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wow... that was sad
but sad in a good way...
this seems interesting, i will have a look to this
5290054 *Slaps self* This is why the person with a LD in Written Expression should not want to be a writer! Thank for pointing that out! I hope you enjoyed the rest of the story!
Wow. That's intense. I guess now we know how Mac got the Ghost Rider and the Bike. I wonder what is gonna a happen next. With the pentagram almost don't it can't be just a cowinceance. Thanks for this great update.
It is most definitely cruel. She only has a single closet of those things you know!
5290628 Just wait till chapter 3 and 7
Wow, Rainbow really knows how to go with the flow... interesting chapter. Poor Granny Smith, but everyone makes mistakes... Does the contract says anything about how long does one has to be the rider? And seriously, nobody ever reads contracts?
Everyone knows that if you have to sign in with blood is not good at all... It's a creepy pasta rule or something!
Next please!
5290812 You have not gotten to the good parts yet
Mephisto is a dick, though you're probably not using the Marvel version.
5290740 Do you read the contract when you are downloading stuff online?
*yawns* 5:30am and just now finishing. Well, I have to say I am enjoying this. Your writing style does improve as the chapters go on and I just love how you're making the Ghost Rider your own. The relationship between him and Mac is both amusing and...sad.
Over all, the main advise I'd give for you is work on using different words and descriptions. Too often I saw something being described the same way three or four times in just a few paragraphs. As well as repetitive word choices. It can be a little distracting.
As for the current plot, I'm interested to see where it goes. Who is this demon The Rider felt, will AJ learn who Blaze really is? What's the task Bleeding Heart will want done? With out a doubt I am drawn in and invested. Needless to say I will be reading more!
PS: Damn man, your action scenes could not be more gruesome! You write Ghost Rider fighting way better than most of the official comics do. It's like....Ghost Rider but with Spawn's tactics and Punisher's body count! I so approve
5291724 nope
5292152 Want to become one of my editors?
5292491 Oh wow, umm...I honestly don't know. Truthfully I've never really edited anything before and I'd be absolutely terrible with spotting any spelling or grammar issues. Most I could offer would be alternative wording and/or description suggestions. But, if you wanna take a chance on me, I'd certainly be willing to do my best.
Just PM me whenever on how it'll work and let me know if there's anything in particular I should do
Dash just wants the D
5291724 I do read it, and my bank contract too, the cellphone, and my 3Ds update agreement!
What? If I didn't read it how would I know what do they cover for repair and stuff
I love the fact that the Devil was poking fun at him for not reading the contract, but didn't actually give him a chance to read it.
But Jesus, your Ghost Rider Origin was the greatest Super hero/Super villian origin I've ever seen/read! Even better then Sandman's in Spiderman 3 and I loved that one!
Wonder how Rainbow will take this. I'm sure she'll be a bit angry but, all in all, I don't think Mac was too selfish. In his situation I think I'd be desperate enough to try anything to save someone like a mother to me. Ya never really know until you're in the moment.
Another great chapter and I look forward to the next.
I dunno, that deal could've been much worse. An extra year of life for Granny Smith, and then super powers. Granted, psychotic and uncontrollable super powers that put you on the run from the law, but still. If Mr. Devil hadn't been laughing at Granny's burning to death, he could have totally presented that as a fair shake.
Though I'm still a little weirded out by Rainbow Dash's thought process in the previous chapter:
Follow murderous demon >
Catch murderous demon turning into guy you hate >
Follow guy you hate - who is a murderous demon - back to his hotel room to spy on him >
Guy you hate who is murderous demon turns out to be long-dead brother of best friend >
Confront long-dead brother of best friend about not being dead >
Find out that long-dead brother, who is also a murderous demon and a guy you hate, does not want to return to his family, and for all you know has deliberately and permanently abandoned them >
>>> Sexy times
5295172 All will make sense soon.
5292760 True dat
5295172 5295180 They start dating and Dash gets angry at Mac for 'looking at other damned souls.'
5295172
I will say it once, and never again: PORN LOGIC
5307492 You mean CLOP logic
5307492
Considering that porn logic operates on a level just barely below comic book logic... that's actually a reasonable take on it.
Fair enough, then.
5307939 Not sure if I should be insulted or not.
5312788
That depends on how dearly you hold the basic tenets of comic book fiction.
5312901 Very... I know more about comics than ponies
5312909
Then you should be very offended, and I should stop posting now.
5312927 I'm joking. I am just glad you like the story
so when should i look forward to reading chapter 13
5314580 Don't know
5292152 fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/064/4/f/gunslinger_spawn_and_western_ghost_rider_by_nimprod-d5x39wd.png
5316833 .....that is easily the coolest thing I've seen all week!
All caught up! Badass origin story here man. Loving it!!!
5409015 Glad you like it. Chapter 13 is giving me trouble, but I should be done soon
For a movie crossover I think you nailed it in every way possible, 10/10 By far my favorite story.
5444803 I'm going for a comic book crossover lol
5445138 It was 3 in the morning when I wrote that, sorry lel
Don't stop writing this awesome story!
5481507 Umm... what does that cave to do with caribou slaughter? Lol
5481537 I said it was a bad time because it don't
5481537 I said it was a bad time because it don't
Granny smith's death feels kinda like a final destination movie. this is not necessarily a bad thing and I realize that the same thing happened in the canon. but I think the main reason is that mac is there and has to watch it happen.
5486479 I will take your word on that. Never seen those movies
5493735 Not how the Rider/Penance Stare works. When someone is truly sorry for their crime, and have already felt the emotions of guilt and anger at themselves they are considered pure by the Ghost Rider. Its those who don't repent for their crimes, who keep doing evil, and cause harm that the Rider will go after.
And there is my internal comic book nerd.
I have never been so eager to read a new chapter from a story in my life, this is at the top of my favorites.
5497155 I am glad. Parts of chapter 13 are done, I am just trying to get a one-shot out and work on Auction.
No really, Rainbow's lying with the pony who's murdered others in unspeakably awful ways for the next five years, and she isn't even a little... surprised?
Wowww. Either she's stupid or.... no, i'm going with stupid.
And you'd think the devil would have some form of honor. I mean, Mac didn't sell his soul, it was an accident.
If the Devil is an alicorn in this world, than who is Celestia and Luna here, besides rulers of a country and an orbital maintenance crew?
Why did I get downvote for asking a legit question?