Nice fucking chapter. Keep it up
Oh boy, Blackheart is about to get rekted!!!
Really good chapter. It's nice to see Discord in action. Yes he lost but he did still show that the spirit of chaos is not a push over. It also helps give a power scale to illustrate were creatures like the ghost rider and blackheart stand again established power houses like Discord. Look forward to seeing what comes next.
I doubt Discord will be gone for long. You can no more kill him than you can make the sky boil or set the oceans aflame.
can't wait to see big mac kick black hart's ass
huh... Well, as much as I would like to think Big Mac is going to be the one to save the day, I have a feeling that everything is going exactly like the devil planned, he's going to swoop in at the last second (maybe right before GR and BM are killed) and he is going to send his son back home just before finishing all of his child's work and opening the gates of hell. I mean, he did offer Big Mac his soul back, you know... the one in hell...
Actually, now that I think about it. The contract the devil gave Big Mac is probably legit, but Ghost Rider would probably kill Big Mac if he got his soul back.
Nice chapter. I also like you made Twilight a mortal Alicorn. And that the true demons are way out of her league.
No flame consumes darkness like the blaze of Hellfire.
Sweet Mother of Luna... Mind = blown...
7672482 Magic or imagination
Go suck a dick Blackheart
I'm so glad Ghost Rider is my thing right now. And now I'm all caught up with this story!
More!!!
I seriously can't wait until Big Mac reveals himself to everyone! That's gonna be epic!!!
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read in two sittings,and i would love to see this end, the climax is here!
7733478 she is being massively unlikable
well. this has been quite a ride. I finally got around to reading this story just as the last chapter is being written. or perhaps second to last; the way you've been writing suggests we'll get an epilogue of some sort. something to deal with the actual emotional character interaction after all the blood and gore.
we still need to know if celly survived, and discord too. oh, and more minor characters like spike, rumble, and bentgrass.
I do like the way you've written each character. each has strengths and weaknesses beyond what we see in the show. the ponies are not completely outmatched by the demons and are able to fight back... for a time.
a complaint: as good as the story is, it's a bit obvious that you do not have a copy editor... possibly even a regular editor. the grammar in some places actually takes me out of the story, I have to stop and decipher it. plus some spelling errors.
a suggestion: I don't think we've heard how fluttershy and braeburn met. I can only assume it was a while ago, maybe about the time applejack met soarin, and that fluttershy was just... shy. it would be nice to hear, but the only way I can imagine that happening is if either she or braeburn dies.
finally, I just have to ask...
WHO THE HELL IS BENTGRASS A REFERENCE TO?! god, I've been wracking my brain trying to figure it out. I can only come up with two possibilities: John Constantine is one, but that's only because I just watched the episode of Arrow he guest starred on. The other is Aloysius Pendergast, a character from novels by Douglas Preston and Lincoln Child. I find this more likely, as Pendergast 1) has a similar name; 2) has a similar description as being tall and pale with piercing eyes; 3) behaves similarly, with a carefree and blunt but polite assholeness; and 4) is also a government agent. if that is all a coincidence, I will be very surprised.
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I thought Bentgrass was someone's OC that he borrowed and made it a point to thank the creator at some point. But, I could be confusing this for a different story.
Before I read this, what is the Gore and Dark tag for ?
Great writing style only a few grammer problems overall. Read this whole story in 2 days. Best choice of my life. Keep up the great writing and happy hollidays
7821332 I get very brutal in a few chapters... including the first. Attempted rape, lots of murder with chains. Combine Punisher and Spawn.
7890665 Hope you enjoy the rest of the story
Please, continue.
Yep, this fight sure was awesome.
It's just that I kinda hate these kind of battles.
Guy is getting his Ass handed to him, nothing he can do ... but then he suddenly powers up and becomes absoloutly unbeatable.... it just doesn't make sense to me, especially at the God like Level those were already fighting.
And now I find i even harder to believe that the Ghost Rider that was not anywhere near this League is suddenly supposed to beat Blackhearth.
AHHHH YEAH, Ghost rider is back!!!