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Now that's a fight.
KO awesome chapter and fight, hope The Ghost Rider will take care of the boss once and for all.
You have no idea how great it is that the mortal Shining Armor and the other ponies were able to beat Sombra who has been buffeted by the powers of hell to make him both resistant to death and even more powerful. I was expecting him to have to be saved by the Rider, not them being able to handle it themselves.
Only minor gripe is:
I am not worshippy enough of Twilight to agree that where Shining folds like cheap tissue paper she would have succeeded wildly. She's powerful, she's versatile, and I don't doubt that if she was sent there with the Elements she would win, or possibly even herself with backup she would have won, but I don't think she's basically superhero power and Shining is just "pretty good." She may be stronger than he is, but not to the point where Sombra, who clearly outclasses Shining's solo magical power and martial prowess would be outclassed by Twilight.
BURN.
6871487 It was more about the last chapter when Sombra said he would make Twilight his wife
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Oh! Oh from that perspective.
Yes, that is a perfectly appropriate thing to say, instead.
Sorry it's... been a while, and I let my assumptions get the best of me.
And you know what they say when you assume. Sometimes you're wrong.
Hmm, General Patton
Awesome. Thanks for the great update.
Damn this is awesome Cap!! Keep up the awesome work man I faved this story cuz it's so badass
6871491 Oh yeah. Sick burn!
This chapter has sealed this fics position in my Warrior Files and Best of the Best shelves. Truly, an outstanding chapter!
6872535 Everything in this story has s point. It not be revealed right away, or till the next two stories but it will all come together
Dayumn son, sombra got beat down and the ghost rider has an even match this should gooooood!
I got De Ja Vu then realities it's because I'd already read most of this chapter, fuck my life
6872418 I hope you have something for Princesses next chapter lol
*Eagerly awaits the next chapter*
Oh God! This chapter...It's so epic!
I love that Shining Armour, Flash and Ironhide were the ones who took down Sombra. It's shows their own badass-ness and really highlights how important the Royal Guard are to protecting Equestria and isn't some sort of joke. They are highly trained, military personal and fight for their country with all they have and then some!
And that ending. I feel kind of bad, the undead horde are really outmatched here!
I assume Fin Fang Foom and Ghost Rider's battle is next? I can't wait!
Great job as always Cap!
Of course you have to go for the decapitation. Hasn't anypony here seen Highlander?
Nice battle. Too bad Sombra didn't think to bring more hellspawn along with actual names and lines; he could have used a bit more support back there.
6877542 Is there no pleasing you? Lol
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It's not that I want the bad guys to win...
But I do like when they make a good showing.
Sombra must be pretty embarrassed that he didn't last long enough to get taken down by Ghost Rider or the Princesses themselves.
It's nice to hear you believe the story will be completed in five chapters. I did get a little disinterested in this one because of the perspective shift from earlier chapters. I don't particularly like Shining Armor or Flash Century taking over the role of lead character, because I would have much rather seen the OC investigator's perspective and preferably participating in the fight. After all, it seems a bit jarring to have Shining Armor take over the story, especially with Flash Century literally just showing up.
They're good characters, but it's like there is a tonal shift in the last third of the story. And, I'm sad to say, that's usually the kind of Michael Bay or Cloverfield post climax moment of disappointment where you just sort of stop caring anymore. Granted, I like the story and characters, I just suspect you want to make a big splash at the end. After all, when it comes to action you want the blockbuster to take out the german stronghold not feed a tank of gasoline to a shark and hope it lights up... because that's the moment where you either get sharknado chum or make the most boring movie in the world so totally epic you never have to worry about directing a sequel.
6883764 Don't worry, the Rider will take the lead again.
Great Story! I wonder how the rider will respond to being in the presence of Luna. I wonder if any of the darkness still remains in her soul with what she did as Nightmare Moon.
New chapters. Why you no out yet?
I'm sorry, but I just couldn't take Sombra seriously in this fight. There was just way too much dialogue and posturing. Plus, there was hardly any build up for any of the characters in the fight, so I just couldn't bring myself to care about them.
Is Genral Ironhide modled after the Gret Genral Patton?
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Yes he is