• Published 3rd Mar 2014
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In Blood We Stand - UniqueSKD



After many years of searching, Scootaloo meets the murderer of her parents; a monster more evil, more terrifying, than anything she's ever known - and it calls itself, 'Human'.

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In Blood We Stand - Face To Face

In Blood We Stand

Part One - Face To Face

By UniqueSKD

The air felt tense, the wind a cold chilled breeze brushing against Scootaloo's body, flicking strands of her cerise mane from her face, her grayish-purple eyes staring at the abomination before her, hers locked with its, both expressing a deathly glare to each other. The world almost seemed to have stopped moving, frozen in time, save for the slight swaying of the trees as they were moved by the currents of the wind. As of this moment, in this time and place in the Everfree Forest, the only living things were the orange pegasus mare, and the dark-clad white monstrosity that stood some several feet in front of her.

The creature was a horrible sight to behold. It was not like anything Scootaloo had ever dreamed or heard of, a beast that she would have once thought to have existed only in the world of fantasy and imagination, or for want of a better and more appropriate term, a nightmare. It stood tall and straight, easily towering over Scootaloo by at least a few feet, on two legs covered by black cloth, its thighs wrapped with bloody bandages. It had a lean, muscular build to its figure, which showed through a white vest underneath another layer of black cloth covering its body. The creature had a pair of long arms that jutted out from the sides of its body, its forearms - like its thighs - also wrapped in bloody bandages. A strap draped around the creature's body, fastening to a large leather sheathe on its back. The creature had one hand laid cautiously upon the grip handle of the sword contained inside of it, ready to draw it out the moment it decided it needed to.

But it was the creature's face that captivated Scootaloo the most, though not particularly for a good reason. Its face was so un-pony-like, no muzzle, and much smaller ears. Its chin had a few shaded wisps of hair clinging to it, and a scratch mark ran down along its cheek, the beginning of the mark starting beneath one of its small eyes, which held a cold and uncaring expression. Its mane, if anypony could call it a 'mane', was short in length, unkempt and black, that seemed to only darken in color further towards the back of its head. Its features looked worn, as would be expected of anything exposed to the effects of time, but did not appear weary or so old yet that it couldn't react if need be.

Pegasus and creature stand there, together, face to face. As still as living statues, staring into the eyes of the other. After a while, it was Scootaloo who finally broke the silence, the sound of her voice shattering the muteness into thousands of metaphorical fragments.

"I've found you", the orange mare said, her voice cold as a chill along the spine, her words venomous as a manticore's tail stinger. She took a few steps towards the creature, who remained still, frozen to his spot. "After all these years, I've finally found you."

The creature gave the slightest hint of a smirk, his cold eyes fixated upon Scootaloo. But it said nothing. It did nothing. Not so much as even twitch a muscle.

Scootaloo narrowed her eyes, irritated that the creature had not given her a proper response. But she kept her calm and took another few steps forward towards the creature, albeit slowly this time. Don't show it fear. This thing wants you to show fear. That's how it gets you, Scootaloo told herself in her mind.

She kept her eyes fixed on the creature at all time, being cautious of how it may react to anything she did. She knew not what this foul beast was, but she knew that this thing could be unpredictable. It was unlike any other predators she had known of. A manticore would roar before it attempted to slash its prey with its claws, and a timberwolf would stalk its victims before striking. With this beast, however, who knew what it was capable of, besides what Scootaloo knew of already.

After all, this had not been her first encounter with the creature. But she was determined to make it her last.

Scootaloo spoke up again, her voice harboring anger in its tone this time, her eyes narrowing as she glared at the still beast. "Tell me who you are, and what the hell you are."

The creature, again, made no reply, nor did it react in any way. It simply gave a slight smirk, and remained still.

Scootaloo grew tired of this silent game. She took one more step towards the beast, slamming her hoof down onto the ground, baring her teeth. "Answer me, you bastard! I know you understand me!"

The creature smirked again, but its grin was much wider this time, that Scootaloo caught a glimpse of its teeth, molars and incisors lightly stained yellow. Scootaloo allowed herself a second of thought, of a dentist she knew of back in Ponyville, whom, the orange pegasus mused, would likely have a hell of a field day working to correct were she given the opportunity.

But that thought was cast aside no sooner than it had formed in her head, when the creature gave a reply. "I do understand you, little pony", the creature spoke in a rough and deep voice, and with a mocking tone to it, "but do you understand" - it raised its arm, and pointed a finger to itself - "me?"

Scootaloo was able to keep herself from taking a step back out of surprise, having been caught off guard by the sound of the creature's voice. She quickly regained her composure, and stood her ground, her gaze remained locked with her foe's own.

The creature obviously noticed Scootaloo's surprise, however, as it chuckled darkly, and let its arm drop back to its side. "Are you surprised to hear my voice again, little pony?", the creature asked, raising an eyebrow and grinning widely. "It's been a long time, hasn't it?" its eyes quickly looked Scootaloo up and down, as if it was sizing her up.

"It's been twenty years, you low-life scum," Scootaloo exclaimed. "Twenty years since you took my family from me. Because of you, I wound up in a shitty orphanage! Every night I went to sleep and saw your face! You took my childhood AND my parents, you bastard!"

Scootaloo lowered her head, trying to fight the urge to close her eyes as she felt a flood of tears about to come, the memory of that horrific event flashing in her mind. She couldn't allow her emotions to cost her this one chance. The moment she took her eyes off the creature, she knew that would be all it needed to either make its escape...or see to it that she couldn't either.

Scootaloo took a deep breath to calm her nerves, and continued. "I've wasted my life away just to find you. Now that you're here, I want answers. After everything you've done to me, you owe me at least that much."

The creature actually seemed thoughtful of that request for a few moments, its eyes shifting to the side as it pondered. Eventually, it smiled, and removed its hand from the hilt of the sword, letting its arm drop to its side. It raised its other arm and gestured to Scootaloo. "So be it," the creature replied. "One of your kind deserves to know my story, I suppose." It pointed a thin finger at the pegasus. " You may ask me whatever you want. After that...well, we'll cross that bridge when we come to it, shall we?" A dark chuckle escaped the creature's throat.

Scootaloo raised an eyebrow, unsure whether or not this was a ruse, a trick to make her drop her guard. The creature took notice of this, and raised its arms up. "Go ahead. Ask me whatever you want. I give my word I won't kill you." It paused for a moment, before adding, "at least not yet, anyway."

Scootaloo, still unsure whether to trust it or not, decided to give it the benefit of the doubt, but stretched her wings out just in case it decided to try and make a move. She hoped she'd be able to fly fast enough if it should do anything.

Scootaloo cut straight to her first question, determined to get answers at long last. "What in Tartarus are you?" she demanded.

The creature tilted its head up to look to the sky, a dark canvas painted with stars. It inhaled through its nose, and exhaled out from its mouth, before it spoke. "I am a monster, plain and simple, little pony," the creature answered in an emotionless voice, not even looking at Scootaloo. "But I'm not just one of the many monsters that your kind wishes were existent in the realm of your dreams. No, I'm the monster your kind fears more than anything you could possibly imagine. I and my kind are the bogeymen that you all used to pray never lurked beneath your bed, or hid in your closets at night. But the terrible truth is that I and my kind are indeed very real. I, we, me, us, are all living walking nightmares, our feet treading upon the earth, our footsteps a trail of poison and destruction."

The creature slowly brought its head down to stare at Scootaloo, whose eyes widened in a momentary display of fright and unease. Its face held no expression, blank and emotionless, as it said its next words almost no louder than a whisper. "I am a Human, and I'm the greatest evil your kind will ever know."

Author's Note:

So, was the story good enough so far to make you want to stick around for the second part?

I certainly hope so. First attempt at something a little darker. Especially for one of the most favored of the CMC.

Also, a quick shout-out to all my loyal Followers, in particular Rootbeer Dew, Rotorix, Scarheart76, and Praetorius for previewing my story material.

RainbowBob is a sexy mofo, and twidashloverxox is a very lovely lady, and Pizzy1334 is FOOPING AWESOME-SAUCE!

Now love me, fools! Catch you later like the common cold! Unless you're vaccinated, in which case...er....I got nothing. Sorry.

- UniqueSKD
(The Brony Fool)

P.S - Waffles and Muffins for life, son! WORD!

Comments ( 32 )

YES! YES!
MOAR! :flutterrage:

4026257 I trust you read the Author's Note? XD I'll do the next chapter soon. Promise.

Meh human bashing...:ajbemused:

I, we, me, us, are all living walking nightmares, our feet treading upon the earth, our footsteps a trail of poison and destruction."

I know it's meant to be an inclusion of all humans, but really, you didn't need to add the "me" and "us". It's a bit redundant. Keeping it at "I, we," would have been fine.

That being said, did anyone else imagine this in anime form? I was honestly picturing an anime character while I was reading this. Somewhere along the lines of Zangetsu from Bleach.

4027794
One - Humanity...kinda is redundant.

Two - You son of a bitch, the 'anime' was my original intent! XD Now that you've said it, I kinda see my story in the form of an anime now. Cool...

4026905
Hey, you fucker! You better clean that vomit up before someone slips in that shit!

I hit the read later, I'll read it and tell you what I thought! Did you get the image I PMed you?:applejackunsure:

Typical pretentious misanthropy. Nothing to see here.

4028995 Meh. Can't please everyone.

CONTINUE OR I'LL GO TO YOU'RE HOUSE ND WHOOP YO ASS MOFO

4030615 I would hope not! What sort of mother would call their kid a 'fucker'? XD

4030736

Yours.

Sorry, that was uncalled for.

4030505 I don't know...I seem to have gained some dislikes from the public...I wouldn't want to annoy anyone else with my awful writing...

Ah, fuck it! If I annoy someone, I annoy someone! Simple and plain.

Anyways, am I following you yet? No? Well, I better correct that right away, friend! Thanks for giving a little of your time to read my awful shit. It is very much appreciated!

4030746 Hey, hey, s'all good, mate. Lots of people in the world has called me a 'fucker', most of the time simply because I have ADHD, and other times just for the sake of calling me a name.

Don't worry about it, mate. You're entitled to your opinions of my story, I wouldn't deny you the freedom of mind and speech. Just so long as you have a reason to dislike it, that's all I'd really ask for.

I'm not the greatest writer in the world, and I don't and won't claim to be. I just try my best and hope that at least one person will like my crap.

So, no ill feelings or grudges against you, mate. We're cool. Just please don't go spreading stuff like that on other people's stories, okay?

Okay. Peace out to ya, friend. Have a follow, on the house!

4030775
Well, since you asked so nicely, I wont. Here, have a like and a favorite to compensate.

4030807 Well, if you want to, that's fine. But please don't do so out of pity, or feel as though you owe me for something. You were just voicing your dislike, though you could have put it a little more...simpler, to be honest. I seriously am not like those writers who bitches if people don't like their stuff - we all have our own tastes and preferences in material, right? You might not like this story, but other people might, so whether you didn't like it or not would have been irrelevant to me.

But since you've changed your mind, you have my thanks and gratitude. I hope we can put this behind us and try to be friends, or at least be on better terms with one another.

Can we do this, friend?

4030991 Great to hear, mate! I hope you've got some good stories for me to read! I'll check out your content tomorrow. I'm British, so its midnight over here at my end.

I'll just leave you with this and bid you a good day or night, wherever you are, mate!

Straight from the UniqueSKD YouTube channel! If you have a YouTube account, send me a link to it in a PM and I'll up your Subscribers count for ya!

4029423
Well, at least you take things in stride, I can respect that.

4031261 Well, I've no right to tell other people what they have to like and dislike. I mean, if people don't like this story, then that's their choice. I'm not going to grovel and beg them to change their minds, because they are entitled to their preferences and tastes in writing material. So long as they dislike my material fairly and without the intent to cause trouble, I'm not bothered at all if my shit gets favored or not.

Besides, every dislike only gives me a reason to try and improve my work. I'm not the best writer in the world, and I doubt I ever will be. But while there is at least ONE person who thinks I'm worth the time and energy to check out, that's all that matters to me.

Complaining about people not liking your stuff won't solve the matter. It's pointless. You just have to take the bad with the good, and try again next time, and give it all of your very best.

Wouldn't you agree with me on this?

4033318
Yeah, of course. Wasn't the writing itself that irked me, your style is competent and clear. Genre, I suppose, the whole "zomg humens r teh ebil" shtick. I can't get behind it. But I could've just moved on instead of leaving a shitty comment. It didn't really succeed in anything, other than making me look like an ass.

Props to your patience, guy.

4033724 No, no, no, it's really honestly okay. I mean, yes you COULD have moved on, but you didn't. The fact that you at least gave the story a chance is decent enough of you. Nah it's all cool between us, brother-from-a-different-mother. XD We're cool.

And patience has nothing to do with it. I just accept whatever I get. I know there's hundred and hundreds of people on this site who can write better stuff than my crap, but it doesn't keep me from trying my best.

That's all we can do, isn't it? We just have to try our best, and if we fail, we can hold our heads up high knowing we can walk away without regret. So no your comment doesn't bother me. I still appreciate that you gave my story the benefit of the doubt, so you have my thanks and gratitude for that. Cheers to you, and I hope you have a good day or evening, wherever in the world you are.

4033754
And a good 24-hour interval to you, sir!
(But I'm on the East coast of the states, so it's noon as I write this).

4033807 Thanks, friend. Have a video to laugh at. And yes - That guy IS me.

Yeah, don't ask. Just smile, nod your head, and accept what you just saw. XD

Anyway, power to you, mate!I'm off to work on my next animation for my channel! Peace!

I think that the ratio of almost 1-4 is a good indication that we liked it, and want more....

4033881 That actually is some really good dancing.I can't say I dance well.At least you can.

4033881
*raises eyebrow*
Those goggles are questionably shiny. Like tin-foil.


Wishing for tinfoil.

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